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Among the many "Dragon Ball" fan works, "Get No. 18 Before Krillin" stands alone. With ingenious ideas, the author rewrote the established plot trend of Dragon Ball, giving the protagonist the opportunity to start a unique story line with No. 18 Before Krillin. The story grabs the reader's heart tightly at the beginning. The protagonist appears with a familiarity with the original work and the determination to change his destiny, quickly integrating into the tense atmosphere of the Dragon Ball world. The author's meticulous portrayal of No. 18 Not only retains her coldness and power in the original work, but also adds a bit of emotional fluctuations caused by the intervention of the protagonist, giving this classic character a new charm. The description of the battle scenes is excellent. You can seem to see the flash of energy beams and the afterimages of fists and feet intersecting in the text. The intensity is not inferior to that of the original work. At the same time, it also incorporates the unique tactics and wisdom of the protagonist, making it enjoyable to watch. The gradual warming of the relationship between the protagonist and No. 18 Is handled naturally and smoothly without any abruptness, adding a touch of warmth to the tense and exciting plot. This fan work not only satisfies Dragon Ball fans' fantasies about the diverse plots of the original work, but also stands out in the field of fan fiction with its solid writing skills, wonderful plot arrangement and vivid character creation, and is worth reading.

Taking Number 18 Before Krillin is a wonderful piece of fan fiction. The author boldly innovates and re-weaves the Dragon Ball story, allowing the protagonist to intervene in the plot line of No. 18 In advance. The characters are well-developed, the emotions are developed delicately, and the battle scenes are gripping. It cleverly combines elements of the original work with new ideas to bring readers a novel experience. It is a masterpiece among Dragon Ball fan fiction. I highly recommend this novel by Tong Ren, it's really good.

A very interesting book with many characters. I have been following it for many days to catch up with the new chapters. It is very interesting and light-hearted. The characters have their own characteristics. I like Liuliu Shun [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

This book can still be placed in Tomato. The main character is Sun Wukong, a man with two souls combined. He has an online IQ and is far-sighted. He will never forget to share the benefits with his relatives and friends. He has a positive personality and is capable of crushing all levels. There are so many wives. Even the three female angels are the wives of the protagonist. The other characters are also fleshed out and have their own stories, which are not just simple background boards. The main plot is that Sun Wukong, the two souls, destroys the Red Ribbon Army at the beginning, and then uses Shenlong to stimulate his potential, obtain super-speed regeneration, and a spaceship with a gravity chamber. He uses fairy beans and super divine water to practice in the spiritual time room, and becomes stronger all the way. Pick me up and not eat beef, crush the three bosses, recruit a fat puppet as a disciple, pretend to be Black Goku to teach the super-dimensional Kongbei, eliminate Beerus, defeat Whis, have a fierce battle with the great priest, personally develop the Saiyan Dragon, etc., And finally surpass the God of Creation and become an "all-knowing and all-powerful" existence. It's well worth reading, and it's considered a high-quality Dragon Ball fanfic among the free Tomato novels.

I've been watching it for a long time, and it's still very good so far, but the traffic is too low. Why is no one watching it? The plot is also very exciting. In the Buu chapter, I saw Goku suddenly appear as Kaioshin. I was really handsome. The Thai pants are hot! This can be considered a pretty good batch of Dragon Ball novels, so please keep up the good work, author!

The author's depiction of the character No. 18 Is extremely meticulous, not only retaining the cold yet powerful qualities she displayed in the original work, but also cleverly injecting some subtle emotional ripples into her through the intervention of the protagonist. In this way, like a phoenix rising from the ashes, this classic character takes on a new and charming brilliance. The wonderful description of the battle scenes in the book makes readers feel as if they are actually there, witnessing with their own eyes the dazzling energy beams intertwining and flashing in the air, as well as the afterimages left by the punches and kicks. The intensity of the battle scenes is no less than that of the original work. At the same time, the author also ingeniously integrates the protagonist's unique tactics and extraordinary wisdom, making every fierce battle like a visual feast for readers to feast their eyes and enjoy. As the plot progresses, the gradual warming of the relationship between the protagonist and No. 18 Is handled by the author in such a way that it does not feel forced or forced at all. This sincere emotion is like a trickle, flowing quietly and silently in the tense and exciting plot, just adding a touch of warmth and touching color to the whole story. This fan work greatly satisfies Dragon Ball fans' fantasies about the diverse plots of the original work. Worth reading [learned] Very nice book [Chigua]

A very exciting new book. I have never been interested in reading books like Klin's before. Unexpectedly, this book gave me a big surprise. The plot is compact and rigorous, and the writing is lively and interesting. Worth recommending! ! Come on, look forward to the follow-up!

