Recognize Yourself in the Dragon World

I have a feeling it will be a fire, so I will leave traces first. The author's writing is good, with a Jiangnan flavor and his own style. The only main task is to let the bad boy become Chairman Lu in advance.

Okay, great. It looks very similar to the original text of Dragon Clan. Unlike other fan novels, it always feels a bit inferior, and there are no bad points so far. If I have to say there is any shortcoming, it is that the author did not update 100 chapters at once for me to enjoy [laughter]

It's a very good book. I just like this kind of story that develops slowly without starting. It's very interesting to read. I wonder if the author has a fan group. I want to join the group to play [Cool][Cool]

It's good to watch. I regret that I need to make up for it. It's very good. The protagonist is not a casual person and is very aggressive with his friends. The main reason is that there is no heroine. It's great [please update][please update]

Rating out of 10: 7 points I finished reading it at the speed of light. The author wrote it very well. 60% Of the paragraphs have a Jiangnan flavor, and the remaining parts have their own writing style, but they feel a bit novice Some characters, such as Zhao Menghua and Ming Fei, are quite well described and handled. Unfortunately, there are still some characters that are not well described. This book is more suitable for those who have read all of Dragon Clan. Most of the words and spirits have no sense of existence, especially the self-created ones. I feel that many of them are just numbers and names. There are also Chu Zihang and Xia Mi. Chu Zihang did not write what he should have at all. According to the author's writing, he is more like a thug who is desperate for revenge, but Chu Zihang himself is a confused leopard. He is constantly getting stronger on the way to find his father, rather than being blind. As for Xia Mi, after writing some parts of the original work, she becomes a bit transparent later on. I feel that after the plot of the original work, she has become a tool person. I can completely free up a paragraph to describe her. I really like this pairing.

This book is really a rare masterpiece among tomatoes, and the writing style is marinated in Jiangnan. The protagonist of this article does not make too much of a fuss like some vulgar fandoms. He abandons the original settings and the original characters' abilities and IQs just for the sake of fun. He opens up a harem that does not treat women as human beings, and tramples on the readers' brains. The images of the original characters are no longer the pale and thin stereotypes derived from the original work. Everyone is a complex and contradictory individual. Even Zhao Menghua is not just a brainless second generation who adds obstacles to the protagonist's growth. He also has his own thinking and his own life. Whether it is a bad kid, a little devil, a senior brother, an emperor, or Mr. KFC, their growth is not smooth sailing or even troubled, and they have to face more than just the risk of death. The protagonist understands their story and is willing to support them, which not only gives them enough training, but also saves them from the too tragic fate of the original work, even if they have to become the enemy of the world, even if they have to be forgotten by the world. Fortunately, the final ending is a happy ending. In terms of plot, I was very surprised by the author's handling of the relationship between Nono and Caesar. She saw clearly her feelings for Caesar. She didn't love Caesar, she was a free witch. The female characters in the full text, whether they are Chen Wenwen, Su Xiaoqiang, Nono or Hui Liyi, they are all living people with their own will, and should not be vases on the table or lace on the paper. They have the ability to experience more and make their own choices after that.

Well, this is my favorite dragon novel so far. But I have a question. Isn't it written as a double male lead? Later, I mistakenly thought that Lu Mingfei and Han Qiu were a couple. I even thought about how to write a pornographic article about them, and even thought about the name of my son. However, I later found out that they were not a couple [face covering]

I really watched it super fast. First of all, I hope the three of them don't die. Secondly, it's really good to watch. I really like it. I hope it won't stop [crying]. I'll update more diligently. Please author.

The writing is one of the better ones in Tomato. As a fanfic, there is no brainless following of the plot. A fanfic with an original plot is already very good in Tomato. There is no conflict in the plot when making up for regrets, which makes it awkward. But the shortcomings are also more obvious. The original dragon family is a kind of tearful and burning, with relatively few burning points. I don't think I need to pay too much attention to the tangled heroine issue. The protagonist of this article has an ending that makes me feel like I have to sacrifice myself to save these miserable people. I always feel that the protagonist will return to his original world sooner or later.

