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Give yourself a thumbs up! I also recommend a book called "Eternal Game", which was also written by me. Really good, very beautiful

Quite good, incomparably beautiful. I speculate that the empress and Luo Shenxue are not the same person. The protagonist has a very high IQ, and the female protagonist also has a very high IQ. In this day and age, it is very difficult to find a novel that is not brainless. When I first watched it, I thought it was a clichéd story, but after watching it, I found that every step was reasonable. There was an explanation for why the male protagonist Bao Bao helped Yue Qingyao, and everyone had their own logic of behavior. The characters are not mindless tool men either. And it has a lot of suspense elements. This book is really good to read. I like it. I hope the author will work hard.

I'd give it 4 points. I originally planned to read dozens of chapters before deciding whether to give it to the next 1 point, but seeing that the book's score is very low, I'll give it 5 points first. The single female protagonist is very good. Xia Youyou was a little uncomfortable at first, but it was okay. After all, I am used to thinking of the protagonist as a protagonist when reading novels, not a god, let alone the Almighty King and Neptune. The author has a solid foundation, so you can read it with your brain. So far, there is no plot that offends me. However, things like reincarnation can easily confuse people and make it difficult to distinguish the cause and effect. It is easy to misunderstand if you don't read carefully. The author probably has to spend a lot of effort to correct the problem in the comment area. Finally, I hope that the author will maintain high-quality updates as much as possible, but he cannot be manipulated by readers, let alone make a lot of changes based on the opinions of a small number of readers. After all, people who continue to read generally will not comment.

It looks good, I love watching it, I like watching it. If you have just read this book and you don't think it's good, just hang on; after chapter 30, the foreshadowing will slowly start to show up. This novel reminded me of a novel I read before called Rebirth for 80,000 Years. It was also a rebirth. The female protagonist killed the male protagonist, but all of this was because there was a big situation behind it and she had to do it as a last resort. I estimate that the direction of the plot should be that the empress has feelings for the male protagonist. The complicated look in her eyes when they met for the first time is probably due to the advice of an expert or her own idea, and she is considering whether to implement this plan; what follows is that the ninth life of the male protagonist starts from scratch and grows step by step. The feud with the empress was settled; and as the male protagonist grew up and had the ability to get in touch with things at this level, he discovered that this was actually a game against the male protagonist; the empress made a move to save him, and the two of them finally joined forces to overturn the entire chess game, killing the flag bearer or reaching a reconciliation with the flag bearer.

The writing is quite good, there is no romantic object, only the emotions of the first life are difficult to deal with, it is quite brain-burning. Mostly it will be a single female lead. The author said it is single or double, is it Luo Hele? The author also replied that Luo can appear without Le, which needs to be thought about. There are also many foreshadowings, such as the coffin, which feels not simple, and the killing of the male protagonist seems to be to reincarnate until he returns to the beginning, that is, the first life of the male protagonist, because the timeline of previous lives is running normally and there is no return to the beginning. It's a bit like going back across time to connect with him and change the history of the future. Although being hunted for eight lives is indeed aggrieved and hateful, everything happens for a reason and there is a result, and the truth will tell everything. I don't think the Empress must die or anything. The author goes on to write, which is quite good.

I followed the animation from Douyin. As the author said, the score is definitely above 9.0. This score is definitely abnormal. It cannot be suppressed by others. The plot has ups and downs, the foreshadowing is not missing, the characters' personalities are also very distinct, and now the main line of the world has gradually become clearer. It's a pity that the tomato environment is not good, otherwise the author's book will definitely be a hit. Come on, author.

Holy book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it, and Tiancan Tudou sighed after reading it. This must be one of the four great masterpieces, and it is definitely the number one sacred book in the 21st century. Shengxu is almost lacking in literary talent in front of it! Doubo almost has no connotation in front of it! Zhu Xian almost felt emotional in front of it! Zhe Tian can almost imagine it in front of it! Buddha almost made a plan in front of it! A once-in-a-century classic of online novels

The novel written by the author is so beautiful that my brain has become flexible. It is very interesting to read it from chapter 1 to now. In fact, I have thought about what the ending will be like. The female protagonists Le and Luo are a bit like Wang Yuxin, the person in Tomb of Gods. They should be integrated later. Who to attack is the world's heaven! The same guy who plays chess! It is also possible that the heroine and the hero are playing a big game of chess against someone. The coffin should be the hero's first life. The more I think about it, the more interesting it becomes. The brain cells in my brain are about to burn out. That's all for today. I will follow up every day. I am very much looking forward to the finale. Come on author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It is worth appreciating that the male and female protagonists are both online, and the male protagonist has normal values. Although he has a sense of invincibility brought by rebirth, it is not mindless. The suspense elements of the book make up for this part ٩(๑^o^๑)۶. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is not obvious, but it is still quite sincere. It develops a bit like a suspension bridge effect at the beginning, but it is okay later on. Although the writing style is a bit verbose at times, the plot is still very tight and comfortable to read. Finally, I hope the author can have a satisfactory ending (although there is still a long plot), write more, and be sure to read it.

