
Beast Taming: A Game Interface From the Start
御兽:开局一个游戏面板
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 88k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Modern Romance High-Concept
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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83Chapters
7Reads
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I think there are still some problems. I read the discussion and found that the author's setting is not to speak human words, but I think there should be more interaction between the beast master and his pets. It feels a bit monotonous. Also, I feel that the heroine lacks a little sense of vigilance, and I feel that the heroine upgrades a bit quickly, and others don't notice it, which feels a little ridiculous. I hope the author can add a little sense of vigilance to the heroine. I feel that this can enrich the plot of the story. After taking a look, there may be no typos at present, which is very good. However, sometimes the author has to pay attention to sentence breaks. In some places, there is no pause mark, which feels particularly unreasonable. I also feel that the golden finger set by the author is relatively thick, so the heroine should be more cautious. I also hope that the author can provide more character descriptions. I feel that I still don't know what the heroine looks like. Some of the descriptions are about Xiao Qing. I hope there are more descriptions of other characters. I personally think that some beautiful words and sentences can attract more readers. No, it's just that I think this story is developing a little fast. I think more plots can be added, such as more interactions between some interesting friends and the heroine or some interesting stories in the novel. Also, the author could use a little more description of the environment. I feel that the author has less description of the environment and characters. These are the suggestions for now [Love]
Looks good, come on
It feels like the heroine is playing a game, without any interaction with the beasts, she feels like a robot
It is unreasonable for the heroine to level up too quickly.
There is no interaction between the Taming Beast and the Taming Beast. The heroine does not talk to the Taming Beast. It is worse than a tool.