There Is Something Wrong with the Heroine in the Female Channel of Chuan Shu

Writing a book is not easy, so I can't give myself too much praise [laughing evilly]

I met a 30-year-old young woman online. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good. But she said it was fine and we were just friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She is not far from my city. We made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. I had no choice but to be afraid of somewhere else. I met an acquaintance, and I arrived first that day. Because she had to drive for several hours, and while she was waiting, she looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have a beauty function, but when she got out of the Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She was much prettier than in the photos, and she was my type. She also recognized me, and didn't know what to say. In order to break the embarrassment, she suggested hugging her, and I said Well, she smelled very good. I jumped and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. She spent the whole process peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. After finishing the meal, she walked out of the restaurant and held my hand. I didn't break away. She said she would take me home. I said I would take a taxi back, but she insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update twenty chapters to unlock subsequent content.

Support me, it's very interesting to write Nothing poisonous (If being respectful to the master's family when you are a guard is considered poisonous, then I can only say that this kind of person is only suitable for watching the return of the overseas soldier king) Xu Yi, the humanoid succubus, activates! Sister Don, Master and Servant Don, Master and Disciple Don... Simply the king of rice bowls! With such power, who can stop Kou Ya! It's a pity that the update has been discontinued

So far, I think it's very interesting. It's not like the previous book, which was short and difficult to follow. Then, can you not have many individuals reborn? Thanks

Yes, I feel really good about this book. I got it from the previous book. I didn't expect it to be so good here. Okay, okay, I hope the author will read it all. Well, one suggestion is that if you want to write a male video, I think you should write only the male protagonist or a female protagonist and a female partner. The plot is enough. Well, don't write anything more. For example, there is no need to write more about a male supporting character and other female supporting characters. There is no need to write more about falling in love or having an affair. I personally think this is not very good, so I hope the author will not write these plots.

It looked very novel, I thought it was a thigh hug, but the male protagonist had his own ideas. But the current goal is just to survive. Thinking about how to survive and taking things as they come does not advance much of the main plot. Looking forward to the follow-up and the future is promising. Replenish. , Which is relatively unique among the system texts I read in the Tomato app. There is no male protagonist who does system tasks unconditionally for rewards. There are relatively few in the system literature. Come on. Looking forward to the follow-up.

A very good new book. Very potential

It looks good, but I want to know. It is said that the male protagonist would have died long ago in the normal plot, but with this ability and identity, is he really dead? Was he kidnapped, but the male protagonist couldn't resist because he didn't have a knife like the head of the Su family.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking book. It's too short. There's not much more in one day, and it's not like one book per minute. Just 20 minutes per book. It's 24 hours a day, with two hours of rest, and 22 hours. At least I can't finish 66 chapters.

It's a good read with potential, the male protagonist is not a slave to the system. I hope the Shura field will be more intense The system's sense of presence is too low and useless. It is recommended that female characters do not need to be seen too much to mess with. The plot direction is a bit confusing

So far, I can see that it's okay. As for the protagonist, I personally like it, and I personally still like Su Qinghan, hehehe [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

Full marks, needless to say, the description is very good, the current three heroines also have their own characteristics, I like it!

Fortunately, the outline may have been a bit messy in the later stage. It is recommended that you slow down the update speed and try to find some ideas. At the same time, take good care of your body. The body is the foundation.

It looks good, I want to see rivers of blood [shy] I hope the eldest lady will be the heroine [shy] I really like the eldest lady's character

Update soon @ stunned [smile] Isn't your signature still: I hope the novels I follow will be updated faster. Why don't you change it yourself [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's good to read, but updates are so slow~ I can't see the book, and I feel like there's a female ghost crawling on me

Most of the writing styles of male and female authors are different. Men focus on coolness, while women focus on emotional delicacy. It is difficult to find both in male videos. The author has a very good balance.

Personally I think it's okay There's not much knife in the book, but it just doesn't make people feel the same way. Overall it looks good I just hope the author will update it soon [laughing]

It's really good to watch. Although the first few paragraphs made me want to give up the article, but as I continued reading, I found that the more I read, the more I enjoyed it. However, the extra chapters inserted in it are a bit undesirable. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

I've read a little bit so far and read the comments, Harem! Definitely a harem, a pseudo-harem is definitely a concept that is being planned. This is a movie that is very interesting to watch on the radio. Yoona is the only motivation for me to watch it. I hope there won't be any criticism in the future.

The buried treasure book! The male protagonist has strength and brains, and the relationships between the characters are well handled. Although it is a time travel, he has truly integrated into this era. The writing is smooth and fresh. It would be better if the author could learn from the production team's donkey [Thinking]

I haven't encountered a normal light novel in a long time. I didn't expect to encounter it on Tomato.

Seeing that there is no thunder now, I should take it all👀

It looks good and the car drives very fast.

The story is fascinating, the characters are lifelike, and the emotions are sincere.

I really think this book is very good. The overall story is interesting and reasonable, and the characterization is okay. The author also listened to his advice. However, there are two chapters that are not well connected and the story is a bit fast. However, overall I can give it five stars. I hope the author can be faster [laughter] The plot is not well connected at the end, and there isn't much foreshadowing in the beginning. @ The author should change it a bit quickly.

What a good book, the logic is good, the writing is not bad, and the character creation is also quite good.

It's very well written, especially Chapter 176. With the previous foreshadowing, Su Yoona's image has become very three-dimensional. It feels like the character has been brought to life, and the love that previously felt unreasonable has become a matter of course. Can the author do more chapters like this in the future? For example, it would be okay to add a few chapters to some interactions or thoughts between Su Wanqing and Su Wanqing in the past five years so that the relationship between them is not too abrupt.

Not bad, you can have some fun

It's pretty cool, I'll save some time