I feel that the author has written this book very well. From the beginning of the mystery of why Luo Shenxue wanted to hunt down Gu Xianyi, to later why Luo Shenxue is so similar to Yue Qingyao, Gu Xianyi and Luo are so similar, etc., These mysteries have always attracted me. Of course, there are other things that attract me, so I would like to ask you to write more, thank you. In fact, I don't really like reading novels with too long chapters, but since I read this novel, I have been attracted by the mystery in it, starting from the beginning of why Luo Shenxue wanted to hunt down Gu Xianyi. I started reading bit by bit, and unconsciously I was deeply involved in it, unable to extricate myself. Until now, when I counted the chapters, I was shocked that I had already written something like this! There are a total of 419 chapters. I didn't expect that I, a person who doesn't read novels with more than 300 chapters, would make an exception and read so many chapters. I think maybe I like reading this novel too much. So I would like to ask you to update a few more chapters, please? Thanks. You feel that your writing is not good and it is a failure, but I think your writing is very good. The theme of your book is very novel and very beautiful. It ranks among the top three among the dozens of books I have read.

The structure is complete and the content is interlocking. You can see the author's good intentions from chapter to chapter. Being able to fully explain the story according to an idea is already a good achievement. What's more, this book has intricate logical lines. In fact, the author should have received a score of about nine points. The overall reading is still good. It is smooth and fluent, but there are flashbacks in some chapters, which are a bit abrupt. However, this is also the result of the author preparing for the ending. It is difficult to read here (referring to being confused), but the overall flaws are not concealed. I hope that the author can continue to stick to his original intention and go further and further on the road of writing.

This is a novel about solving crimes in the world of immortality. Yes, you read it right. It is about exploring and solving crimes, looking for clues, then speculating, and finally looking for answers. It's like a novel where when I woke up, I was burdened with 40 murder cases!

It's a good book. I don't really read novels. I clicked on it when I saw it in the tweets on the Internet. After reading it for a few days, I found it to be quite interesting, but the content is not enough and it's not satisfying to read [I almost cried] Does the author write every day, so he can change it according to the reader's wishes? [Laughter]

Very good, Qingyao is not that kind of brainless tool heroine, and she is also very clear. Judging from the current plot development, it is natural for her to fall in love with the male protagonist. After the misunderstanding is resolved, the male protagonist also has a crush on her. Now the fate of the two is intertwined. Let's choose her as the heroine. Other female characters can no longer come in. Four stars first, and then five stars will be completed when the two of them get married and have children [Blow kiss]

I started reading it after finishing it, and the overall feeling is good, worth more than nine points. The low rating of this book is due to its low popularity, but it is not incomprehensible. If I really follow up on the update, this book will be more painful to read, because there are too many suspense and pitfalls, and I am afraid that I will lose it as soon as I read it. But now that it is finished, this problem no longer exists, and you can read it with confidence. This book has a single heroine, and there is no bloody plot where the enemy is exonerated and becomes the heroine. Overall, it is very sweet, but the relationship is slowly advanced. There is no large space to describe the daily emotional life of the male and female protagonists, and it is mainly suspense. Okay, now that I'm done, let's talk about some of the imperfections of this book (personal understanding, written for the author to see). First, many people were deceived by the introduction at the beginning, thinking that the woman who chased the protagonist VIII and the person he met in rebirth were the same person (mainly because there are too many types of the same person in online articles, which is actually a very good introduction if placed in the context of a suspense novel), so some people were not optimistic about this book in the early stage, and may have read a few chapters and found it boring and ran away; second, the second volume opened The first volume is a flashback. I was reading the first volume with great enthusiasm. Then the second volume suddenly flashes back. There are a lot of fights and the Riddler. It is difficult to describe the feeling if I think about it. It is written according to the normal timeline (the main story). In fact, the content immediately after the first volume is quite exciting. Thirdly, the protagonist is an idealist and has gone through many twists and turns in order to achieve the final "happy ending". I think this may not be in line with the concepts of most people nowadays (although I quite like it, but the online novel is still an audience problem). All in all, I am very optimistic about the author. The ending of this book is a little sloppy, but all the holes that need to be filled are filled in (maybe there are one or two small issues that were overlooked? For example, Yi Hongluan called the protagonist "Gu", and when the spirit god first met the protagonist (or maybe I overlooked it too quickly)). It's not that the author can't write it, but that the flow of this book is indeed low. I look forward to the author's next work.

