Ashes of Karma

Give yourself a thumbs up! I also recommend a book called "Eternal Game", which was also written by me. Really good, very beautiful

Quite good, incomparably beautiful. I speculate that the empress and Luo Shenxue are not the same person. The protagonist has a very high IQ, and the female protagonist also has a very high IQ. In this day and age, it is very difficult to find a novel that is not brainless. When I first watched it, I thought it was a clichéd story, but after watching it, I found that every step was reasonable. There was an explanation for why the male protagonist Bao Bao helped Yue Qingyao, and everyone had their own logic of behavior. The characters are not mindless tool men either. And it has a lot of suspense elements. This book is really good to read. I like it. I hope the author will work hard.

I'd give it 4 points. I originally planned to read dozens of chapters before deciding whether to give it to the next 1 point, but seeing that the book's score is very low, I'll give it 5 points first. The single female protagonist is very good. Xia Youyou was a little uncomfortable at first, but it was okay. After all, I am used to thinking of the protagonist as a protagonist when reading novels, not a god, let alone the Almighty King and Neptune. The author has a solid foundation, so you can read it with your brain. So far, there is no plot that offends me. However, things like reincarnation can easily confuse people and make it difficult to distinguish the cause and effect. It is easy to misunderstand if you don't read carefully. The author probably has to spend a lot of effort to correct the problem in the comment area. Finally, I hope that the author will maintain high-quality updates as much as possible, but he cannot be manipulated by readers, let alone make a lot of changes based on the opinions of a small number of readers. After all, people who continue to read generally will not comment.

I followed the animation from Douyin. As the author said, the score is definitely above 9.0. This score is definitely abnormal. It cannot be suppressed by others. The plot has ups and downs, the foreshadowing is not missing, the characters' personalities are also very distinct, and now the main line of the world has gradually become clearer. It's a pity that the tomato environment is not good, otherwise the author's book will definitely be a hit. Come on, author.

The writing is quite good, there is no romantic object, only the emotions of the first life are difficult to deal with, it is quite brain-burning. Mostly it will be a single female lead. The author said it is single or double, is it Luo Hele? The author also replied that Luo can appear without Le, which needs to be thought about. There are also many foreshadowings, such as the coffin, which feels not simple, and the killing of the male protagonist seems to be to reincarnate until he returns to the beginning, that is, the first life of the male protagonist, because the timeline of previous lives is running normally and there is no return to the beginning. It's a bit like going back across time to connect with him and change the history of the future. Although being hunted for eight lives is indeed aggrieved and hateful, everything happens for a reason and there is a result, and the truth will tell everything. I don't think the Empress must die or anything. The author goes on to write, which is quite good.

It looks good, I love watching it, I like watching it. If you have just read this book and you don't think it's good, just hang on; after chapter 30, the foreshadowing will slowly start to show up. This novel reminded me of a novel I read before called Rebirth for 80,000 Years. It was also a rebirth. The female protagonist killed the male protagonist, but all of this was because there was a big situation behind it and she had to do it as a last resort. I estimate that the direction of the plot should be that the empress has feelings for the male protagonist. The complicated look in her eyes when they met for the first time is probably due to the advice of an expert or her own idea, and she is considering whether to implement this plan; what follows is that the ninth life of the male protagonist starts from scratch and grows step by step. The feud with the empress was settled; and as the male protagonist grew up and had the ability to get in touch with things at this level, he discovered that this was actually a game against the male protagonist; the empress made a move to save him, and the two of them finally joined forces to overturn the entire chess game, killing the flag bearer or reaching a reconciliation with the flag bearer.

I hope to finally kill Luo Shenxue [eating melon]

Holy book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it, and Tiancan Tudou sighed after reading it. This must be one of the four great masterpieces, and it is definitely the number one sacred book in the 21st century. Shengxu is almost lacking in literary talent in front of it! Doubo almost has no connotation in front of it! Zhu Xian almost felt emotional in front of it! Zhe Tian can almost imagine it in front of it! Buddha almost made a plan in front of it! A once-in-a-century classic of online novels

The novel written by the author is so beautiful that my brain has become flexible. It is very interesting to read it from chapter 1 to now. In fact, I have thought about what the ending will be like. The female protagonists Le and Luo are a bit like Wang Yuxin, the person in Tomb of Gods. They should be integrated later. Who to attack is the world's heaven! The same guy who plays chess! It is also possible that the heroine and the hero are playing a big game of chess against someone. The coffin should be the hero's first life. The more I think about it, the more interesting it becomes. The brain cells in my brain are about to burn out. That's all for today. I will follow up every day. I am very much looking forward to the finale. Come on author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The structure is complete and the content is interlocking. You can see the author's good intentions from chapter to chapter. Being able to fully explain the story according to an idea is already a good achievement. What's more, this book has intricate logical lines. In fact, the author should have received a score of about nine points. The overall reading is still good. It is smooth and fluent, but there are flashbacks in some chapters, which are a bit abrupt. However, this is also the result of the author preparing for the ending. It is difficult to read here (referring to being confused), but the overall flaws are not concealed. I hope that the author can continue to stick to his original intention and go further and further on the road of writing.