Variety Comic: an Yilun Doesn't Want to Meet Mr. Su Nuo Either

Yes, but there are too few people to see 20 deaths. The person who bullied the protagonist in the past did not die, and the person who secretly wanted to find out later and was in trouble did not die. Although a few minions died, there is no real feeling. You can watch some of the more stubborn anime characters

A work of imagination and quality, even though it feels like a newcomer, it is really done with care.

It's quite interesting to read, but the author has made some changes to the characters. Some people think these changes are good, while others think they are OOC. As for the character of the protagonist, it is recommended to make certain changes. At present, we can see the protagonist's tax evasion and "fun". Not to mention that he looks like Su Nuo, at least don't make readers think that the protagonist is a pig brother in front of women, and don't let readers feel that the protagonist suffers a disadvantage or is weak. Also, in terms of female characters, is the harem still multi-girl (it doesn't seem to have no girls or only one girl at the moment). Many female characters have appeared, but many female characters don't have many plots, so I don't know if they will fade away in the future (for example, Yuigahama Yui is also considered a heroine in the anime, but the author has really few plots for her. I don't know if the author plans to slowly develop the plots of these female characters)

The author's writing is very good, the writing style is a bit raw, I think it is a novice, and the plot design is relatively good. In addition, I feel that the author can put the middle explanation in the end or beginning and comments, but it is a bit abrupt in the middle. [Think]

Well, the heroine's character reaction is a bit strange, and it's not handled well, but she's very attentive.

The author's attitude is quite good, that is, the protagonist has gained the power of Su Nuo, and the protagonist also gives people a very cautious feeling. Generally speaking, it feels not crazy enough, evil and evil is not thorough enough, it is neither good nor bad, and it is not refreshing. You can learn from the book next door. The book "Broken, I Became the Hero of a Regretful Story". Author, the protagonist you wrote is just a child after all, and has completely lost the value of Su Nuo.

I usually don't comment and I'm giving you 5 stars today.

I only read eleven of them, and I didn't pay much attention to the content. Instead, the author really wanted to improve [laughter]

It's really good, haha. I hope there will be less Lily scenes later on, and then I hope there will be a fateful bench scene [laughing evilly]. It's best to be a chair in the Shura field [OK]

The author has a very good attitude. Although I want to continue reading, it is too magical and the male protagonist gives me the feeling of being a middle-class pretender. If I can't stand it anymore, give it a five-star support.

I like it very much and hope to update more [laughs][laughs][laughs][pouts][pouts][what][like]

Which version of Su Nuo is it? Is it the version from a thousand years ago? Or is it the strongest Su Nuo who possesses the body of Megumi Fushiguro and subdues Demon Xu Luo after the year before last?

Shennong Jiliang, give it 5 stars ⭐ [Please taste it carefully]

It's good that the author persisted until the end. This is a great article. From the writing style and content, it can be seen that the author worked very hard. Keep up the good work!

This author wants to improve so much, he needs five stars.

It's not bad. It's a Su Nuo template. Almost all the characters have two settings, but they also have their own plot trends. I hope it won't collapse in the future.

I feel like the author can read it over again and modify some stiff parts. If the plot is more smoothly connected, he might be able to become a god [laughter]

Um. . . Does the power of the Awakening Memory Su Nuo template bring loneliness? Release your desires and do whatever you want for the people of the motherland?

Seriously, this book is really high quality and I highly recommend it. I don't want him to die young either.

Although it's fun to watch, I still like bland variety comics.

Nice writing, keep up the good work

I really want to improve so much that I have no choice but to give it five stars.

Ing Jianguo North Road Lulan Jina?

Although the comprehensive comic book genre is already bad, but with the addition of the uncle, it is indeed a bit outstanding, I hope it won't be so bad.

Very well written

Very nice and interesting

It's okay. You can watch it.

Very good full score

It's really good

Five stars for encouragement, don't change it if it's not easy