Entered the teleportation array by mistake and was transported to the world of cultivating immortals. A mortal body with mixed spiritual roots, but he moved forward fearlessly, defying the will of heaven and changing his destiny all the way to the top. Traditional feelings, no system, no stupidity. Take you on an extraordinary journey!
Reader comments
The writing is good, except for the poor talent. The characters are all full-bodied, and their IQs are all online at the moment.
It's very beautiful. There are very few works like this among traditional fairy tales and fantasy. The characters are clearly depicted and the plot is great. The author writes well and I will always support it! I recommend everyone to watch it, it's really good.
In the first hundred chapters, the author writes like a novice, like a fledgling high school student writing. After a hundred chapters, the writing style becomes different and becomes more and more beautiful, which shows that the author's writing level has improved, and at the same time, the foreshadowing and reversal of the plot have also been strengthened. One hundred and fifty chapters later, he is already on par with normal authors. Dear author, keep up the good work! Write a better plot [blowing kiss][admiration]
The pace of the first hundred or so chapters is very slow and the writing is average, but after a hundred chapters it starts to get exciting. As Shi Chen's cultivation level increased, he went from living a subsistence life to being on the front desk, which is indeed a normal state of ordinary people's cultivation. The plot development is okay, and the characterization is also remarkable. I hope the author can write more exciting stories [Love] [Like]
The male protagonist enters the world of immortality by mistake, and uses his spiritual roots to start his own legendary path to immortality. He was determined and persevering all the way, never giving up for a moment. Very sensible, with ups and downs of content. Support
The main character in the book, Shi Chen, has a clear distinction between love and hate. He is decisive in dealing with problems.
Before a hundred chapters, you can tell that the author is a novice. After a hundred chapters, his writing skills have improved a lot. After a hundred and fifty chapters, he has become comparable to someone with two or three years of writing experience.
Mortal Flow is a rare and good work in traditional fantasy. The characters are vividly drawn, the plot twists and turns, and the road to invincibility in the realm begins in about two hundred pictures. There are more than a dozen slaps in the face, all presented in the author's writing. It's a book I really love to read, cheers to the author! [Like][Like][Like]
There is no golden finger for ordinary people to cultivate immortality, nor is it omnipotent. When it comes to being more interesting, it always feels that it is too easy to obtain, and the sense of accomplishment is not that high. Moreover, the author has a great imagination, good writing style, and five-star praise.
This book is so classic. I read it for more than ten hours at a time and still haven't had enough. I hope the author will work harder and write more exciting stories.
This book is different from those Tomato books and is worth reading.
Is the author the master of Happy Vest? I feel like your writing technique is so delicate!
Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are very vividly described, and the story has a tight rhythm, making people feel like they can't stop!
It's a very interesting fantasy about cultivating immortals. The male protagonist has gone through countless hardships from being a mortal to becoming a Nascent Soul. You are lucky and get many great opportunities, but you can also easily get into trouble. The author, please give me a lot of encouragement and hurry up and let Shi Chen ascend to immortality! Looking forward to the follow-up...
It is a very good novel with rich content. I can't stop reading it. I read it through once to read this novel. It is worth reading. The author is very attentive and has captured every detail very well. I highly recommend it.
This book is good, IQ is online, not brainless, it is my favorite type. However, the author's writing style is not good enough and needs to be improved. Come on! The first book, as an exercise, will always support you!
Author, write faster, stop being stubborn and come up with something big!
The male protagonist's original occupation was a graduate student in ancient literature. It is very innovative, the local salt production and price descriptions are very detailed, and the content of the novel is very exciting.
It's one of the better novels I've ever read. Come on, author!
The author is a newcomer, and the content and style are immature for the first hundred or so chapters. However, the author has grown up quickly. After more than a hundred chapters, the plot, characters, etc. Have greatly improved. The mortal protagonist Shi Chen has had a bumpy journey. Come on, author!
I read it in one go, it's very good, I recommend it! !
Very nice! Shi Chen defied fate as a mortal and embarked on the path to immortality. The author vividly describes the process of the little man growing up step by step from his humble beginnings. I look forward to the hero ascending to the highest level of Danwu as soon as possible [Like] [Like] [Like]
The author's writing is extraordinary. The protagonist Shi Chen does not start with a vendetta, but starts with getting rich. He has always been intelligent, tenacious, responsible, and responsible. In the second half, the author's writing gets better and better, with wonderful descriptions of fighting scenes and quite skillful use of metaphors. Thumbs up for the diligent author and learn from the author!
The story is wonderful, the plot has ups and downs, twists and turns, it is fascinating, the characters are vivid and interesting, it is very interesting to watch, recommended!
I came across a good book with vivid descriptions and read it in one sitting. The protagonist is thoughtful enough and has character, come on!
Good article found in the book wasteland, like it
A very interesting book, very enjoyable to read.
The story is very eye-catching from the beginning, and the later chapters are even more mind-expanding, making me unable to put it down. Hurry and write more, it's not enough.
Well, it's not in vain. Come on, keep writing.
A very traditional fantasy fairy tale, I hope the protagonist will grow up quickly!
It's good, it's a traditional fantasy and it's worth watching. The protagonist is well portrayed. I hope to continue working hard and provide us with more exciting chapter stories.
A very beautiful article about cultivating immortals, which is immersive.
The survival situation that was just sent here is described in detail and is worth reading carefully.
The writing is good. A different kind of cultivating immortality, the subject matter is very novel, and the concept is clever. Please read it when you have time!
Very good new writing style. The story is good and interesting.
The sense of immersion is very strong. I finally see a protagonist who is not only attracted by the appearance, but also likes to watch the growth type.
Very nice!
This book is very interesting. The more I watch, the more I like it. The description is delicate, the words are appropriate, and it is very picturesque.
