After Traveling to the New World, Beautiful Men Chased Me and Made Contracts with Me

This is the last time I would like to explain my writing techniques. I am very grateful to those babies who sincerely gave me suggestions [sending heartfelt messages] But my writing style itself is quite delicate, especially since this is a book where I want to express the world view through various positions and characters, I will write the characters' behavioral motivations in more detail, which may cause some people to get tired after reading it for a long time. [Working on draft] I have also tried my best to incorporate dialogue into it, but this is my first time writing, so I don't have much control over the overall plot. I can only try to adjust the proportion of plot and settings in two or three days of content. There are definitely some areas where the writing is not good. [Sending Hearts] Also thank you to the babies who are still willing to watch and don't mind my nagging [blowing kisses] Finally, why not rewrite the law. First of all, as a new author, the goal I set for myself is to keep updating and complete the story. Secondly, I am not a big boss. If I don't finish a whole novel according to my own ideas, and easily change my own writing style for someone else's words, it will easily lead to me not even daring to write. When I want to finish a novel, but I don't even dare to start writing, isn't it putting the cart before the horse? [Thinking] It's written in detail, and if you like it, you'll naturally dislike it. Going into detail, there are different readers who like to read detailed articles. Some readers have better memories, so they may feel that it is unnecessary for me to re-explain a lot of the content before the chapter; but some people may like it, but they may not always remember the previous plot. Some people may be following more than one book, and the reading time is different, so some people catch up to the latest chapter in one go, so they still have an impression of the previous content, but those who have been following updates and reading other articles during the period may not remember it. (That's how I understand it. After all, I've been a reader since I was in the fourth grade of elementary school.) So the former will like my delicate writing, but they may also feel tired when reading it. This is my problem. I'm sorry, baby, my writing skills are not good enough. I can't let others read it without finding me verbose [Sending Hearts] It is currently impossible to achieve perfection, and there is no better way to adjust it. I can only say that when I write the emotional scenes later, it may be better. As for whether my overall writing style can be changed, I also need to read my summary of the areas where I need to improve after finishing this book [Blow kiss] Don't ask me why I don't change it easily. If 10 out of 100 readers tell me that they look tired, I will rewrite it because of them, causing me to hesitate and stop writing. This is the same as being scolded by person A after doing something I like with person A, so I don't dare to do something I like again after meeting person B. First of all, the definition of this book is clear. It is written for myself, and I want to finish it, so I cannot easily deny my writing method because of other people's evaluation. You only gain experience by writing, and you also have control over the plot and content. I don't even dare to write, so how can I accumulate experience? [Working on draft] So this book is certainly not a perfect masterpiece, but it is definitely one that I wrote with all my heart. Above, after the date of this article, I will not respond to comments that make suggestions about my writing techniques. If babies with normal speech make suggestions, I will refer to them as appropriate when writing the next article. If I point directly, I will respond according to my mood. 🌹 ① I can totally understand giving a low score because of the shortcomings of the article! But if I see any difference between the evaluation given and the content expressed in my article, I will explain it below. I don't mean to offend you... In fact, the low score itself is a kind of demining for other readers. The "demining content" you mentioned is not accurate. I must explain it to avoid misunderstanding by people who want to read "demining" later. ② I have described the character's behavioral motivations as fully as possible. It is normal for everyone to have different understandings. Otherwise, I would not have to write so many plot explanations in the "narration". Therefore, if there are any remarks that are "contradictory" to this article and the heroine, I will explain them one by one, because I don't want newbies to misunderstand the heroine and the central idea of ​​​​this article because of "wrong demining" before reading the article. ③ Except for the heroine, I will not interfere with subjective comments on a certain character; it is obvious that my article is slow in pace. But I find it a bit puzzling that some people still criticize those points that I have demined... Well, I can only say that you are happy.

The article described by the author is quite novel. The main reason is that I was very interested when I first read this article. Later, it gradually increased, and then my patience decreased and I became very irritable. I have read the author's lightning protection pattern. Mainly because when I first read the author's lightning protection pattern, I felt that I should be able to read it. However, those who introduced the heroine This planet is probably just introduced a little bit. I feel like the author spent a lot of time writing 60 pages, 90% of which were telling the heroine something about this planet. In fact, these can be discussed separately. Don't write so much at once. Without a transition period, I feel that people have very little patience. Then there is no sense of transition, and some readers will run away. , Especially for some impatient people, who add too many things in the early stage at once. As the author said, you are a novice. There may be some flaws in the early stage of the article. We may not be able to understand it, but you can write some slowly, but don't use "water words". When I read this novel, it was mainly because I was reading other novels. Author Usually, they will make a direct transition here, and will not directly add many genres at once. The author of that kind of novel is fast-paced, while yours is slow-paced. In 60 pictures, I feel that you have covered at least 90% of the content. The main reason is that the setting is novel, so I will read it patiently. Overall, it is not bad, keep up the good work!

