Why Is There Something Wrong with My Style as Lucario?

First person Everyone else has to check in here (๑òᆺó๑) _(•̀ω•́ ∠)_(ﾟωﾟ) (* ￣ー￣)

In terms of skills, there are things like Bone Club Beating, Sword Dance, Double Return, Quick Defense, and the ninth generation can also learn Speed, like Survival from a desperate situation, if there are teammates to help, See Through, Life Drops, etc., You can also consider

It's okay, it's very nice. I won't write about Pokémon in the future, but I didn't say that I won't be a Pokémon in the future (

Author, I read a few books you wrote before and decided to publish a small illustrated book. You should... Not care, right? Name: Bubble Tang Ethnicity: Author Attribute: Tangzi series Characteristics: The protagonists are all Tangzi Skills: Writing If there's anything missing, please reply and help me fill it in.

Although the writing style needs to be improved, the plot setting is okay and the setting is very novel. As a platinum-level novel bookworm for seven years, I only express my expectations for you from my personal point of view ^ω^ I hope you can write better and better. I think Bone Strike Yiqi can be added?

Happy birthday, Bubble, may everything go well and make a fortune!

The biggest problem is that the connection between the two large chapters is a bit stiff and lacks transition. The previous daily routines were well written, but the foreshadowing was too deliberate and blunt. Some people used ink too thickly, while others did not describe it. The writing of the subsequent war is a bit off, giving people the feeling that it is deliberately cruel, but always skimps on the number of dead, which always feels a bit one-sided. Personally, I think that at the end, we can talk about some memories of the blind girl and Zi Ding, or talk about the experience of the orphanage where she was born during the war; we can also talk about the battle on the hidden front represented by the intelligence officer; we can also talk about the impressions of Lin Xiao's surviving comrades on Lin Xiao to enrich the image; we can even dig deeper into the story line of the Bai brothers from Bai Ji's surviving teammates; and the description of the post-war reconstruction work is also valuable. In short, it is necessary to describe the cruelty of war from multiple angles and aspects. Don't cut it lightly, but cut it to the real point. Create beautiful things, then destroy them for people to watch, and let people remember them from the fragments. I look forward to what happens next with this book. Waiting for nothing.

It's quite good-looking. The characters have their own personalities. The plot is also exciting and interlocking. It's quite interesting. The disadvantage is that it's a bit unfinished at the end. Overall, it's good. It's just that there's a bit of a knife in the back. If you're emotionally sensitive and you watch it, you might feel a little sad. There are a lot of friends who died in the end. First of all, Purple. Ding, then Lin Meng's brother Lin Xiao, then Bai Ji Baizhu, and finally Lin Meng's captain Zhao Zhuo. If you look at it as a substitute, it makes people feel a little sad. Lin Meng looks like a dull boy, super cute. Lucario has become a nanny. I personally feel that it is not bad. If you have nothing to think about, you can watch it. Highly recommended [Like]

Overall it's okay╮(￣▽￣)╭ but the author could ask if there could be less Lily quotes in the later stage? It means that you can touch the heroine, but don't say some weird words, otherwise it will feel a bit embarrassing for me as a man←_←And I am looking forward to whether there will be Lucario's super evolved form in the later stage?

It can be added to a mega evolution, from special abilities or the same frequency as Lin Meng, that is, the tacit understanding value is high to a certain extent, resulting in the waveguide being on the same frequency and super evolving.

I'm here again to see how this one goes [laughs] Following Tang Ziqiu, Tang Zichi's another Pokémon book If tomatoes are compared to a big universe, then each novel is a parallel universe, and each reader is an explorer or traveler traveling through the universe, and each author is a guide or tour guide for these people. What the author has to do is to take readers to explore the scenery and features of these worlds, so that readers can feel the unique charm of this world, and then reap the rewards from readers' evaluations and rewards, which is remuneration.

Very pretty (´｡✪ω✪｡｀) The protagonist becomes Lucario and he follows a very, very cute loli to defeat invincible opponents in the world. In short, it is a fun journey. Anyway, I enjoyed watching it anyway, so I'll just give it a five-star rating. And this is Bubble Gum's new book, it's unjustifiable without a five-star review [Thinking] [Like] I'll go, I have to do another follow-up review, but I don't know why the score is still so low. Although it has gone from 7:4 to 8.0, This book is at least 9:00 in my heart. Not to mention 9.6, 9.5, 9.8 Or less, it is probably 9.3 [Thinking] [Like]

I said that the more I read, the more familiar this writing style became. It turned out to be you! I've read your Pikachu book from beginning to end. It is one of the few novels that I have read from beginning to end. [Laugh]

Coming from Tang Ziqiu, I like this kind of subject very much. The author writes the battles very well, but he keeps leveling up and fighting, and I feel a little tired after reading it. Also, the author really doesn't describe the appearance of the dog very much! It's a pity that I didn't feel the handsomeness of the dog.

It's a very good book. Lucario could have more skills. For example, in Pokémon, there are quite a lot of Pokémon skills. It can't be compared with the beast-control style. After all, Pokémon mainly has many skills and a wide range of attacks.

I really like Lucario. I have two black backs at home, one is named Lucario and the other is named Oulu. Come on author! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I found that when reading a book, you must not read the reviews and ratings first, otherwise you will be confused by these and not want to read it. You still have to read it yourself. What you think is good is the most important thing.

It's good to read, but some people find fault with it, so that's why the rating is so low. Looking at those people who rated it with one or two stars, most of them read it for 30 minutes, about an hour or two hours. Well, the rating is a bit arbitrary because I didn't see the back part. Anyway, personally, there's no big problem. It's pretty good.

All I can say is... There's nothing poisonous about it, it's so good that it explodes! The book about changing Pokémon is either discontinued or discontinued. I hope the author can work hard and stick to it✊

Come on, author, will the main character grow taller?

It's quite good. Halfway through, I realized that I had also read the author's previous book [laughing]

The whole book is humorous and rich in content. The protagonist grows up slowly. It is not a cool novel. The system settings are also novel. The characters in the text are also very rich in personality. There are no poisonous points. There are 38 chapters of exclusive skill wave missiles.

It's beautiful, and the flowers are finished! ! ! It's just a little short but the story is complete and organized! ! ! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention]

It's really good, but it's just a new book and needs more updates. Come on, author!

Good-looking, good-looking, healthy, good-looking, good-looking, good card

Come on, author! I haven't read such a good novel in a long time. The plot and combat are very coherent. It's just that my sister-in-law is having a hard time (crazy hint)

Lucario, this system is not very reliable...😅😅😅

The dog has won my heart, the bucket is so cute, and the skills are very innovative [smile]

Yes, I was a bit discouraged at first, but the more I watched, the more I got excited [Blow a kiss] Even if it's finished hastily

I think the second one is a cat that is more appropriate, such as Zeraora [laughing][laughing][laughing]