I don't know why the rating is so low😦, it's obviously very good-looking, and the writing is delicate. Although it's very similar to Jiangnan, it's not that similar. It reads like the original. The relationship between the characters is handled very well. The Japanese chapter is indeed a bit fast, but this is also caused by the protagonist's own shortcomings. The story seems to be walked by the people in the book themselves, rather than being bound by the author. It is like watching a real story in another world.

The writing is very good and the writing style is very delicate. However, I think the fighting process between characters can be expanded. For example, describe the fighting movements and the use of spirit spirits in more detail. In fact, as for Han Qiu, he is too dependent on Mr. Han now. I think he can reduce his dependence on Mr. Han and be more assertive. A person's behavior will subconsciously reflect a person's personality, so you can add more descriptions of actions. The emotions of the characters can be richer. If there are conflicts, I think it will be a highlight, because the friction and collision between emotions will be more attractive. (The above is my personal opinion, if you don't like it I can delete it.) Finally, I hope that in Da Da's writing, Han Qiu can make up for the regrets of the Dragon Clan and accompany his children on an unforgettable journey.

The author's writing style is really recognizable. Calm, indifferent, and concise are all the writing styles of top authors. But the character design, shaping, and performance of the protagonist are really not flattering. It is a completely third-party dragon perspective. In the current popular Internet term, it is a camera. This five-star rating is only for the author, and I look forward to your future improvement in the perception of the protagonist. @Has withered

The author is really great. When I first read The Dragon, I felt that the novel always had a sense of sadness. Even the enjoyable parts were satisfying and regretful at the end. The protagonists were always losing, and we witnessed one bad fate after another. I had the same feeling of sadness when I first started reading this fanfic, but the author is amazing. As I read it, I gradually felt the hope. It was not like a great novel at the beginning (it's so exciting that it easily makes people think it's YY), but it gradually makes people feel hopeful. I really want to believe that there is such a person who has traveled to the Dragon Clan and changed the fate of many people and prevented those regrets. I can only say that the author is really awesome [Like] [Like] There is a saying, the dragon flavor is full, if it doesn't work, the author should continue writing about the dragon family.

As a dragon fan, it is considered excellent. The dialogues and inner monologues in the play are very dragon-like. The biggest shortcoming is that it is too slow to pick up. The protagonist in the early stage is weak and has no independent opinion. But after about a hundred chapters, he finally becomes more independent and the most exciting part of the book comes.

The most awesome Dragon Clan fan I have ever seen. The writing is very good. It fills in the pit of Jiangnan with its own point of view. It is no longer the small happiness in the huge pain of the original work, but the departure of one person in exchange for the happiness of the world. The outline is complete, explaining the whole process from arrival to departure, making Shai Zai become a man with gold in his collar, making Chu Xia a reality, making the four emperors coexist, and giving the world a happy ending. The characters are delicate, the image of the protagonist is complete, and the emotional transformation of the others is on track. Finally, the author, can you update the extra story about the wedding and Han Qiu?

It's not the kind of cool novel, and it's not about a harem. I personally think it's very interesting.

I stayed up for a few nights to tie it up. It's very interesting. At first, I did feel that the protagonist was a bit of a passerby, but the interaction with the characters was very good. In addition, the multi-worded spirit is a hidden point that will explode later, so it will attract people to read further. Then I thought about Laolu, which was even more D-like at the beginning, and with the additional settings guided by Mr. Han in the later period, it felt very reasonable. The personal reason is that I really don't like Luo Luo... Seeing her do less bad things is also a point that keeps me watching. Without the old routine of secret love scenes, she really feels a lot more normal. I'm so relieved. I can feel that after Japan, the protagonist begins to have his own consciousness. He is not just a camera or nanny. It is really cool to be able to play Japanese chess. The writing style is very good. This style of writing is particularly suitable for writing about dragons. It can hold the plot well. Author, you give the order and we will support you to become the new Jiangnan ( In the end, it must be a one-to-one comparison with the original CP. TT, the current Senior Brother Chu doesn't feel very worthy of the current Xia Mi. Their characters also make me feel that if they really get together, they will fall in love for a long time and then separate peacefully. As well as the protagonist's vague blood sorrow from another world, aside from the lack of a female protagonist, if there is a female protagonist, it will have to be a female version of Lu Mingfei like Xiami, or simply Lu Mingfei. The unified characteristic is that she can make jokes, bickering skills are not lower than Han Qiu, and she has enough strength. If not, it's better not to have a heroine, and just live with your brothers for the rest of your life, while the brothers are not with their respective wives for the time being.

