Younger Sister*************

The rhythm and mood of the writing, as well as the creation of some characters are quite good, but the plot itself is too cliché, to the point of being rubbish... (The author himself should also be able to feel that he has written several particularly clichéd plots) It is recommended to consider designing some more layered villains and giving some more innovative settings and plots. After all, the story itself is the most important thing. (I know that even if I say this, there should be no changes to this book, but even if it is cliché, it still has an audience. I am looking forward to the next book.)

If a girl-control girl talks too much about her girlfriend, it is easy to dilute the feeling of a girl-control girl. . It is recommended that the younger sister gradually develops into an extremely possessive person, and starts various Shura fields towards the female counterpart around the male protagonist. . . . In this way, the heroine's route is more interesting than yours... The male protagonist's route planning…

I will give myself a five-star rating first [give my heart] [give my heart] I will keep updating this book and try to get rid of all the poisonous points. I want to make money! !

Generally speaking, there are a lot of poisonous points. She is a traditional female police officer and very uncomfortable.