Are There Any Normal People in This World of Immortality?

It's so exciting. It actually combines script killing and immortality cultivation. The plot is compact and organized, and I don't want to miss every chapter. Although it's not particularly funny, the plot is really attractive. The friendship between the protagonists who sacrifices themselves to help each other is very touching and a bit passionate. The emotional development of the male and female protagonists is relatively slow. They are not the kind that will last forever as soon as they meet. I like this kind of slowly falling in love, like a long stream of water.

This is the first time I have seen this type of group portrait novel. Xie Yuzhao (Shangjiang/Female Demon Lord) Sheng Mingyu (Pei Wenzhu) Gu Wan (Xue/Ah Mi) Xie Jin (Fu Liuhuo) Li Zhaoyang (Lu Zhong) Xie Yuzhao vs Shaoji, Sheng Mingyu vs Li Zhaoyang, Xie Jin vs Gu Wan (Pei Wenzhu vs Cui Shi, Xue Mi──Fu Liuhuo) Everyone who has been transported through time has their own story, and the image of each character has been established. There are also many beautiful descriptions of the environment. It is really a very good novel.

Incorporating script killing, the subject matter is somewhat novel. [Like] The author writes the characters and emotions with great detail. The plot has a good rhythm and doesn't feel draggy. The only awkward thing is that the amount of plot information at the beginning is too CPU-intensive for first-time readers. The huge amount of information makes it difficult for people to remember who is who. For example: During the reading process, the characters of the Silent Mountain line, the former Demon Lord and Dayun Sword Lord, appeared one after another, and the timeline made people feel a little confused. I often think back and still can't tell who is first and who is last. [Working on draft] The soul wearers don't know each other, but they help each other in mission after mission and remain friends. For example, when they first saw Lu Zhong being chased, everyone's reaction changed from running away at first to standing side by side in front of him. In the process of getting along, we have to protect everyone's beliefs even if we sacrifice ourselves. The story line of Ah Mi and Ah Shui interspersed with the original characters in the mission, lamenting the original characters' hard life, disbelief in destiny and indifference to life and death. I feel that after experiencing the story line of the original body, the soul wearer can still maintain his own temperament and attitude, and let him survive in the world again in another attitude. [Sending Hearts]

So pretty! ! I say the group portraits are the coolest! Ahhhhh, the author is going to add 100,000 words! ! ! !

It is based on Werewolf, with a local mixed in among the group, and the language style is also very humorous and relaxed. It is still worth watching [Love][Love][Love]

It looks good, it looks good, Concubine Jiang is so domineering, Concubine Mi is such a strong contrast, Wenzhu is really a contemporary tyrant, Fu Liuhuo is so strong, Lu Zhong is so shy, and in the end, Shaoji is so domineering [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's really very good-looking, the characters are very successful, and everyone has their own characteristics [Chigua] [Chigua] The small group is very warm, but there are also some glass slags [crying] There are six people and three teams of young lovers, hehehe, they are so cute, hehe, each team is sweet, hehe, but what a baby [currently working on the draft] [currently working on the draft] I really like the innocent character of roasted chicken, how often can I return to the show [Exploring] [Research] QWQ is a little confusing about the characters at the beginning, but the more you look at it, the clearer it becomes, because everyone's characteristics are very distinct. [I understand] It's also a bit funny, but it's a bit less now. The author keeps up the good work. I believe that such a good article will become popular sooner or later. I look forward to the subsequent stories [Salute] After all, I have dug so many pits hehe

The content is quite exciting. I like to read it. The key is that the author is very careful and will patiently answer any questions. I am really touched. Come on! Dear author, I look forward to your update [blowing kiss]