Traditional fairy tales about mortals, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters are increasingly distinctive. I believe that the protagonist Shi Chen will achieve success through continuous growth.
The writing is good, except for the poor talent. The characters are all full-bodied, and their IQs are all online at the moment.
It's very beautiful. There are very few works like this among traditional fairy tales and fantasy. The characters are clearly depicted and the plot is great. The author writes well and I will always support it! I recommend everyone to watch it, it's really good. In the first hundred chapters, the author writes like a novice, like a fledgling high school student writing. After a hundred chapters, the writing style becomes different and becomes more and more beautiful, which shows that the author's writing level has improved, and at the same time, the foreshadowing and reversal of the plot have also been strengthened. One hundred and fifty chapters later, he is already on par with normal authors. Dear author, keep up the good work! Write a better plot [blowing kiss][admiration]
The pace of the first hundred or so chapters is very slow and the writing is average, but after a hundred chapters it starts to get exciting. As Shi Chen's cultivation level increased, he went from living a subsistence life to being on the front desk, which is indeed a normal state of ordinary people's cultivation. The plot development is okay, and the characterization is also remarkable. I hope the author can write more exciting stories [Love] [Like]
The male protagonist enters the world of immortality by mistake, and uses his spiritual roots to start his own legendary path to immortality. He was determined and persevering all the way, never giving up for a moment. Very sensible, with ups and downs of content. Support
The main character in the book, Shi Chen, has a clear distinction between love and hate. He is decisive in dealing with problems. Before a hundred chapters, you can tell that the author is a novice. After a hundred chapters, his writing skills have improved a lot. After a hundred and fifty chapters, he has become comparable to someone with two or three years of writing experience. Mortal Flow is a rare and good work in traditional fantasy. The characters are vividly drawn, the plot twists and turns, and the road to invincibility in the realm begins in about two hundred pictures. There are more than a dozen slaps in the face, all presented in the author's writing. It's a book I really love to read, cheers to the author! [Like][Like][Like]
There is no golden finger for ordinary people to cultivate immortality, nor is it omnipotent. When it comes to being more interesting, it always feels that it is too easy to obtain, and the sense of accomplishment is not that high. Moreover, the author has a great imagination, good writing style, and five-star praise.
This book is so classic. I read it for more than ten hours at a time and still haven't had enough. I hope the author will work harder and write more exciting stories. This book is different from those Tomato books and is worth reading.
Is the author the master of Happy Vest? I feel like your writing technique is so delicate! Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are very vividly described, and the story has a tight rhythm, making people feel like they can't stop!
It's a very interesting fantasy about cultivating immortals. The male protagonist has gone through countless hardships from being a mortal to becoming a Nascent Soul. You are lucky and get many great opportunities, but you can also easily get into trouble. The author, please give me a lot of encouragement and hurry up and let Shi Chen ascend to immortality! Looking forward to the follow-up...
It is a very good novel with rich content. I can't stop reading it. I read it through once to read this novel. It is worth reading. The author is very attentive and has captured every detail very well. I highly recommend it.
This book is good, IQ is online, not brainless, it is my favorite type. However, the author's writing style is not good enough and needs to be improved. Come on! The first book, as an exercise, will always support you! Author, write faster, stop being stubborn and come up with something big!
The male protagonist's original occupation was a graduate student in ancient literature. It is very innovative, the local salt production and price descriptions are very detailed, and the content of the novel is very exciting.
It's one of the better novels I've ever read. Come on, author!
The author is a newcomer, and the content and style are immature for the first hundred or so chapters. However, the author has grown up quickly. After more than a hundred chapters, the plot, characters, etc. Have greatly improved. The mortal protagonist Shi Chen has had a bumpy journey. Come on, author! I read it in one go, it's very good, I recommend it! !
Very nice! Shi Chen defied fate as a mortal and embarked on the path to immortality. The author vividly describes the process of the little man growing up step by step from his humble beginnings. I look forward to the hero ascending to the highest level of Danwu as soon as possible [Like] [Like] [Like]
The author's writing is extraordinary. The protagonist Shi Chen does not start with a vendetta, but starts with getting rich. He has always been intelligent, tenacious, responsible, and responsible. In the second half, the author's writing gets better and better, with wonderful descriptions of fighting scenes and quite skillful use of metaphors. Thumbs up for the diligent author and learn from the author!
The story is wonderful, the plot has ups and downs, twists and turns, it is fascinating, the characters are vivid and interesting, it is very interesting to watch, recommended!
I came across a good book with vivid descriptions and read it in one sitting. The protagonist is thoughtful enough and has character, come on!
Good article found in the book wasteland, like it
A very interesting book, very enjoyable to read.
The story is very eye-catching from the beginning, and the later chapters are even more mind-expanding, making me unable to put it down. Hurry and write more, it's not enough. Well, it's not in vain. Come on, keep writing.
A very traditional fantasy fairy tale, I hope the protagonist will grow up quickly!
It's good, it's a traditional fantasy and it's worth watching. The protagonist is well portrayed. I hope to continue working hard and provide us with more exciting chapter stories.
A very beautiful article about cultivating immortals, which is immersive.
The survival situation that was just sent here is described in detail and is worth reading carefully.
The writing is good. A different kind of cultivating immortality, the subject matter is very novel, and the concept is clever. Please read it when you have time!
Very good new writing style. The story is good and interesting.
The sense of immersion is very strong. I finally see a protagonist who is not only attracted by the appearance, but also likes to watch the growth type. Very nice!
This book is very interesting. The more I watch, the more I like it. The description is delicate, the words are appropriate, and it is very picturesque.
Traditional fairy tales about mortals, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters are increasingly distinctive. I believe that the protagonist Shi Chen will achieve success through continuous growth.