After Escaping from Death, the Heroine Loves Me to the Core

It looks good, the plot design is good, and the daily life with the senior sister is very warm. Both female protagonists are talkative, but the female protagonist is not very strong, and her improvement is slow, and her skills are useless. I don't know when the table will be turned over and the original male protagonist is killed. There will probably be a plot in the follow-up where the female protagonist is obsessed with the demon and the senior sister is in opposition (?). The confrontation between good and evil is the background of the story and the core point of the conflict. I look forward to the follow-up

It looks good, but it feels rough in the early stages, especially before the system is gone. Chu's psychological description and some character dialogues lack details. The sense of immersion is not that strong when reading, and the characters feel hollow. The lack of details leading to incomplete character design is also more obvious in the system. There is actually very little description of the system in the novel, and then the time span is ten years. Maybe for Chu, the system has been whispered in his ears for ten years, and he has feelings. When the system explodes, he is very reluctant to leave, and feels that he cannot go home and his fate is uncertain. However, for readers, there is too little ink about the system, and there is no empathy when writing about Chu's reluctant feelings. And in terms of the plot, I didn't quite understand the existence of the system. I felt that the offline was a bit fast. I originally thought there was some conspiracy behind it or that there was a big system (or other time-travelers) behind the male protagonist, but then the sudden offline felt a bit abrupt. Finally, there is the fighting, which is a bit unsightly, and then the male protagonist is a bit weak in the later stages. The lack of fighting in the final battle means that the death of the male protagonist is very simple, and there is no sense of the final battle. However, in the later period, I felt that the author still grasped the key points of the book and what the readers wanted to read. The conflict and conspiracy tension between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists in the later period were quite good. When reading, I could quite embody Chu's anger and powerlessness. Moreover, in the later period, the description of Ah Yue's appearance under the sunset was very graphic, and I can feel the improvement of the writing style in the later period. The emotional scenes were written more delicately and sweetly in the later stages [laughs], and he was pretty good in the end. When it comes to the male protagonist's layout, there are actually more overall detailed descriptions, and the final structure of the entire story is considered complete. Overall, I quite like it, and I couldn't stop watching it later. So when will the next book be released [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Well, to give an objective evaluation, this novel is pretty good to me. It is the kind of novel that can be skipped to see the finale, which is really rare. I couldn't stand it when I saw Chapter 60.70 In the early stage, but then I started to selectively skip it and choose to post the plot. But this also means that I don't know why two people fell in love with each other. This is also a pity. Hey, summary: If you can't stand it, you can skip to chapter 100. The plot behind it is quite good. Also, does the author have any extra chapters? Hahaha

Very good, I personally think it is well written [blowing kiss] But now I particularly want to make that master a folding screen [smile]. Now all I can think about is, why can't I make him a folding screen? [Smile] The two heroines have been in love for a long time, which is good, but I wonder why those ten years passed so fast? [What] The author has coded the words carefully. Once the code is done, I will definitely come and read it [Blow a kiss] @omegleguardian

It's very good-looking and worth recommending [Chigua] I just started practicing it, but in the end it turned out to be really good-looking, which makes people want to keep watching. The plot is also pretty good, very good [laughs] but it's just a bit lacking. I wish there were more [poke]

The first 20 chapters look very good and the plot is comfortable. Unlike 99% of other time-traveling novels, most of the protagonists have modern diseases: lazy when going to bed if they are not used to it, angry when getting up, loving to eat mortal food without being afraid of magazines, being greedy for money and stupidly talking about B and other things. . .

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So pretty! The best article about cultivating immortals. I like every character so much and there are no weird points. Ahhhhh! It's good to watch. It would be nice to write a side story about Yueyue's life later. I'm so curious.

Treasure novel, I almost finished it in one sitting. It's the first time I've seen such a special system. The plot is not clichéd and it's rare that I can't guess what's going on. The main CP and sub-CP are very well matched and sweet. The author's writing is very good. I won't lose money if I invest in it.

Haha, I have read nearly five or six similar books with this plot, but I admit that no matter how many times I read it, I will never get tired of it, especially if it is paired with a good writing style. It is really pleasing to the eye and refreshing. I look forward to other books by the author [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

The writing style is average and the IQ is high, which attracts me.

If the system is gone, won't the protagonist be unable to go back? Then there is the original male protagonist, is the current master the biggest villain?

Good looking (•̀⌄•́) No loss in investment (｡◝ᴗ◜｡)

Hahaha, so pretty

The writing is good, keep up the good work! !

It's good to watch, but not enough. The plot is a bit draggy. The author should update it soon. Isn't the character of Chu Wei too simple? After all, she is an adult in the modern society, so she can't see that the master is flattering her.

It's very interesting. Cheers to the author. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The plot is pretty good It's obviously very interesting, but why are so few people reading it?

Focus on a good-looking one

It looks good, but not enough♡＾▽＾♡

I hope the score will be released soon

The pace is a bit faster, the world view is not described too much, and the characterization is not very in-depth, but it looks okay.

Not bad, very pretty

Very nice and recommended

Looks good, loves to watch, watch more.

I can see that there are no poisonous points. I feel that the system is useless and it goes offline a bit quickly. After identification, feel free to eat🤓

It's beautiful, and it's one of the best short stories.

I like it, a very nice book

Hey-hey! I like the author a lot! The author is really amazing [admiration]

It's very interesting. I thought it was going to be very sad several times, but the author is very different. Compared with others I've read, it's not that sad. It's another day where I didn't cry😄