I’m the Head of the Dao-Seeking Sect, and Every Disciple I Take Turns Against Me

It's not bad, I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot and use less knife.

Not much to say, everyone has their own ideas. The author's writing style cannot be said to be good, but the characterization is also in line with my taste, and there is a lot of foreshadowing. The most important thing is to listen to the advice~ I really hope this book will get a high rating Emm, I would like to add that 56, 57, and 58 have relatively big poisonous points. The impression is really bad, but it is acceptable. Set it! I realized, it turns out that this is the case, I like reading novels, and I like to read things with happy endings. Including the process, and the reason why the author's book has a low rating is that there are too many evils in human nature, and it almost gives the impression that they are all bad people. Just compare the 56 I saw yesterday with the woman named Xiao I just saw, including "driving". The evil of the part is used in this cool introduction, and the portrayal of the protagonist and the apprentice is actually okay, but compared to the introduction, it is too... Bland. If the author really wants to get a higher score, I personally feel that if you want to describe the evil of the villain, it is best for others to dictate it, or... For related people... "Driving" "The problem is downplayed, it makes people look too uncomfortable, and it is a bit poisonous... But not too big. The first impact many people see is probably to abandon the book, especially the 56 pictures and the clip I just saw with the surname Xiao. It is really hard to watch, but... I have to support it. The writing style is still too immature or the painting style of the whole book is too much." It's so bad... It gives people a very bad impression, five stars... Because I feel that this book has good things and the author has listened to his advice and is still updating it. Now to be honest, I can't read it anymore. I will have more than 3,000 hours of reading time anyway. I hope the author will do better and better. Thank you 😘😘😘

After reading it, the writing is pretty good, I can give it an eighty-eight. The shortcomings are that the emotional line is generally written and the ending is too hasty. The rest is okay, the protagonist is good, the heroine is not too much, and the heroine is not too good. By the way, the palace owner's emotional line is not very good. In the end, it is not clear which heroine she said has a grudge against her. 😏 Generally speaking, it's okay to read it as a romance novel. I support it.

After reading dozens of chapters, it's still quite good. The story has twists and turns, and the characters' emotional portrayals are quite full. It's obvious that the author wrote the story carefully. However, the apprentice's strength is still relatively weak. Going out is a life-and-death crisis. The master doesn't give any reliable life-saving treasures. It's not very satisfying to watch the apprentice come out.

So far, it's generally okay. However, the author, my dear, could write less about those ups and downs, um, add some plot.

Not bad, relatively cozy

Although this book is not finished, I think it is still relatively good-looking. I have no regrets. Once again, I will still give it five stars.

Come on! The young lady who wrote Xiao Huang's letter 😠 😠

Xiao Shuang'er feels so pitiful and heartbroken 😢 Can you give Xiao Shuang'er a chance to be reborn? I give it 5 stars. It hurts to see it.

Come on, author, except for the plot of the Demon Gate, which is a bit toxic, everything else is okay.