The author writes very well about a world with many men and few women, and introduces all the characters in it, as well as the world environment. Issues between society and social ethics. Many stories about worlds where there are more men than women are actually about the problems of the male and female protagonists, but this one is about the problems of the entire society. And it also writes out all the problems and disadvantages of having more men than women. Of course, there are disadvantages as well. Most people who write about more men than women almost hide the disadvantages.

I like the setting very much. Interstellar is similar to the setting of a guide, boys, and they prefer girls. However, the plot of the heroine in the spaceship is too dragging. The plot is as bland as water, and there is no desire to continue reading, so I chose to glance at it. If it weren't for the setting and the heroine's character, it makes people have expectations for the future. It is really difficult for people to have the idea of ​​​​continuing to read. I hope the author will not use large and meaningless words to write the background in the following articles.

The plot is novel, the heroine is very memorable and I like it very much, and the author has very upright views.

There are too many descriptions of past lives, and the pace feels a bit slow. I can understand that the author wants to write out the conflict and friction after differentiation, so as to guide, but several relatively long terms are repeated several times, which makes it feel a little confusing. After slowly reading it, it becomes clear that the animal-like women have not been described in detail before, and it will be a little sudden, and it feels like it is paving the way for the future. But it's really beautiful! ! I also like the worldview very much! Many of the Beast World movies I watched before were about the heroine being sought after➕weak➕having a child. (It's not that it's not good, it's just that I didn't like it.) I turned it off after reading the introduction... There are very few Beast Worlds where women are strong. After reading the author's essay this time, I really like this world view with certain thoughts! ! Many thanks to the author for writing this book! ! !

It's not bad. I like the heroine's character very much. The writing style is indeed a bit delicate. This kind of writing has good and bad qualities. It makes people want to skip the background description quickly and makes people impatient to read it. However, if you skip it, it will not be connected. But [Adoration] feels logical when listening to the book. It's full value, I really enjoy it, I have a clear and definite feeling. [Shy] I don't feel that slow anymore, but I feel that the pace of writing is just right [laughs]. This book actually doesn't have a real story at the moment. It roughly describes the background of time travel and some thoughts of the heroine [Eat Melon] The three views are correct. Yes, I feel that the author does have his own attitudes and opinions about the heroine and social thinking. The author also wrote it in his resume, and he wanted to export some opinions. These opinions also feel that I agree with them. [Working on the draft], I like the image created by the heroine. , But there are also worries that the heroine's actions in the later stories will conflict with the views of the previous heroines, resulting in confusion of the heroine's image, [face covering], but the author's description is still very good at present, I hope to keep writing, [love] follow the ideas ahead, keep up the good work [please update]

This article is well written, but the author said that this is his first time writing, so most of the first fifty chapters of the article are actually describing the world setting. It is not a story about a heroine, nor a story about sweet pets. And indeed, as the author said, it is a quite realistic article, even a little bit real to the point of discomfort, making people feel a little dark and desperate about the world. If you just want to read fast-paced articles like cool articles and sweet articles to pass the time, I advise you not to read it. However, some of the settings and viewpoints in the article are eye-catching, and some of the character descriptions are really amazing. It may be just one sentence, and you will have knowledge and interest in this character. I feel that it is suitable for people who want to write. [Sending Hearts]

The subject matter of the novel is very good, and it is quite good to skip reading. However, there are too many truth-like things. The author particularly wants to show his own point of view, but this is just a novel, and there is no need to be so serious and take up such a long length.

It's very interesting to read. I read it in one sitting. Although the author said that many parts were cut and the plot was not continued well, the personality of the protagonist of this book is so distinct that even small daily things are interesting. It makes people want to read on and want to know how she treats the unexpected contractor. I am really looking forward to the career line of the protagonist and the unfolding of that world. I want to see the whole picture of the other controllers of that world, but since the author has decided to end it, I feel it is a pity, but my own thoughts are the most important. I hope the author still believes in himself. Although this work has shortcomings, in the overall environment, I think it is a good work. I hope the author will be happy and not be bothered by other strange sounds.

