Cultivation in the Game, Boundless Magic Power

There is finally no such thing as sister betrayal or family destruction at the beginning. The plot is very well written and interesting. It's a bit short. Please give me more updates, author.

I had a lot of discussions with the author in Chapter 64 and gained a lot of new insights. In addition, the plot logic and character creation are very good. Full marks. . . . After looking at the back, I still give it four stars. There are too many words for male, character, position, and perspective. . . I don't understand what it means to use ♂sexual words to praise women. What should the heroine give you and finally thank God? Is the father of the country here again?

A novel subject matter, but the ordinary copywriting and title almost buried a good article! The writing is excellent, and the writing style is very consistent with the background of the text. The ancient society has an antique feel between the lines, and the dialogue between characters in the modern dimension is not messy. In my opinion, the writing style of this article can be regarded as top-notch on Tomato. World view spiritual energy recovery + game dungeon, the reality and the dungeon are blended just right, the fun is online, the rhythm is steady but not chaotic, the setting can be considered a hit, this is a surprise for me. The design of the heroine is also great. The author does not overemphasize the appearance of the heroine. Even the main character in the game copy is a black and strong butcher girl. It is a breath of fresh air among the female videos that want to focus on the heroine's beautiful appearance throughout the entire article! In short, the heroine's IQ is online and she works in an orderly manner. It is estimated that she will follow the route of wearing a vest behind the scenes. I hope that the details will not reveal the truth and then accidentally fall off the horse. The most important thing is that the vest will not fall off, and the logic set by the vest must be reasonable (I have already vaguely seen that logic, and I am looking forward to it) As for the rest, the settings of the supporting characters are also good. The family NPCs in the dungeon are set up in a way that makes people very fond of it. In reality, the national power also has the feeling of online IQ. In short, the author's layout is quite strict, which shows me that the author has mastered the current plot with ease and has a certain writing power, so I am full of expectations for the next plot! Finally, I hope the author can update steadily and not suddenly stop updating or get stuck. With the level of this article, if you continue to write it, it will definitely become popular. Come on!

It's very good. It's Xiancao. The plot is interesting. The author has good writing skills and the writing is very real. Both the game and reality are well controlled. However, the number of words is too few and it's not enough to read. I also found another book by the author that I have also read... That book has been discontinued. I hope the author will not be a eunuch this time.

Although this book is not so obviously female-oriented, feminist ideas have always been hidden and kept as private goods. I think the rhythm of the plot is pretty good, and even if there are minor flaws, the flaws are not outweighed. Many of the cool points reminded me of male-channeled novels, but this book is equivalent to a pure version of female-channeled novels. Many of the things that people criticize as "female-channeled novels are not as enjoyable as male-channeled novels" are reflected in this book. The female protagonist is happy where she should be, and the female-centered ideas that should be taken care of are also taken care of. I also like the setting of this book very much.

There is no cp at the moment, and the plot becomes more and more attractive the more you watch it. If you like the combination of this kind of game and reality, you can also practice reality in the game. I hope there will be no cp in the future. I look forward to the plot in the future. Please keep updating the author [Like]

It's a serious novel, it's so good, but it's a pity that it even includes tomatoes. The pace is moderate, neither fast nor slow. Reading the comments, there are a lot of people who criticize it for being slow. I can only say that these people have really never eaten fine chaff... Good luck, author, I hope I can finish it. After reading a hundred chapters, I was amazed. When I looked at the table of contents, I stopped reading... I was heartbroken. It is really a pity that this book is on the wrong platform. If you are trying to find faults among a lot of people in Tomato, just posting on a paid platform will not lead to so many people being ignorant! I came across such a good book on a women's channel. It has everything you need in terms of writing and plot, and most importantly, I still love women. However, it was not completed and it didn't get the results it deserved. It's a pity, it's a pity.

