I Cultivate the Dao and Become an Immortal

The protagonist's return home is full of twists and turns. I read in the reviews. Someone asked the protagonist about the twists and turns of returning home. When will he be able to return home? The author replied that it's not yet time. I don't know why it made me feel uncomfortable (I don't know why). I want to wait for a while before returning home. Look, when I read it, I jumped directly to the time when I got home. The novel is very well written, but it may not be in line with "my" and "now" (I'm talking about myself and myself now) reading taste. The novel is very well written, the author, please keep updating❛‿˂̵✧

The author is so pitiful. He doesn't have many readers and often doesn't have the motivation to write titles. He often feels uncomfortable in various ways, hahaha. Even so, he still insists on updating. In fact, the quality of this article is still above the pass mark. The reason why few people read it is probably because the content is mixed and the track is too offbeat. If you want to read a novel with two male protagonists, the protagonist is always three or four years old. If the emotional line is not followed up, it will be difficult for everyone to embody the feelings of a child of that age; if you want to read a traditional fairy tale, this is another novel with two male protagonists, and it is positioned to dissuade a lot of people; if you want to read a novel with two male protagonists, the author suppressed many exciting points in order to control the plot (it may have something to do with imagination, as he did not conceive of much follow-up content, so only a few exciting points were squeezed repeatedly, which made the book not enjoyable). For authors who have a certain foundation, writing like this can help to cultivate fans, but they can only rely on recommendations and casual readers. If you want to achieve good results in the future, you can position the content of your works and fans more accurately. If you want to write about two male protagonists, don't waste too much pen and ink at a young age. If you want to write about traditional immortality and private goods, you should first write the ending without cp and then add some ambiguity or the last chapter with a poor picture to trick straight men into entering. If you want to write For cool articles, prepare a few more cool points, with an average of 30-50 chapters to shock the public (create some stereotyped villains: White Lotus, Old Wall Lamp, King of Pretenders, Straight Male Cancer, etc., Intersperse descriptions of their disgusting nature, then use one chapter to infinitely magnify their characteristics, and finally have three chapters to slap in the face and crush the ending). In this way, the quality of the work will be much better, and readers of the corresponding track will also notice your work. Five points to the author who insists on updating, and I look forward to seeing more excellent works.

Why is the protagonist so greedy? Does he have any other bloodline?

From an objective point of view, it is worth reading. The writing is very good, but it also focuses on a long and steady flow. It can be said that the story is at the most attractive stage at the beginning. Come on, Dad.

Chapter 180, [palms face] is still only three years old, the other male protagonist can't be reincarnated yet! ! !

It's good-looking, but it already has 260,000 words, and little Jiji is only three years old. [Read carefully] How many thousands of words will it cost? The road to catch up is long and long

This book is very well written. I hope Diji can get his wish, recognize his parents as soon as possible, return to the fairy world, and find Bai Hu. The characters are vividly created.

A super, super good-looking story about rebirth and cultivating immortality! ! Come on! ! [Cover face][cover face]

I really like the character of the protagonist, but it turns out that there are two male protagonists. Don't write so much at a young age, and the trouble is to make the plot simpler, and don't drag it out. Since it is a good novel, please make it more interesting. However, the overall plot is well written. I was a worker in my previous life, but greed is normal in this life. I like the character of the protagonist and I give it 50% encouragement.

Great author, I am very much looking forward to the appearance of the other half of our protagonist.