The characters are well created. Each of the six-person group has a background introduction and is a group portrait. It's said to be a joke, but it's half a joke and half a joke. You may be confused when you first read it, but when you look back, you can't help but admire the author's imagination. Every time you guess something there will be a big reversal. This article starts with a script killing, which is a very novel theme in immortality writing, but in the end it is just a conspiracy. The five people who traveled through the world solved the riddles of their own life experiences and memories through repeated contacts with the world. Yes, the original owner is really dead, and a new soul has passed through. The original owner was beautiful, strong and miserable, but the current owner is beautiful, strong but funny. Xie Yuzhao, the calm and calm brains and "mother" of the team, is the person whose identity remains the most mysterious ↑"There is always someone to protect you from the wind and snow, and that bright color breaks into the snowy night, ↓It makes people unable to take their eyes away." It's slow and the emotional line is not obvious Shaoji, a "problematic" teenager who is cold and lonely and has a crush on Xie Yuzhao but doesn't know it, will have a reverse life experience in the later period (in the world's perception). It's a bit awkward for people to talk less, but he was cute when we first met him with amnesia. The cool talker, the poisonous bamboo demon cultivator, and the harpist Xiu Feiwenzhu (the original person still had a couple of CPs, but the original person died and the other one lost his memory. They help each other and work hard to move up the group) ↑Yes ↓a pair A bit timid but responsible, the heartless and loyal puppy Lu Zhong (who was born in a miserable life and has a brain for love, is innocent and stupid) Ah Mi, who comes from a fortune-telling family, is strong, confident, and bright. He loves to eat melons and is very lively. It's funny that Senior Brother Ah Mi, who is the number one sword cultivator and a bit naughty, is in trouble and loves to be naughty. In addition to the main cast, the supporting cast is also very eye-catching It's hard to let go of Bai Yueguang Wenjiang's preference for her and her obsession with her former demon lord husband Shangqiong Shang Jiang, a little fox who didn't understand love or hate and was raised by the two above for two years, became paranoid and cold after Wen Jiang's death. He only wanted to ascend and resurrect the two, but he made many mistakes and finally woke up. The masters of the six of them are all very good and love their apprentices very much. The nagging "old lady" Guanshan, the master Mi Yufuliu. Qing Leng is actually very concerned about his apprentice's knife, Yan Zhen, the bamboo master. Qingdai, the kind-hearted senior sister who raised Lu. Wu Lian, who is venomous on the outside and has eight hundred hearts and minds to practice hard just to resurrect his half-brother who was good to him when he was a child. He even uses his brother's name "Wulian" as his own name just to remember him and let him live in another way. His inner dramas are many and very interesting. Etc. To sum up, it is very interesting, the author's writing style is also very good, and the values ​​​​and sublimation are not obtrusive, which is very good. Please take a look and really like it. @KELJINX author, can you promote it more? No one wants to discuss it [almost crying]

The 5+1 team is simply awesome [sending my heart] except for the male protagonist. Personally, I think this book would be better without a male protagonist [cool]

It's super good-looking and the main plot is really exciting. Shangqiong and Wenjiang are very easy to cry, Pei Wenzhu and Cui Shi are very good to cry, and so are Qingdai and Lu Meijian! ! ! ! The same goes for Shang Jiang. The back of the book is hard to read [cry][cry][cry] but it's really beautiful. Long live passion! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The six people are really the group portrait in my mind. They are super, super beautiful. This article is my favorite group portrait article! The plot is mind-numbing, but the mysteries are revealed one by one in the end. It's really good. I started reading it in August last year and haven't read it since October (probably). I was too busy with my studies. Waiting for the winter vacation was really worth the wait. I read it all in one go. It's really not a great feeling [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] If you like group portraits and imaginary plots, you must not miss it [Cool] [Cool] [Cool] If you don't like it after reading it, I can only say that your heart is not here. It's okay. Anyway, the person you love loves it to death. If you don't like it, tap the upper left corner or swipe left to exit [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The writing is super beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] Yu Zhao VS Shao Ji, the main couple is also very interesting, very sweet! [Shy] [Shy] The theme of the book is also very novel, combining script killing with cultivating immortals, giving people a refreshing feeling. Both the original owner and the protagonist have distinct and three-dimensional characters and rich images. The friendship and trust between the protagonists are also amazing! [Send Heart][Send Heart] has brilliant writing, strong logic, and moderate rhythm. It is a good book worth reading! Although it is advertised as light and funny as a whole, there are also subtle plots in it that are thought-provoking.

Overall, this book is okay. The protagonists all have very distinct personalities. Key point, key point. This book does not contain any gay men. This alone can give you a five-star praise [like it], because half of the cultivation books I usually read have gay men or women. I was really blown away by the mentality of a gay man at the beginning. Every time I read a cultivation novel, it's like opening a blind box. I'm afraid that I'll see a gay man (the gay men I'm talking about are all deputy CPs, and they are deputy CPs in male-female novels), so it's a five-star review [like] [like] [like]