The early setting is very interesting, the game format is like a Chinese fairy tale, and the story of the ancient common people period is also well written. If the plot of common people dispelling demons and ghosts is written in a down-to-earth manner, it will become a fine article with charm, but it soon spreads out a huge world view. The problem is that it unfolds a huge world view but does not have enough writing power to control it. Especially when it comes to national institutions in the two worlds, it seems impetuous and weak. The novel has also turned into a hurried Tomato National Games style, and the slight charm of the previous article has been lost. I think the author is very capable of writing a novel about farming and a relaxed life. However, it is slightly lacking in aspects such as suspense/politics (the mysterious male character in the front is really inexplicable). Perhaps the writing elements are not too refined. I am looking forward to the author's new content.

It's very good-looking. I've always liked this kind of novel about the interaction between games and reality, but there are really few of them. The characters who appear are also very vivid. The several mission events so far are also very interesting. Because of the game system, it would be nice to have more solid writing about the heroine becoming stronger. I like it very much. Friends who like this kind of novel can read it. It's super good-looking! ! ! Come on [shy][shy][shy], I hope many people will read this book

Grass jelly, tomato is a rare book for the appetite. There is no cp, the heroine does not serve in the beauty service, and the plot is very like a fairy tale, but the author may need to pay attention to grasp the limits of the game and reality. Anyway, come on

I finally read another well-written behind-the-scenes story about the heroine's recovery! ! ! The elements of the vest behind the scenes of the resurgence of spiritual energy are really my favorite, but the male and female episodes are rarely well-written. Some of the male episodes are too masculine, and some of the female episodes are too in love with men. It is obvious that the heroine is a male, and they also like to write about the ambiguity between the male episodes, which is very annoying. But I really love this one! ! ! The heroine is the absolute protagonist, and there are many very three-dimensional female images. Moreover, the exciting points about the revival of the spiritual energy of the vest behind the scenes are all written down, such as the right person to appear in front of the saint, many vests, and it also has a sense of upgrade. Whenever the author writes about it, I will follow it! !

The subject matter is not bad, but it is a common problem among women. I know you are wronged, I know you are miserable, and I have a good relationship with you. I have extraordinary means to help you, and I know who the murderer is, but I want to be reasonable and present the facts, and let the law judge the murderer. I have a piece of gold, my golden elixir, Yuanying, and the bad guy is a small mortal. I will also act in accordance with the law. The lecturer has a reputation for decisiveness in killing?

I love reading it, and the writing is top-notch among Tomatoes. The two worlds go back and forth, and I don't get tired of watching them. I just hope to write more about reality. I want to see how Section Chief Qin [learned] [learned] Unlike the usual routine articles, there are many excellent ones. I am really tired of seeing those brothers and sisters who are not getting along and framed up. The whole family in the game in this article is also full of warmth and has a good attitude towards the government. How can I see such a satisfying book on Tomato? Please add more. [Cry][cry] Have you read the book carefully, those who left negative reviews? Have you read the book carefully? Those who said the heroine has become beautiful and don't want to read it have read the book carefully. The appearance of the heroine in the game has been clearly described as "Female Zhong Kui", and there is no description of her becoming more beautiful. Moreover, in the real world, the heroine's skin condition has only improved. How can she become a fairy directly like other novels? Besides, others have become immortals, so why not be more beautiful? What's wrong with girls who like to be more beautiful? And the description of the fairy-like face is the "beauty skin" prop. Those who don't study seriously and still chatter, get out of here! There are still relatively few chapters in the book, but it is the book I am most looking forward to! The author should write well and don't finish it badly~ I love you [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's very beautiful, it's a pity to discontinue updates. The world view is spread out layer by layer, with two lines intertwining between reality and the past. As a savior, he takes on the responsibility of saving the collapsed world line and leading the modern era smoothly into spiritual recovery. This is a very good non-CP novel about a female protagonist. I will always look forward to the day when it will be updated again!

