Healthy Competition [Campus]

I can't wait to finish reading the serialized part before rating it. The secret love between the teenagers is really poignant. They are palpitating in their hearts but don't dare to disturb them too much. They take the initiative but are not too abrupt. The writing style is very delicate. Why didn't they say it? It's like they already exist. This article blows up. It's a pity that there is no rating, so I give it my five-star praise. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! The teacher writes well! ! So sweet! Nice! Love watching! Still want to see! ! ! I like it so much! ! Jin Tang Yi Yang 99! ! ! Tosugi is still 99! ! ! Two young lovers will be in love forever! ! ! ! !

It's very beautiful. When you read it, you can feel the tenderness, just like the beautiful moment after the spring breeze blows.

The author's writing style is very good, and it's pretty good among the campus novels I've read. However, what I find a bit hard to accept is that the description of high school life is a bit too hasty. It feels like the two people just met, and they were still immersed in the joy of reunion. They graduated all of a sudden, and there was a feeling of youth passing by. Because the beginning of the article is in high school, I didn't expect to write more about life after the college entrance examination. What I want to point out is that the author's writing style is very good. The metaphor of "Long Water" is very appropriate, as if a piece of water vapor is outlined into various clouds, but as in the preface, high school life suddenly ends, leaving people a little confused, so that the subsequent plot is a bit dull. This is the problem that is easy to occur in "Long Water", that is, it lacks some interest and the desire to slow down and read. Fortunately, the writing foundation is very good, and I hope the author can write better works [Love] [Love]

The writing is very good, but the high school part is really not that good. I feel like it could have been longer, otherwise it would feel like it wouldn't come together, and there wouldn't be the feeling of their ambiguous pull. The emotional line of the whole text is too fast, from the second year of high school to the graduation of high school, cheers to the author [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's really good to read. It's the first campus novel I've read on Tomato. It feels so gentle when I read it. I feel motivated to go to school.

Super, super, super like it (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) (Actually, I really want to know whether I am on the opposite side or not [crying][crying][crying])

Beautiful [sending heart], so warm and cozy [blowing kiss], ❤️soft The author writes well and describes the environment very well👍🏻 It was added to the bookshelf when it was first serialized [laughs], looking forward to the next article, keep it up [currently in progress]

Hee hee, I read it twice. I really like this book. It flows slowly but I love it very much. It is very gentle, youthful and youthful. I immediately collected it after reading it the first time. It is really my type of love. The second time I read it, I actually cried. It is really very happy. I will cry when you are happy. But it's not spring when I come. Then I will hide a spring for you. You will always be happy and in love. It's super sweet.

Come on! The writing is very gentle and very sweet