Prodigal Son, Swordsman, Guest in the World of Mortals

At present, this book has the flavor of a general manager. I don't mean to disrespect the author. I just feel that the writing is very interesting and I hope the author will continue to maintain it. I hope the protagonist can be more unrestrained. After all, he is a swordsman who started in the tenth realm. He can be reasonable, but he doesn't need to be too rigid. When shaping the image of the protagonist, he should be a guest in the world as the title of the book says. When designing the protagonist to maintain a bystander perspective, it is best to be attentive and distant. Don't make the protagonist look like a person turning the pages of a book, which will be a bit biased. In addition, please don't increase Li Yuan's role too much. There is no need to use her as a protagonist to see the good and evil in people's hearts, and there is no need to play tricks to attract people to be kind. Her behavior itself is a bit disgusting. It will not make much sense to use the protagonist to change her image later. If the story is spread out, Like Yiduo, it doesn't make much sense whether she is portrayed as the second protagonist or a purely good person. Her subsequent character image will appear one-sided and stereotyped, and retaining her shortcomings will be disgusting. Unless she has no intersection with the protagonist, it is basically equivalent to giving eye drops to the readers. The above is just my personal opinion. If there is anything inappropriate, please treat it as if I didn't say it.

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This book is indeed a significant improvement compared to the previous one. I hope the author will not be a eunuch [please ask for more updates]

Good quality and well written

Very good, worth recommending

Come on author, come on

Good looking, clear plot

It's pretty good, hold on tight, don't be a eunuch [laughs]

The writing is very good, but can you clearly define the realm? Make it clear where the protagonist's strength lies

Good-looking five-star praise

Come on, come on, come on

It smells like a sword

Not bad, keep up the good work!

Not bad, a bit interesting

Brother, please update quickly [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Good looking, good and interesting