Dragon Ball: Begin with Gohan to Escape

I agree with not forcibly dismantling the CP, but La Zili must be received, and the short and bald Klin cannot be taken advantage of.

Personal opinion, it doesn't matter If you insist on writing, just have a single female protagonist, the pace should not be too fast, add (a little) daily life, don't go over some plots over and over again, don't just finish the battle and then move on to the next chapter, it is very irrational. (Also, why do some Dragon Balls become less popular after a while? They just have multiple female protagonists, No. 18, Bulma, etc., Without any novelty, short and short, and the pace is so fast, and it has also persuaded many fans of the original novels to quit. After all, most of the fans who watch old shows like Dragon Ball are original fans. Who said that Dragon Ball must be a good novel and its combat power is fucking invincible, so most Dragon Ball fans left immediately after seeing it, leaving some who either haven't read much Dragon Ball, or they just like to read this kind of novels.) Anyway, I give it five stars. It looks pretty good (for now) These are just suggestions, I don't care if you listen to them or not. Thanks to the author for creating such a book

It's okay, the pace is bright, and the characters are not added without destroying the original work.

It's hard to come up with a novel that's super good. It can keep evolving. It's not some bullshit, it's the Super Blue of Extreme Intention Gong. Why has the update been discontinued? Come on, author. What do other people think of the author? Leave it alone and finish the book. Grateful.

It looks good. I love it. It looks good.

There are too many scoldings in this novel's paragraphs, which is very uncomfortable for people like me who like to read reviews. I can only say that Dragon Ball novels have a lot of scoldings.

Not bad, very pretty, just a little missing