Ghoul: Bo Xia Aite

Disadvantages: The cover has a bit of an age feel, it is not updated regularly, there is little content at the moment, and there is no climax yet. It is normal for the popularity to be relatively low now, so the author does not need to be discouraged.

When will the protagonist and Aite grow up? I want to see some education and training🥸

A very good and pure ghoul novel, with nothing else randomly added. To be honest, people who write about ghouls always like to add some weird things, which seem quite alienating. The progress of the plot is relaxed and relaxed, which does a good job of maintaining people's initial interest. The sweetness between the protagonist and Aite is simply off the charts, and the level of BT is also in line with the tone of a ghoul. Looking forward to the author's subsequent plot design. According to this progress, there will be many original plots and will not be attached to the original work.

I feel that Sister Quan will be spoiled and become a useless loli [face covering]

It is a very interesting fan novel. The daily life of the host and Aite is also very interesting and well written. The story design is very attractive. It does not mean that you are invincible at the beginning and directly change the world, but the traditional protagonist slowly grows up to change the world. This is exactly what I like to read. At the same time, the protagonist meets Aite early and changes the tragic ending without affecting the development of the subsequent plot too much. A lot of writing space, which is very good. I hope the author can write a good plot in the future. I also hope that the author can save the ending and past of some tragic characters in the original work without making their deeds completely different. For example, the author can make Kaneki a half-ghoul, but it will not be so painful, or he can not make Kaneki a half-ghoul, but at the same time retain the love between him and Touka. This is what I would like to see, and I believe many readers also want to see it. After all, the purpose of reading fan fiction is to see different endings from the original work, to change the tragic experiences of each character, to obtain redemption, etc. If the tragic encounters of the characters in the original work still have the same ending in the fan fiction, what is the point? So I still look forward to the author's next writing. I also think this novel is very interesting. It is a very good ghoul fanfic. Whether it is the daily life of the protagonist and At, or the advancement of the plot, it is very well done. Unfortunately, the author does not seem to have many updates, and because there are few readers, he has to open the next book. I hope the author can continue the tradition of this book in the next book. All in all, it's a good fanfic and worth reading.

This is one of the few ghoul novels written by Tomato, and it is a high-quality novel. The difference from other ghoul novels is that it is not a story line or emotional drama that unfolds when the two parties come to adulthood, but a series that unfolds from the age of 7, plus the identities of both parents, empathy, mutual understanding, and good feelings. This is really good. Plus, there is no system. No, brother. Are you in such good spirits?

It is a very good ghoul fanfic, and it pays special attention to the characterization and plot, especially the interactive plot between the protagonist and Yoshimura Aite. If you like detailed descriptions, it's well worth a read.

In fact, it's okay, but there is a very, very crucial point. The male and female protagonists are separated most of the time. There is also an even more critical point. The male and female protagonists get along twice, once when they are 8 years old and once when they are 11 years old. It is impossible to watch the interaction between the male and female protagonists. Although the two people are very mature mentally, they are still two little brats no matter how mature they are. They thought they would grow up quickly, but in the end they were still two kids, which is a bit uncomfortable.

The plot, characters, and writing are all very good, which is rare among ghoul fans. I particularly like the male protagonist and Aite's illness, yandere and redemption, which brings the ultimate possessiveness. Hehehe, maybe there are fewer people rating it, so the score is not high. Come on

There are very few Tomato books about Sister Quan. This one is really good and so sweet. Please give it a try, the author, and update it. I think it will definitely become popular.

The author of this book uses a third perspective interspersed with psychological descriptions to vividly portray the protagonist's image, reflecting a young man's determination to fight desperately for his heart's desire. At the same time, the logic is rigorous, the protagonist is cautious and mature, thinks comprehensively, and has a strong purpose. Although he is mentally mature, he is always "critched" by someone. The author's writing style is delicate, and the protagonist's emotions are revealed in his daily life. Many details give people an immersive feeling, allowing readers to realize the author's love for the characters. The protagonist is a half-ghoul, and his encounter with Aite after learning about his life experience is the beginning of the book (the timeline is Aite's escape and Xiu's pursuit, shortly after Noro's death). The two people who love each other agreed to create an ideal world, hoping to one day live openly and honestly in the world. For this reason, they had to temporarily separate and work hard to improve themselves. The author's exposed psychological state adds a lot of charm to the subsequent stories in this book. I look forward to the author's updates. Let me change my previous comment. The protagonist is half-human. I didn't change it back at the time.

No, quickly turn on the battle mode for me! By the way, make the male protagonist stronger. It would be better if they meet each other when they grow up. When Aite is hunted down again, the male protagonist saves him. [Shy]

My only request is that you take your time when writing. I'm afraid that the book will suddenly be gone at some point [face covering] and it won't be easy to evaluate the character or anything like that. After all, I'm still so young, so I can say whatever I want. The plot is not bad, it's very interesting to watch, please give it a try, author.

It's too everyday, and they are too young, right? But, I like this! Even if it is daily life in the early stage, there will be plots in the later stage, and you don't have to worry about your young age. Let me walk you through it. Our male protagonist is half-human, and his lifespan is only about 30 years at most. He split one year into two years, so he must be very precocious. If we calculate, the knowledge that other children learn in one year is equivalent to the knowledge that the male protagonist learns in two years. Then our current mental state is about 16 years old, which is understandable. And our Quan sister, first of all, it is a half-ghoul, so there is nothing wrong with its early maturity, right? Secondly, when our Quan sister was a little baby, her mother was killed by her father, and her father ran away and left him alone with his friends. What is District 24 like? I guess there's no need to say more, right? It's understandable that I've been lacking love since I was a child.

The content written by the author is considered excellent among the Tokyo Ghoul fanfics. I hope you can continue to work hard [Like]

The writing is solid, at least so far I don't see any character breakdown or anything like that. I look forward to this book getting a score of 9 or more in the future of Fengshen. [Sending my heart]

It seems pretty good so far, but the only drawback is that Sister Izumi's daily life is too long, and most of it is just talking about dog food. I want to watch the main story.

I really like this writing style

All good, but: is this baby seven years old?

Hurry up and update... Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! I can't... I can't bear it any more...!!!

It's so well written, why isn't it popular? I beg for the second part. The second part will come soon.

This book is very to my liking, and Ai Fan is ecstatic, especially to be able to do this for her. I really love it. The writing is good and the output is stable. Big boost to the author! !

When will the protagonist and Aite meet again? @

The content is good and the plot is interesting

Disadvantages: The author is very short

Two chapters a day, I want to kill someone I just love watching daily life, I just love watching Aite

Great. Preview of this book.

It looks good. It's really okay. I'm afraid you'll be banned. . . The language is vivid, rich in writing, and the writing style is brisk. The description of Ait is very good, which satisfies the readers' fantasy. The plot is original, there is no cliché, and it has references for the plot and understanding of ghouls. Very excellent.

Overall it's quite novel. I just want you guys to update it quickly.

It's pretty cool, good luck to the author [cool]