I came across this book many times, but was dissuaded by the comment about Voldemort in the front row. Later, when I was short of books, I came across this book again, and I wanted to take a look at Voldemort. What happened? ? Now that I'm even, I can't even see where Voldemort is? Are you saying that after the heroine fucked the first one, she used this credit to get her brother to become a regular? Or is it that the heroine lets her brother have an easier job after slaying the tiger demon? (Probably because I forgot the previous part after reading this), what kind of Voldemort is this? The heroine is on the road to cultivating immortality, and she only treats them as NPCs in the game at the beginning. The NPC family members are also very kind to her. It's useless for her to get all the credit anyway. Is there any problem if she can use her help to help her brother get organized and make her family live a better life? Moreover, the younger brother's family only appears in the front, and almost none in the back. It is mainly written around the heroine, so the comments are sometimes not trustworthy, so please refer to it for reference. Speaking of palindrome, the author's writing style is really good, and the ancient times are very ancient. It is really comfortable and immersive to read, and there will be no embarrassing jokes suddenly. The whole article can be perfectly integrated. The attention to detail is really comfortable to watch. The heroine becomes stronger step by step. The author also describes it very naturally, and everything is rounded out. And the best thing is that the author arranged a lot of characters with love, justice and strength who are women, which is really great! This is just one of the praises. What's even more praiseworthy is that the author describes those strong women who really have their own careers or ideas. They don't just write like a loft in the sky. This woman is so powerful but there is no basis for it. Till now, I feel that the author should have written half of it? I'm really looking forward to what comes next! The author must update it well! All in all, in short, I feel that this article by the author really suits my taste. The fifteen-year-old bookworm has struck gold again in 🍅!

First of all, I hated myself for asking why even though I knew this was a discontinued article, I still clicked on it without hesitation. After staying up for a few days and seeing the discontinued chapter, I cried to death [cry][cry][cry]. The author's writing skills are relatively stable and outstanding among the few in Tomato. The characters also have their own merits, and the logic is relatively reasonable. There are some small flaws in some places, but the flaws are not concealed, and the writing becomes more and more exciting. The plot development is also very smooth, and all links are interlocked and unconventional. The game world and the real world The changes in the world have formed a chain reaction, and the whole body is affected by one move. I also love all the vests of the heroine. I really like the heroine who is decisive in killing and has a cautious side but can also face the attack. I like this kind of heroine who is intelligent and not aggrieved. I hope to make a Readers can see that although the update has been discontinued, the article is still a good article. Regardless of whether the author comes back or not, I hope the author knows that someone is looking forward to your creation, but I still hope that the author can come back and continue to update. Please [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart].

Advantages: 1. The writing style is very good, with a beauty that doesn't belong to tomatoes. 2. The author is very good at telling stories and creating atmosphere. The text is very pictorial, and when reading, it seems like a strange scroll is slowly unfolding. 3. Comparing the commentary with the original text, the author should have changed many of the insulting words, and the characters' views have become less feudal. The most surprising thing is that the Demon Suppressing Department, which provides the heroine with the secret service, was founded by Emperor Wu and Wanping. Disadvantages: 1. The pace is slow, not suitable for those who like fast-paced and refreshing writing. The protagonist's behavior is not absolutely self-interested, but more of a simple sense of justice. 2. The character creation is a bit inferior, and sometimes the buffs are a bit hard to stack. 3. The most controversial heroine is his brother. The first sixty chapters describe a lot, and I almost got so annoyed by him that I couldn't watch it anymore. The guess is that he originally had a growth line, but readers' opinions changed too much. According to the author, he ended up being a pig-killer. I'm very satisfied with the ending. I haven't finished it yet and I hope the author will keep his word.