Holy shit, these people are so calculating.

The current rating is five stars, but I hope to describe the psychological activities and state of the heroine in more detail. I feel that the heroine's attitude towards the other male protagonists is a bit obscure. I don't know if I didn't read it carefully or something. I always feel that the heroine's character is revealed but not revealed, and many things about the heroine's attitude are added by the author in the subtitles of the chapter. I think I can try to point them out more directly in the text (it only represents my personal views and thoughts, and is not meant to guide writing). In addition, the subject matter of this book is very novel and the settings are very rich. The more than 100 chapters currently are mainly to introduce the background of the story and related management regulations. It is very novel. The interaction between the protagonists is relatively small. The main attraction for reading is the settings. However, the author is very attentive and will provide additional explanations for readers' doubts, and the background logic is relatively rigorous. Overall, it's still very good and worth reading.

The author's writing style is very delicate. It's rare that the writing is not just for the sake of being happy. The author also tries his best to shape each character and an NPC supporting role. The world background created by the author is also very interesting. I look forward to the author's subsequent chapters [Love]

Personally, I think it's okay. The description is more realistic and more in line with reality. At least I personally, like the heroine, cannot trust others at all in a strange environment. At the same time, the heroine is more happy-go-lucky.

It's good-looking, with very detailed descriptions. The characters of the heroine and others are very three-dimensional, but it's not concise enough. The description of the world view is too detailed. If you read too much, you will lose the desire to continue reading, so I basically skip it [Chigua]

It's nice to see that the female protagonist is calm and not licking her. It's good that the male protagonist is not the kind to kneel down and lick the female protagonist or be condescending when he sees her. Everyone has their own brains and their own personalities. What they do is basically in line with the personality and background of the task. The only bad thing is that I found this article when I was serializing it.

This book is the most outstanding one I have written among novels of the same type in Tomato. The setting is very detailed, and the characters and psychological descriptions are very delicate. There are many arguments worth pondering in the book, and some of the problems brought about by the social environment in the book can actually be compared to the current situation. This book is not the kind of novel that is just for the sake of fun. This makes me not read a book so seriously for a long time. I hope the author can write better articles in the future [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The author's world view setting is quite interesting. The heroine is supposed to be the kind of person who doesn't like to make trouble and is relatively cold and resigned. As for the male protagonists, they are all relatively well-behaved and have a sense of service, which is great.

This article is very well written. It is one of the few short stories on Tomato that has a good plot, good characters, not awkward writing, and does not lick men in a fancy way. I hope the author doesn't collapse in the later stage, go ahead!

Good to read [top post] I haven't seen a realistic novel in a long time. The only shortcoming for me personally is that there are too many narrations to introduce the princess and the end of the world. It would be more comfortable to arrange these two nodes to be interspersed with the introduction in the subsequent plot. It is written all at once in the early stage and there are a lot of narrations, which makes readers feel like they are chewing [face covering] Anyway, I just skipped some chapters.

Maybe I just can't accept it and feel a little aggrieved, which makes me like the heroine's character. Yeah, and it looks great in big letters. ٩(๑^O^๑)۶

It's great. Although the pace is a bit slow as the author's wife said, I personally like the feeling of slowly getting to know a different world. I almost caught up to chapter 60 in one go. The heroine's actions and choices are in line with the character's identity logic, the world view is complete, and the supporting characters' actions are not abrupt. I feel like it is a great novel~ ps: I can feel my wife's seriousness in writing the article, and all the details are filled in. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗

I have read a lot of fast-food books, but I haven't read such a normal book in a long time. The logic is clear and the characters are not broken. I also like the setting. I am curious about what the heroine will do in the future. Isn't she really going to sleep as she wished? Now she goes to school after going to the Lord's Planet. What kind of life does the heroine want to live after that? Good looking, love to see more

It's very interesting. Although I mentioned a lot of settings before, I haven't seen the male protagonists yet, and I feel like they haven't entered the main plot yet. But I really like the character of the female protagonist that has been revealed so far, and the background setting is also good. I look forward to the subsequent plot development [Blow kiss]

Big support for the author, come on, just ignore the bad comments. Everyone likes different styles, so don't worry about it.

Come on, author, give you some encouragement

Beautiful and thought-provoking

Support it, it's very comfortable to watch.

I quite like it

It's really good, I still want to watch it [crying]