In fact, the writing, style, and plot are all very good overall, but what can I say... Unless you are a fan of the original work, it feels a bit frustrating to be the protagonist. I just feel a little overwhelmed, and I still feel uncomfortable after reading the tenth volume. The protagonist gave me the feeling that he had no temper, and his methods were too gentle (maybe due to his personal personality). Personally, there are very few things that make me feel happy. It's okay if the CP is not removed, but if I spend a lot of time describing how other people are doing, Lao Han has nothing to do with it (I can't help it if I have to describe group portraits, but it's uncomfortable to look at). It's nothing at first, but it makes me feel frustrated when I compare it. Isn't Lao Han unworthy? [Holds face] This actually depends on the individual. I still like to have a little emotional line, otherwise it would be really uncomfortable to compare. Either they are all alone, or they both have one. Finally, it feels like Lao Han has been giving, giving everything but getting very little. Many people in the original work asked the protagonist, "Is it worth it?" Even though I know the protagonist's motivations from a God's perspective, I can't help but wonder, is it worth it? I read the author's comments and said that this plan was written by a fan [face covering] Well, it seems that I am indeed not the audience. But this book is very well written, especially for those who are avid fans of the original work. Unfortunately, I am not, so I have a greater sense of the gap between the protagonist and I feel suffocated all the time. I can't stand it anymore, but I still wish the author good results if he continues writing it. (Ps: I am really fond of fans, but I really feel that I have pushed away too many audiences, otherwise the results would be much better [face covering])

Going to high school automatically unlocks the Dragon Clan. This statement is actually quite correct. I have always felt depressed in my heart after watching Long San. I have my own way of distinguishing who should die and who should not. It's a pity that the characters in the original novel always hated Ming Fei's growth, so I read the fanfic written by the teacher after a friend recommended it. It took me a long time to read it intermittently, and I felt like I was lost. All the regrets had been dealt with. I felt that this was the ending I expected. The weak child was no longer timid and became a man with a gold lining in his collar. Speaking of the protagonist, I have always felt that the loneliness of the protagonist overwhelms the whole world. He is very tired and wants to go home, but when he actually returns home, it becomes the feeling of playing in the world. The final integration of the world and the reunion with old friends can be regarded as a different kind of good ending. All in all, it's a very, very nice book!

The writing is really good, and it is also very good among all Tomato fans. I've seen more than 400 pictures so far, and I just finished reading Poetry and Wine while I'm young I feel that he is very young and lively, and he doesn't need to think so much. The past entangles you, the past embraces you, and then you accept him. At this moment, the past no longer makes you suffer, and he is as bright as gold. There are shortcomings, weaknesses, and regrets Strong, charming and true Many chapters are like the author's personal experience As long as you give the order, we will support you as the new Jiangnan [Like] I suggest that after finishing this book, if you still have the passion, then write something original, maybe? How do you know if it works if you don't try? Even if you fail, it is not an embarrassing thing. This is not a one-in-one gamble, but a foundation and technology. All you need is materials and time to work hard.

A very good "Dragon" fan novel. Han Qiu redeems everyone and himself. Every plot point is exciting! Overall, there aren't any big surprises (those that didn't make me remember them can actually be ignored). The male protagonist has no cp in the whole story. He is very kind to everyone, but I think his friendship with Ming Fei is too awkward. It has the feeling of "more than friendship, but not enough to be a lover" (just kidding), haha, there are some contradictions in the plot later. Maybe the author didn't pay attention and repeated it. If you read it, please remember to change it (it's the plot of Leviathan Dragon King). The last chapter is really amazing. Although there is a plot of "all the hybrids on this plane have bright eyes" in the anime (I have not read the original novel), I think the author used and changed it very well! ! This way of reuniting has both the Dragon Clan's style and the respect and joy of welcoming the male protagonist back. It's a style! So cool! ! (Han Qiu: You guys are actually more handsome than me.). But there is no extra chapter, and the author leaves a blank at the end, which is so uncomfortable, woo woo woo. I read that the author also wrote two "Dragon Clan" fan novels. Unfortunately, among the author's fan novels, I read this one first. This one has become the No. 1 "Dragon Clan" fan novel in my heart. It impressed me so deeply! ! ! Therefore, the other two films failed to arouse my desire to watch them. But you can tell without watching them that the other two films are definitely good. Recommended for everyone to watch.