The only problem is that there isn't much written about Xie Yuzhao. Her care for the male protagonist is very inexplicable, especially the plot where she enters the male protagonist's inner demons. She must risk the inner demons to save the male protagonist, but the male protagonist in the inner demons experiences the same pain as everyone else, and there is not much danger in exiting from the inner demons. There is no conflict before and after. As a result, the whole plot has little ups and downs. If there are some conflicts in this plot, they can be used as highlights to sublimate the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist. You can also use the vortex to hide the female protagonist's vague feelings for the male protagonist, so that the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists later will not be too confusing. Similarly, when confronting Shang Jiang, the heroine shouts a few words and flashes of memories before she kills Shang Jiang and is willing to fall asleep. In addition, in every plot of the book, the heroine is like a background board, saying a few words and thinking secretly without deep psychological activities. The male protagonist has the same problem. Overall, the writing is good. Some characters are more like protagonists than the male and female protagonists. The characters and story lines of the original protagonists are more exciting. However, the several protagonists who came through make people feel that they are just gathered together because of the script. There are too few stories between groups and too many individual stories. I hope the author can make more improvements in the future. First, he must establish the protagonist's character, and then extend the portrayal of other characters, and then write about the conflicts or companionship between the groups. The individual portrayal should be the finishing touch based on the full portrayal of the group.

This book is very clever. It combines script killing and immortal cultivation. Everyone is not just a time traveler, nor is he limited to other people's personalities and identities. He has not forgotten the education he has received since childhood because of time travel. As the plot develops, their personal memories and those of the original owner continue to appear and interact, gradually promoting the growth of the characters. They have all grown from novices to become more stable and reliable, instead of suddenly becoming stronger and imposing various cheats. A group portrait is a group portrait. It does not specifically highlight how powerful a person is, but also emphasizes teamwork. Don't read this article as a bit of a joke, I'll give you a tear-jerker The pattern is great. Please put five stars on this article. I really love it.

This is the second group costume book I've read, it's so interesting! ! The story of the undercurrent of fire is very exciting. I really like the sentence "The undercurrent is not water, it is fire!" Mi's story is quite heartbreaking. Her aunt may love her, but she is just afraid that she will resist the will of heaven like her sister, and that she will not live up to "Mi" She failed to "go with the times" because she was afraid that Mrs. Dian (himself) would not let her follow Sister's will, so she would be as powerless over her death as she was about Sister's death. She was Xue Shunshi's child and had a natural sword bone, so how could she be inferior to Xue Shunshi. The way Mi carefully longs for love makes me so sad! ! !

"In the middle of the broad valley, six boys and girls stood or sat on the rugged rocks, staring into the distance, quietly waiting for the arrival of the uninvited guests." It's beautiful, I like this kind of group portrait, it's also very funny, and it's also very funny, sad and warm. The six of them are very happy together. I look forward to the following stories [Explore][Explore]

Ah! ! ! Family members, it's so beautiful [shy], I rarely see such well-written articles, the author portrays the characters with a sense of youth. Although everyone has traveled through time, they have penetrated deeply into that world without knowing it. Fu is the kind of cheerful big boy who is familiar with him and will take the initiative to bring roast chicken to participate; The author is not perfunctory in describing the supporting characters, but depicts each person's story line very well (for example, Cui Shi and Yuan Pei Wenzhu are really tearful [almost crying]). (Maybe I like roasted chicken more, but I think there are too few scenes in roasted chicken [I almost cried]. Maybe it's because his character is such that he talks less, but there are really few scenes in roasted chicken, and the emotional line is not clear, otherwise it may seem that the relationship is a bit far-fetched.) Of course, the author's writing is still very good, and the holes dug in the front are filled in to form a complete plot line. (Looking forward to the author finishing the update soon [face covering] because school is about to start [crying])

Very novel! This is my first time watching a movie that combines time travel and script killing. In order to save Wenjiang, Shangqiong found a little fox who was rumored to have nine lives, but he didn't know that a fox tail without love can't save people. Fox has lived with them for two years. She also likes Wen Jiang, a warm person, but she still doesn't understand love. Wen Jiang and Shang Qiong are just passers-by in her life. Wen Jiang was a very kind person, but later she found out that Shang Qiong wanted to exchange the fox tail for her life, so she committed suicide. After Wen Jiang died, Shangqiong turned all his cultivation into weapons and gave them to the little fox. To the fox, they are just like their parents. Later, the sad little fox finally came to her senses and named herself Shang Jiang. She wanted to open the Tianmen and grow Nine Tails to save Wen Jiang, even though she knew Wen Jiang didn't need her to survive in this form. Fox used one-third of Lu Zhong's soul and half of the other three souls from different worlds to create Xie Yuzhao's Qiqing as his own, and summoned them to this world in a script-killing manner, thus creating a new story. I have to say that the author is very imaginative🤓👍🏻The writing is good, but some character descriptions are very long. When there are many people, you will become very anxious while reading, and you can't tell who this is and who is. Everyone has their own characteristics👍🏻It's great☺️ I really like the ending of the ending. I really hope they have a ending to some fantasy novels I have read before, but no author has written one. This is the first one I have read👍🏻