Oops, Mu Qiu actually traveled to the Dragon Ball world and merged with Sun Wukong? ! Surprise or not, unexpected or not, life will be a mystery from now on, the story is wonderful, the author's writing is smooth, the characters are vivid and delicate, it's great!

The wonderful content made me relive Dragon Ball, which was popular around the world 26 years ago. It has familiar characters and storylines, as well as many of the author's own characters and stories, which makes people very yearning for it. Sun Wukong, Sun Gofan, Chi Chi, I remember there was a boy named Sun Wutian, Bulma and Trunks with Vegeta's family, and those familiar contents, the fairy beans that can restore all the people once they are eaten, haha, just thinking about it makes me feel a lot younger again. Nice story scene! Recommended to collect!

It's quite good-looking, Summoning the Dragon Balls, Sun Wukong, many people's memories. Got it! Like it, share it more, recommend it more.

The images are vivid and full of animation, which takes people back to their childhood when reading! It's so wonderful, five-star praise!

I like Gou Daowen the most. The protagonist has the spirit of Han Laomo and Li Changsheng. He makes you smile at the first glance. Five-star recommendation! Very good [Thinking][Thinking] I look forward to Wukong continuing to grow

Very interesting article. The author has a clever idea, good writing style, and the plot is compact and not procrastinating. It is worth reading. Five-star recommendation~[smile][smile]

This is a Dragon Ball fanfic that I really like. The author's writing style is beautiful and delicate, and the portrayal of Goku is really deeply rooted in people's hearts. I like it.

A very good Dragon Ball fan novel, more in line with my taste than the original work. The plot is humorous and very interesting hahaha. It's worth watching, recommended to get into the pit [laughing] [send heart]

The author delicately depicts the inner struggle and growth of the characters. The protagonist's persistent pursuit of goals is moving, and the choices made in complex situations fully demonstrate the brilliance of human nature. The writing style is concise and powerful, and the pictures are full of sense, making readers feel like they are in the story and witnessing his progress all the way. From being unknown to emerging, every step of the protagonist's journey is full of hardships and hopes, which makes people excited. It is a masterpiece worth savoring, from which you can draw the strength to stick to your dreams. This is a good book worth reading. I like it very much and recommend it to everyone.

The novel adapted from Dragon Ball has a more attractive plot than the original work. The characters have distinct personalities, dare to love and hate, and the IQ is online. It is worth reading [Like]

Wonderful, I read it in one sitting, excellent product!

It's so beautiful~ I love Goku and Gohan~ Are you showing your age?

It's rare to see Dragon Ball Man! ! Awesome, awesome~~ Come on, wait for the update

Dragon Ball Comics ~ Go ahead ~ A classic memory of those born in the 80s ~ I love it ~

It's quite interesting. I really like watching Dragon Ball fanfiction. The story is also very exciting.

To be honest, this Dragon Ball fanfic is quite well written. The descriptions of combat power are very detailed. The most rare thing is that the combat power has not collapsed. The Saiyan transformation is also very novel and the colors are completely endless. It's just that the plot is a bit short, I haven't seen enough yet

What a wonderful story, not so much a novel as a rich piece of reading content. The author brings us into a wonderful world, which is really interesting.

The writing is very good, the characters are vividly created, and you feel immersed in the story.

This is an anime novel that I like to read. The story is set in Dragon Ball and the content is rich and colorful. It is worth reading. It's a very good graphic novel. I was attracted by the title at first glance. It's worth reading.

The author has a rich imagination, and the clues in the whole article are clear and clear, especially the description is very full.

This book is good, the plot is compact and not procrastinating. I like this book very much. Good luck to the author!

A novel with a good subject matter and a sense of imagery.

The author's writing is smooth and the storyline is wonderful.