Star Dome: Reincarnation Simulations, Starting with the Yandere Acheron

What do you say? After reading these 12,000 words, I think it's still okay. There is a little difference from the author's previous book, but I don't think it's big. Anyway, it looks pretty good. It's not bad. If you like this subject, you can read it. After all, it's pretty good. I don't know what to say. Anyway, I think it's pretty good. That's it.

It's well written, but can you change the part about beheading that is simulated by mirror flow? I always feel like I can't forget it after watching that part, and my back feels cold and uncomfortable.

First of all, I have to seriously criticize the emotional line between Jackdaw and Xueyi. To be honest, this line greatly exposes the author's steps in the emotional line. Except for these two people who were adopted when they were young, I can't understand why he fell in love with the protagonist. Maybe it's because the author's power is constantly exerting his strength. Moreover, the author has already written a book, and I can't understand it. The ending can't be said to be too good or too bad, so that's it. The following chapters are full of haste. Now that you already have experience with one book, you should write your second book well, or you have the ability. Okay, what follows is almost entirely positive. Of all the heroines' emotional lines, only Ruan Mei's is the best. From his indifference, to slight touching, then indifference, and finally to a complete explosion, it gives people a particularly comfortable feeling. I think it may be because Ruan Mei's special life experience gave the author enough play. Therefore, Ruan Mei, in particular, is the most essential part of the whole book. From childhood to adulthood, this emotional context can be traced and can be investigated thoroughly. This is the part that makes me extremely comfortable and the part that makes me most hopeful about this book. As for the rest of Huangquan's emotional line, I think it's average to above average. I have to seriously criticize Jingliu and the two sisters. This is because their emotions are obviously in a mess, or they are forced to like them, and they are forced to become yanderes. Let me summarize it for you. After an hour, raise you. Save you, you are full of love for him, and when you meet him again when you grow up, you will feel excited and want to rush up and hug him. In this area of ​​mirror flow, the author's handling is relatively good. But damn Jackdaw and Xueyi, these two suddenly turned into yanderes without any warning. It was as if they were forced to change their personalities for the sake of Shura Field. The biggest common problem written by these three authors is that their journey of becoming yandere is completely messy. Compared with Ruan Mei, the logic of their becoming yandere is completely bullshit. The teacher-student relationship generated by Fu Xuan's words is quite acceptable. After all, there are quite a lot of teacher-student love stories in various online novels. Liuying, I can only say that this one is below average, because his emotional journey or his contact with the protagonist can be seen clearly, but if you think about it carefully, it is completely confusing. The biggest problem is that you can judge it through time. The protagonist has been in contact with Liu Ying for just a few days, and Liu Ying has fallen in love with her immediately. This time span is extremely short. Compared to others, he has a master and apprentice, an orthodox wife, a childhood sweetheart, and a childhood love. The problem with his line is that the time it takes to develop feelings is ridiculously short. From here you can see that the author is pushing hard and making all kinds of forced movements in order to create a Shura field. The other Kakawaqiu is basically the same nature, and the time span is too short. So I have serious doubts. The author has already had the experience of writing a book. I can only say that his ability to deal with emotional lines is uneven. The good is very good and the bad is very bad. To be honest, when I saw that the protagonists Jackdaw and Snow Clothes were about to conquer them again, I almost started the five-star installment service. But I calmed down. Although this novel has many problems, it still accompanied me a lot and brought us happiness. I still gave this book a good review. Because I have read this book, laughed, and been angry. I still tolerate most of his shortcomings, but my criticisms will still remain, and my praise will not be stingy at all. This ends the overall evaluation of this book.

To be honest, this book is really good. I have been a bookworm for 5 years. I have read a lot of yandere. This book can eliminate most of the torture. I hope the author will not give up on this book. When I have enough funds, I will give you a gift of 20~50, come on👍👍👍

So far, this is a masterpiece of yandere. Although it is not finished yet, it can be roughly guessed. The author's bold writing made me want to read on. The later stage is not as straightforward as some yandere novels. All in all, this is an excellent yandere novel. I hope the author will work hard! I will support you when I have money

The author's writing style must not be too good. I also read the first book, but not the end. This author is so good at driving [laughs evilly] [face covering]

The first life was quite enjoyable to watch, but the third life was a bit unsatisfactory, and it felt like I was on a female channel. Realistically speaking, the writing is pretty good now. (The experience may be different, and the content mentioned may be incorrect, so please watch it yourself)

The initial feeling is not that good. Some authors can learn from it. If you can't write about emotions, why don't you know how to copy? Personally, I don't feel that it is generally good. I don't have the feeling of getting goosebumps all over my body when I read it (*＾ڡ＾*)/🍗

There is no need to say anything about this sacred book. Once you read it, you won't say a word.

The author writes really well! I love watching it so much. Every time I watch it, I feel a sense of intellectual superiority! [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]