My Sister Said She Hated Me Before She Was Defiled, I Traveled Through Time to Save Her

Name: My Sister Said She Hated Me Before She Was Defiled, I Traveled Through Time to Save Her
Author: Divine Crane

妹妹被玷污前说恨我，我穿越救场

by Divine Crane (神仙鹤)

Status: Ongoing
Length: 121k Words
Genre: Urban
Subgenre: Urban Cultivation
Audience: Male
Updated: 2y ago
Source: Fanqie

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5.8Score

54Chapters

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Synopsis

[Time Travel + Urban Cultivation + Sister Control + Invincibility + School Beauty + Not Stallion + Villain IQ Online] [I have experience in writing novels with more than 600,000 words, and there is no plot about grandfather and granddaughter. Yue Liuhui, who traveled from Blue Star China to the world of immortality, was blessed with the blessing of his ancestors. Apart from his cultivation, he only had the foundation-building period, and his alchemy, weapon refining, formations, puppets... All transcended the ordinary and became holy. Once he went out to travel in pursuit of a first-class star, but his soul actually traveled through time again. He came to the earth star Jiuzhou and accidentally took away the body of a mortal named Yue Liuhui, and he also had a beautiful sister! Kyushu was weak and divided by the great powers. The domestic situation was severe and it was surrounded by enemies abroad. Let's see how Yue Liuhui works step by step on the ground, kills Japanese ghosts and gods, suppresses North American puppets, solves the dilemma, unifies Kyushu, and returns to the world of immortality to find a way to save his sister. If you look at the world in the future, it will definitely be a world of red flags!

Reader comments

The rhythm and mood of the writing, as well as the creation of some characters are quite good, but the plot itself is too cliché, to the point of being rubbish... (The author himself should also be able to feel that he has written several particularly clichéd plots) It is recommended to consider designing some more layered villains and giving some more innovative settings and plots. After all, the story itself is the most important thing. (I know that even if I say this, there should be no changes to this book, but even if it is cliché, it still has an audience. I am looking forward to the next book.)
8 likes2y ago
If a girl-control girl talks too much about her girlfriend, it is easy to dilute the feeling of a girl-control girl. . It is recommended that the younger sister gradually develops into an extremely possessive person, and starts various Shura fields towards the female counterpart around the male protagonist. . . . In this way, the heroine's route is more interesting than yours... The male protagonist's route planning…
4 likes1y ago
I will give myself a five-star rating first [give my heart] [give my heart] I will keep updating this book and try to get rid of all the poisonous points. I want to make money! !
2 likes2y ago
Generally speaking, there are a lot of poisonous points. She is a traditional female police officer and very uncomfortable.
2y ago