It's rare to see such novel and well-written articles in 🍅. There are not a lot of words to describe the heroine's love for the country and the city. The painting style is unique. The game reality shuttles back and forth. There is no so-called male protagonist and friends who hinder her footsteps. The heroine is really happy and crazy! Patriotic but not without a bottom line, jealous of evil but aware of the importance, not a phoenix dominator who does whatever he wants just because he has a game to play. He can do whatever he can, and he can be sneaky and never steal. The layers of the vest are really beautiful ~ but the author does not update, so I really can't get enough [face covering]

Immortal product. Sensitive readers can tell that there are indeed a few differences from the initial outline. There are several abrupt points. One of them is that the supernatural setting at the beginning of the story is rare or even unseen. However, later on, the Hu family in Northeast China has existed for a long time, and there was no official information at the beginning. But I think it's normal. That's how writing a book is, with settings added in between, additions and subtractions to meet the needs of progress and situation, etc., And the flaws are not hidden. The writing style has an ancient meaning, and the dialogues between the characters are often very particular. The story of peeling off the cocoons layer by layer also has distinctive characteristics in the character setting. When Nanzhi faces the encounters in life, he doesn't just say it and end everything in the past. The changes in his mood are traceable. The world's power system, props, forces and other settings are also natural. Some parts follow the inherent knowledge, coupled with the innate behavior of the mastermind behind the scenes, it can be said that it is very enjoyable to watch without appearing too trivial. Immortal product, but a pity eunuch.

How come such a beautiful article has such a low rating? This subject matter is indeed very innovative, combining elements of reality and the virtual world, and also involves some supernatural phenomena, spiritual energy recovery and immortality cultivation. The heroine can use game items to improve herself in the real world through the game. This is a very interesting setting that can give readers a lot of imagination. The setting of teaming up with Country Dad to catch ghosts is also very interesting. It is conceivable that if ghosts really exist in the real world, then it is reasonable for the state to come forward to catch ghosts. At the same time, it can also be used to show the heroine's ability and value, so that the items she obtains in the game can play a greater role in the real world. Overall, this subject matter has great potential and can be further expanded and improved. The final problem is that the book is a bit slow and I couldn't finish reading it all at once. I hope the author will be more exciting!

It's good-looking. It's a low-end and high-end. The content of Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio in the early stage is very attractive. It builds a very attractive world of cultivation. The world view is very authentic and has a sense of cultivation. Old bookworms can understand it. The writing is very good. In the later stage, the spiritual recovery of the national destiny has not been developed too much. What's even better is that the author has a sense of love for women in the latter part and has modified a lot of insulting words. There are some omissions in the previous modifications.

Well written and logical The heroine's thoughts are quite immersive, and her subjective initiative is also very strong. Although it is not a pure novel, with a small climax in a few chapters, you can feel that the protagonist has obtained the game plug-in from an ordinary person and then completed the tasks step by step - gained knowledge - and became stronger. In addition, the family harmony in the game in the early stage and the relationship between colleagues in reality are quite harmonious, and the overall reading feeling is very comfortable. More worrying points: Ma Jiawen, I am worried that the main body of the heroine will remain unknown, but personally I still like cool articles where the real body can hold a big body (face covering) Supplement: One of the more controversial points in the early part of this article is that the description of the younger brother Nan Yi in the game is too special, and he is the only character who has a good impression of the heroine.（Buff，，，），： ， ，or But except for the fact that the younger brother is very fond of him, everything else is quite ordinary. On the contrary, the younger sister has shown superb observation skills. When the heroine couldn't speak at first, she relied on her sister to translate, including the important going out scenes. It was the younger sister who discovered the heroine's thoughts and persuaded her mother to succeed. There are life-like descriptions such as helping to repair dad's torn socks, and the younger sister actively watching the events such as subduing demons and ghosts. The only red fox incident in which the younger brother was present was handled by the heroine alone. The younger brother played a role in providing clues, so the younger brother is more likely to be a tool.