It is indeed a very good work in Tomato [laughs]. It made me think in my head for the first time in a long time🤔, but are you sure it is a single girl? The heroine should be Le/Luo, right? I always feel that the emotional line or the causal line of happiness can be described in a more profound way (similar to focusing on advancing the story line and supplementing the emotional line [thinking]). Of course, this is also a little suggestion I see now. I hope some small gifts can help the author to better complete a good work. Come on, author! [Full]

Give the author some ratings. To be honest, Tomato offers free novel reading. This means that everyone doesn't want to read The Riddler. They just want to enjoy it all the way to the end. The recent chapters are obviously being updated slowly. It's not fun to read one chapter a day without talking about torture. Hey, come on, author.

I feel very good at the moment, but the pit is a bit big. Both the male and female protagonists have their brains and the plot is more rigorous. I hope the author will keep working hard. Let me update. The first few chapters are relatively routine, but they expand in the middle. So far, the plot is moving smoothly and there are no logical flaws. It is slowly filling in the pitfalls. If it doesn't collapse later, it will definitely be a good article with high scores.

I like to read stories with single female protagonists. I feel like if they are single female protagonists, I will give them five stars at first, and then I will give them one star if they become multiple female protagonists.

Super good-looking, super invincible and good-looking, super good-looking, super invincible and good-looking, not dragging. Super Invincible God of War novel, invincible, both sides' IQs are online, quack quack quack quack

I have to give it full. There are too many good points to list here one by one. My favorite point is that the author uses emojis to make the text look more realistic. The bad point is simply the update. To be honest, it's a bit difficult to understand the timeline and so on. This kind of novel only suffers from the disadvantages only when it is finished. But it looks good now so I support the author! ! ! I also like this style [love][love][love]

The main point is that the male and female protagonists play games with each other. I won't say anything else. It's always not shown. The general idea is in a certain comment. The last sentence is that before starting the book, you should decide which way to go after odd, even and multiple, instead of watching others decide later. I should have known I wouldn't have come back to see you

The characterization is very good, although the timeline is messy and difficult to understand from the reader's perspective. I have also read a lot of novels. This type is rare and very good. I have read half of it so far, but I still hope that the heroine will still be happy. The messy friendship with some childhood sweethearts really shouldn't be confused with love. If the author sees my comments, don't take it to heart. Please follow your own ideas and don't let the outside world say it. Interference affects your writing mood, otherwise we readers will not be happy to read it. Indeed, this book definitely has a rating of 9.2 Or above. Now it will get higher and higher after 7.7. It is a very good story. I personally like it. The writing style of the article is also good. It is very comfortable to read. It does not feel obscure and difficult to understand. It makes people feel comfortable to read. Although the plot is messy, it is really good if you look closely [laughs]

Although this book sounds a little confusing to me😵, it is very fresh and feels good. I have been listening to it recently. I hope the author can work hard and finish the book without stopping updating. Thank you [send heart][send heart][send heart]

This book is not bad. The setting is similar to "The Mistakes of the Sun and the Moon" by teacher Di Miao Nian. After all, there are still relatively few such ideas. However, the author's handling of the details of the content is not very good. The second-year original comics and the handling of the details of the content are even more detailed. Doesn't stop me from thinking it's a good novel

Very good, the cause and effect is very good. Adding more causes and effects will attract the readers' attention. I hope to update a few more pictures every day and see the ending as soon as possible.

Personally I feel pretty good. Simply put, if you like cultivating immortals, you can watch it. If you like a single female protagonist, you can watch it. If you like it, you can watch it. If you like torture, you can watch it. If you don't have much time, you can read it (it's not long). If you like to prove your thinking, you can read it (I feel there are many places worth discussing and thinking about). The whole cause and effect thing is interesting.

I only gave it five stars after seeing the latest chapter 283.

It's truly a "suspense" fantasy, a rare good article.

It's a very nice book, but it's also a bit mind-numbing. This book has at least a 9.3-9.6 Rating and very few negative reviews. It's true that Tomato is always suffering from this problem. Looking forward to the moment of completion