It's good-looking, the cast looks like a fairy, the characters are not picky, the writing is also good in Tomato, the writing is not awkward and very smooth. This kind of script kills the mystery feeling that I haven't seen for a long time. It made me use my brain as a college entrance examination student during the summer vacation. The heroine really fell in love calmly, double strength, man The companions are also very funny, and the plot is not too bad. It refreshes my understanding of Xianxia, which is usually about killing monsters and upgrading. This book is really a bit mysterious and can arouse reading interest [Adore][Adore]. I can't say anything else. It's really good to read [OK]

It's so beautiful. The author's writing style is very good and he is also good at writing about swords [smile]. I personally like the heroine's character very much! The group portrait is really great! I really like the bond of friends! ! ! The male protagonist is also very good, unlike some books that are particularly erotic and don't have too many female and male rivalries, which is very good! ! ! The heroine has a certain degree of kindness but also has her own sense of right and wrong! Good looking

It has a very novel setting and is developed using a script. The main plot is clear and focuses on one person pursuing a career. The first part is very well written, with many interlocking links and many twists and turns. The middle is a little dull, but at the end I really like the point of view on whether to do it for an individual or for the common people. The whole is a group portrait novel, which is rare in that all the characters from the protagonist to the supporting characters are distinct and distinctive. The author's sword skills are also very unique [smile][smile] Judging from the memory of the original owner, it is really a gentle sword... I feel that the protagonists are well portrayed. The ending of Shaoji feels a bit rushed, and it can really be described in more detail. The emotional line is just right, there is but not much hahahaha, I like this [shy]

Ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah, group wear, group wear, group wear, long live! ! ! ! ! As someone who likes to play script killing, I finally found a funny (?) Article that combines script killing and immortality cultivation! ! I just stock up [shy] I've finished reading it. The writing is really good and the plot is compact. I don't feel tired from reading. Zhao Zhao is the sun.

It took me two days to read this book, but it is really interesting. The plot is novel and the first half of the book is light and funny. As the protagonists regain their memories, knives start to appear everywhere. It's a pity that the real geniuses such as Fu Liuhuo, Ah Mi, Pei Wenzhu and Lu Zhong came to an end. It's a pity that they died unknown to the public. It's a pity that they died for the people they cared about. It's a pity that Shang Jiang understood love in the end but it was too late. The end of the geniuses and their arrival kicked off a new journey. A group of visitors who broke into another world bumped into each other along the way, supported each other, and never left. Fortunately, it ended happily. The six teenagers reunited two months later, and their journey has just begun. I am a young classmate who is in my prime. Thinking back carefully, this book is really short. From the beginning of Mount Sacrifice to Kunlun Mountain, Wuwu Mountain and back to Mount Sacrifice, from meeting to separation, origin and end, for them, it was only a short year. The story is really short, so short that when I think about it now, the plot clues can completely emerge in my mind. It's a really good book. The heroine's character is similar to what I want to read now. I'm used to being cold and unruly. I really want to see a heroine who always has a faint smile on her lips when she treats others. When she smiles, she's tolerant, loving and gentle, but when she's not smiling, she's cold and distant. She's also very strong. She's the backbone of the protagonist group. For myself, I think there are too few fighting scenes in this book; (For a book review, this is probably the longest one I have ever written. This is also my inner feeling. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.)

This is the first group portrait article I have read. Overall, I think it is very good. Every character written by the author seems to have a life, and it really happened in another parallel time and space. They have their own stories and characters, even the supporting characters. No one is a complete good guy, and there is no villain from beginning to end (except Beiqiu). The story of each character will not make people cry, but it will touch my heart and make me feel a little bit uncomfortable. As written in the book, the original owners never regretted their decision, even at the cost of their lives. Although this novel has ended, the stories belonging to Zhao Zhao, the autistic child, Ah Mi, Fu Ge, Zhu Zi, and Xiao Lu have just begun! Finally, I wish "Shang Jiang" will be a hit! ! ! I hope more people can see their stories!

