As a Mortal Girl Cultivating Immortality, I Have a Portable Space

It's been a long time since I've seen a book that suits my taste. I'm looking forward to the upcoming plot. I can't get enough of it every day. Haha, I recommend it!

It looks good, but the protagonist comes with a golden key at the beginning, a top-quality spiritual root, a grandfather with a ring, and a noble family background, which has nothing to do with the ordinary title [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

It's good-looking. The lyrics are basically insulting. It's really fun to watch the heroine upgrade step by step. The plot is very exciting and not watery at all. Those who like lone wolf space cultivating immortals can really give it a try. The heroine is very tough, kind and values love and justice, but she values love and justice too much. However, the comments section is very violent. It is recommended that you stop commenting on it in the early stage, otherwise it will be easy to be affected.

I've caught up with the latest chapter. It's a good read. It's the fairy tale I want to read. I recommend it!

I like reading novels about cultivating immortals like this. The journey to immortality is written in a detailed and exciting way. There are more than a thousand chapters, but I heard the latest update from the beginning. The novel is well written, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

It looks good, nothing that makes me angry.

Looks good, looks good, looks good! ! I hope the protagonist learns more of the Four Arts! ! !

The plot is quite interesting, and the training process is also very detailed. However, the battles are not very exciting. The heroine has obviously learned other methods, but she always uses a sword every time, and wins in just a few moves. It is not the kind of back and forth, and there is no sense of tension.

The plot is okay, but the details and numbers can be slightly improved. Grandma, I've seen the back now, and I'm really impressed. The heroine, the Holy Mother, can do it. I don't know how she cultivated to this level. If it were placed in other books, the grass on the grave would be at least as high as a house.

At first I just picked up Wenhuang and watched it casually, but I didn't expect it to get better and better. Haha, I caught up to the latest one in one go. Some of the heroine's speeches and actions were a little outrageous at the beginning, but it got better and better as I watched it. I really want to know the follow-up and how far the heroine will grow. The plot is very exciting after entering the spirit world. It is interesting to watch the heroine grow up little by little (she is the slowest heroine I have ever seen). The author's realm and cultivation methods are very detailed. However, if you are still a mortal girl in the mortal world, then in the spirit world it will be completely Feng Aotian's story. It's just that I want to make a complaint and found out that the author likes to use doubling numbers to express or The two are in the same realm to convey how to be invincible, but the heroine always encounters those who are higher than her own realm, so it is conveyed that the heroine is so powerful in escaping that the boss can't catch up XD. The spirit beast servants are also collected like resources. Except for a few major ones, there is no sense of presence later. I can't see the use of collecting them at the moment. Other than dealing with these points, everything is fine. But what kept me watching was the character of the heroine, who is a rare kind-hearted and persevering type in the immortal cultivating genre. Although she was criticized by other readers for being a virgin and not decisive, in my opinion, the heroine still kills what should be killed, but she does not kill without batting an eye, and has her own bottom line. Compared with those "killing decisive" protagonists, I am more appetizing. Moreover, the heroine repays kindness, treats people with courtesy, repays hatred with kindness, and does not abandon human touch because of cultivating immortality. At present, it seems that there is still a long way to go before it is finished. I hope that the heroine can always stick to her heart and maintain it steadily in the future.

The content of the writing is very good, and the progress of cultivating immortality is gradual. Most of the characters in it are quite kind, so the heroine is kind. The family and friendship described in it are quite warm, and her life experience is also hopeful. It's good.

The first step is okay, but the later upgrades are too slow. I looked at the catalog and found that it takes more than 500 chapters to upgrade from Nascent Soul to Transformation God, and more than 500 chapters to upgrade to one level. I really can't bear it.

It's super nice. All book friends should take a look. It's a very good book with a very good plot. Please update it as soon as possible. Thank you.

It's not bad, it's very interesting. I hope the author can continue to update it.

The writing is very good and exciting. I read 300 chapters in two days, and I am more and more looking forward to the plot behind it. The author will update it soon!

It's very beautiful. Really. The heroine is perfect when she focuses on her career.

It's quite interesting. The plot is different from other novels. It's very novel. This is the first time I have seen a self-taught immortal who has no guidance and relies on his own consciousness. The Almighty Novice is very attractive, but sometimes it is too holy. I also can't understand the heroine's brain circuit: Why doesn't the powerful person in the secret realm want to harm people to report [what] [laughing and crying] [laughing]

I'm evaluating the immortality novels I've read as a bookworm for many years. This one is probably in the top three. The content is so rich and colorful that I can't handle it. The heroine is calm, courageous, smart and loving, and the character design is very likable. The heroine is either fighting monsters or on the way to upgrade. Her spirit of constant struggle is admirable!

The technology is indeed very good. I am very fond of the leaves here. For me, it is a spiritual life. The technology is really good

It's very beautiful. I didn't expect this book to be so beautiful at first. Come on.

It's very exciting. I haven't seen such a sentimental and righteous article about cultivating immortals for a long time. Please give it a try, the author. Come on, come on.

The heroine is powerful, she has space, and a spiritual pet, and she embarks on the path of cultivating immortality step by step

The protagonist's character is quite well-shaped, and he's not a virgin at all. The storyline is also quite interesting, and the pace of the training progress is well grasped. This is a very good book about cultivating immortals.

The details of the story are well designed and the logic is rigorous. I also like the author's emphasis on using traditional unit words, which gives people a good sense of immersive reading. It is a great book.

Very nice. Very nice. Very nice. Very nice. Very nice. I won't say it. I will just say it's nice.

It's good-looking, there's not that much intrigue, there's no female rivalry, and the heroine's training isn't exaggerated but she's not weak either.

The writing style is very good, and the writing is very delicate. The author has a profound cultural background. It is different from other primary school students' novels. It is very interesting. Many people commented that the heroine did not give good things to the master at first, but she is stupid when she is unable to give out so many good things. She cannot test human nature. After the heroine Yuanying monk, she will give back a lot to her master and friends. It is very well written.

The overall look and feel is very good, the heroine's posture is very comfortable, and it is very exciting to jump to the back and scan it. However, there are some typos and wrong words in the previous text, and the heroine's identity as an adult in her previous life has no effect. If you can concentrate on polishing it, you can retain and attract more readers. Come on, author, give me 5 stars to encourage you! Oh, yes, there are too many exclamation points in the text. Sometimes they are in every paragraph of a page, which is very eye-catching.

It's really well written, and the plot is interlocking. The characters are written with their own characteristics

Like to watch. Good writing. The heroine is strong, not a virgin, but warm, loving, clear-headed, and not too violent.