A New Book by The Gecko Under the Eaves

Less introduction, it's too wordy, it doesn't give you an understanding of his experience, the pace should be faster, so as not to end badly! It's too long-winded, and 2/3 of it is just an introduction to past experiences. Instead of reading modern history, why not write about time travel and development? I'm not worried that no one will read it, and it will end up being unfinished.

Is it so bad to write novels now that you have never read novels? I don't know what 40 years is good for? I own a grain and oil store, but I wonder if those without pesticide residues are more expensive? Also, those millets and other cereals can be processed at least 5 times the price.

The writing is too messy

There is too much nonsense, the introduction of weapons is too short, and there is a lot of inner drama. It's boring to read.

It's too watery. The content is exactly the same as the one I read before.

The main character is just a rookie

Modern part too stretched crotch

Junk food is really junk

Water. . . . . .

It looks like it's becoming an ocean