The writing is quite good, which is a common problem with all books, and the official performance is still stable. Although you have become an immortal, I am an official. I am the biggest official in the world. The heroine also posted things to that official. Not to mention making a huge profit, at least she lost the bitter tea. I don't understand. That official is taking Magu's good stuff every day, using Magu's name to do things, and still trying to negotiate and negotiate prices every day. Why are you posting it? Let me ask you. Apart from these, the author's writing is indeed very good and high-level. The various dungeon maps and strange scenes in the game are well written. The monks are not all bad people and are enemies of the whole world. They are all quite upright. Apart from being disgusting, the official is pretty good. Can't he be like the White Tiger Tiger? Do I have to give them a good look every day? I give them so many good looks that I don't know who I am. The game world is very beautiful, and the real world is also very beautiful apart from the official website. The official website is really nice, and the White Tiger Mountain King's vest is very cool. It feels like I am your king and I am a king. I hope the next waistcoat is not a cold-faced official's underwear.

Looks good! ! Finally found a good book😭! Particularly praiseworthy! The plot is good and the writing is excellent. All the high-ranking officials are female characters, and they don't describe too much about their appearance. It's very good! I just don't like some of the male characters, but it doesn't matter. I hope the author can update 50,000 per day. It's not enough to watch!

It's pretty good-looking, and the writing is very good, but it's different from what I imagined after reading the introduction. There aren't many modern spiritual energy recovery scenes. Most of them are stories about the heroine working as a demon-suppressing envoy to catch demons and practice in an ancient world where demons and demons coexist. It's more like a metaphysics cultivating immortals and catching demons. Many of the unit stories have a bit of Pu Songling's flavor. I feel that the author has studied the origins of some stories about monsters. It's just that there are fewer and fewer modern scenes in the future. I wanted to see more modern ones, and then the update was discontinued. It's a shame. The ideas in this article are very good. It's a pity😭

It is particularly beautiful and has a good rhythm. The author has set up the game world and the real world to run parallel. In the game, he upgrades and fights monsters, shows the world view of cultivation, the aura of the real world is revived, the heroine is almost invincible as a pioneer, and is responsible for bringing the feeling of Bking. The author is a real mother, and is very kind to the heroine. She is not aggrieved. Some of the puzzle clues on Nan Yi in the early stage looked a bit annoying, but the return of Yuan Yi in the later stage was particularly surprising (I personally think this method is perfect and has no logical loopholes). It is worth watching. Regarding the female perspective, the heroines in the author's works are very self-reliant and ambitious. The heroine in this book breaks out of the stereotype of a fairy. I really like this black guy^^ (the heroine in the game world is a dark, strong, righteous woman). It is worth mentioning that several of the articles on the author's homepage are very good (I am a writer, so I picked up the book "World of Beasts" after reading half of it). I am particularly surprised. The high-scoring books are all excellent in writing, and it can be seen that the author's female thoughts are emancipating along the way. However, the author's articles cannot be considered strictly love articles, as there are some cases where the wording cannot satisfy all readers; and because the setting is perfect and the writing style is smooth, the audience is very wide, and monsters will be brushed in paragraph comments (the most impressive thing is when the heroine's white tiger vest is online in the real world, due to the naked appearance of the monster, there are a lot of wretched bros in the comment area, no pictures and no truth, which disgusts me to death). It is recommended to read less paragraph comments to have a better reading experience.

It's super good-looking. When I first read it, I thought it was just an ordinary game system novel. But as I read further, I found that the plot is really different. The author is really imaginative and the description is super exciting. The article of "Haggis Soup" is really unique. I started to follow the food. I have read the food three times, the world of beasts is also good, the one I bought in the group is also good, and I have also finished the book "Cultivation of Immortality". The plot is not dragging, and it is super exciting. The author should ignore those nit-picking short comments and stay in a good mood [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Players cultivate immortality, two worlds. The author's writing style is really good. He starts the description from the ancient butcher's house. The daily conversations between the characters are very interesting. The setting is novel and not exaggerated. The description of ghosts and monsters has the feeling of a fantasy novel! [Sending Hearts] Please stick to it

Such a beautiful book with such a novel subject matter is so poor. . . . . . .

Author, please come back soon. This book is obviously more popular than the new one, and judging by the progress, it is only one-fifth of the way through.