The writing is good, I give it full marks. It's the kind of story that you still want to read after reading it. You don't have to finish it. I don't like to catch up on updates, so the fate will end here. Finally, I hope that the protagonist can be accompanied by a good girl, otherwise he will be too lonely.

I have watched 43%, let me report it to you first. I don't know if you have watched EVA. For the Dragon Clan, this fanfic is like adding a character to EVA. The appearance of this character prevented humanity from completing the plan. The plan for all mankind to become LCL failed. Shinji ended up making dumplings for everyone. The author gives me the feeling that he wants to make up for all the regrets in the dragon family, resurrect all individuals (including the dragon), and in the end everyone will make dumplings together. In doing so, all the difficulties of the Dragon Clan were settled, but the Jiangnan discussions about youth, growth, and loss in the original text also disappeared. The author is like a successful Obito, who really created a world with Lin, but at the cost of no more Naruto stories. Add a comment after reading it

I can only say that I found some books in Dragon Clan that fit my taste. The writing is very good, the plot is quite compact, and the characters are not too shabby. Not very OOC either. Just recommended. Very good.

I have read a lot of Dragon Clan fanfics. For example, the story of Breaking Through the World is too idealistic and brainless, and the other writing style is forced and has no feeling. This author's book is really good, but it is not enough to read. I hope it will be greatly improved [Love]

How to put it this way, although I have only seen the ending of The Lord of Bronze and Fire, because I have watched Dragons, I felt a little bit tempted to watch it again, and I didn't like it very much. Other than that, it was pretty good. Unlike Tomato's generally cool novels, the author worked hard to create depth. There is also the point where the male protagonist talks a lot. It is not obvious that the male protagonist is really looking for a girl. However, around the time when he first entered the academy, he repeatedly said that the male protagonist is "lustful", including but not limited to inviting him to dinner after entering the academy. I always feel that the character's personality is very awkward. Although I can understand what the situation is, maybe the portrayal is not done well enough? Or is it too fast and the characters are not three-dimensional enough? It always feels a bit boring, but it gets better gradually. Overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws. I think this is the best Tomato novel among all the Dragon Clan novels in which Lu Mingfei is not the protagonist.

This book is really good, and the positioning of the protagonist is very well controlled. Unlike other fan fiction, the protagonist is the focus, and Lu Mingfei and other characters become supporting roles (for me who have read the original work, I feel that it takes the spotlight), but this one is written more like a group novel, which makes me feel like I am watching the original if line.

The subject matter is pretty good. It's not Long Aotian at the beginning but the protagonist slowly improves his abilities. But to be honest, it's a bit frustrating to watch along the way. It seems that everyone except the protagonist can have a good ending and a destination. There is a feeling that everyone is saved but he is just a tool to save people. I still hope that there will be a female protagonist as a companion instead of the male protagonist suffering in the background.

Overall, this book is very interesting. The writing style and narrative structure are better than similar books. The unique style attracted me very much. I think the only flaw of Bai Bi is that the protagonist lacks the ability to express his subjective initiative. The plots I have seen so far are basically Mr. Han's first-hand mission planning. The protagonist's self-awareness and ideological expression are insufficient. Moreover, since the protagonist of this article unfolds the plot as a guide and a bystander, when I first read it, I read it from the perspective of others. The theme of guiding to rescue is quite fresh, but after a while, it gives people the impression that the protagonist is the background of the story, a stage tool to guide Lu Mingfei to create a tragedy, which leads to the lack of highlighting of the protagonist's self-personality and pursuit, and a feeling of being useless. It is easy for readers to feel the gap and discomfort of the protagonist becoming a supporting role, which leads to abandoning the book. The above is just my personal opinion. Generally speaking, this book is very good [Like] @

The writing is very good! The plot is gradually making up for the regrets. I hope it can be written better in the future and give the dragon characters and Han Qiu a good ending... Also, please, it must be a road painting! As long as it's road painting, I'm willing to do anything! இдஇ