This has to be the best of all the group portraits I've seen so far. I couldn't help but feel joy and regret after watching it. The plot has twists and turns, the author's logic is online, the emotional scenes are mainly about friendship, and there are not many single CP scenes, especially Zhao Zhao and Roast Chicken. In the end, the relationship is still not confirmed, so it can be regarded as an open ending to a certain extent. Before reading the last chapter of the extra chapter, I actually felt uncomfortable because I couldn't let go of every character in it, even a small supporting role. Everyone is vivid and full. There is no absolute right or wrong, there are just some entanglements that people must go through. I was a little bit upset about many of the minor characters, but after watching the extras, I felt like my heart suddenly became clearer. Looking at the introduction, it clearly says that it is relaxed, but I thought it was not relaxing at all. The author is very logical, has a great imagination, and his writing is very fast. I am also an author and have recently been writing articles about cultivating immortality. But to be honest, the style of this book is simply the opposite. It mainly writes about the protagonists' long-term emotional changes. As for why I don't focus on writing the plot, it's because the author doesn't have a big brain! This book is exactly the kind of book I've always wanted to write but was worried about not being able to do it well. All I can say is that it's a long way to go, and I will try my best to follow the author's lead! This is the longest book review I have ever written, and nothing else makes "Shang Jiang" worth it.

I flipped through it again and found that it was a book that I liked very much before. I will write a book review while I still remember the content to commemorate it. One of my favorite things about this book is that the subject matter is very novel and the plot is not procrastinating. Time travel? Script killing? Amnesia? The pasts of the original owners and former members of the six members of the team were also unfolded one by one. The previous pitfalls were all filled up. Others had vague guesses, but Xie Yuzhao was also Shang Jiang. I really didn't guess this. It turns out that the current Qiqiao Exquisite Heart is because I was ignorant before and didn't know anything. Everyone's character is well portrayed. Everyone is not perfect, but every character is very vivid. Not only the heroine will be remembered, but everyone in the small team is worth remembering. They are a group of high-spirited teenagers. In the early stage of amnesia, Shaoji, who seemed to be obedient, regained his memory and it is not very annoying because when he lost his memory, it showed that he was like that, but the later experience made him like this. I have almost forgotten the plot. Qing Leng Yinxiu is the most irritable one hahaha But the original story of her and her apprentice Cui Shi is also very impressive. Lu Ye, the son of the Demon King, is also very funny. He is responsible for the atmosphere... Go to sleep now. I hope you will live well in another world and be happy every day.

This book is very novel and incorporates script killing. At first I thought it was a world in script killing, but the truth revealed later was quite shocking. Xie Yuzhao and Shang Jiang are both named after their friends. Although Xie Yuzhao did not live in real modern life, the experiences he had with his friends after living there are the most memorable. The little fox doesn't understand anything, but life with Shangqiong and Wenjiang is the best. She didn't understand love, but she still tried her best to resurrect Wen Jiang and Shang Qiong for them. Shangqiong and Wenjiang are really raising Shangjiang as their children and they are a very fond family of three. This book is great and the author's writing is also very good. I highly recommend it.

It's nice, but I quite like Yuzhao and Shaoji, but there aren't many emotional lines. And I really like the original members of the protagonist group, including Shang Jiang, but unfortunately they all disappeared. Obviously going to the secret realm was an important node in their lives, including Ah Mi and Fu Liuhuo's reluctance to leave their master. At that time, they had just found the support to continue living; it included Pei Wenzhu's love for Ah Shi and his persistence in their love; it also included Lu Meijian's desire for the recognition of the master and senior sister. But they are no longer here, and the people they care about will never see their original selves again. They are all just be. Although they have few descriptions, I am really sorry that such a high-spirited group of talented young people are gone, and none of them got what they wanted. The only perfection in the novel should be Wu Lian and Wu Tang. However, this novel is still very interesting, please like [like] [like] [like]

Super nice group portrait article! At first, I just thought it was simple, with six people coming together through time and space to play scripts and complete tasks. But the more I read, the more I realized that the content inside was very exciting. The early stage was very exciting. The plot of "Recovery" was mixed with laughter, Be's plot, and very touching and enviable scenes. There are still many impressions in it. The supporting roles are profound and well-liked: the wood-like but wonderful swordsman and consultant, the mysterious Yushi's concubine, the ordinary but very hard-working Li Tinghe, Wutang who keeps working hard to resurrect his brother, and the very distinctive Miss Minshan Yan Ling... It's really good-looking!