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If no one is watching, then I will just praise myself😌

It's not a hit, the plot connection is a bit confusing, the plot advances too fast, it's fragmentary, like prose, the writing style is getting better and better in the later chapters, but it still needs work, novels require more writing and more practice, so that you can control the context like a blazing proficient... So, the author, you haven't updated yet!!! Hey, please write more for me, you need to practice more cooking, you know? It's so short and weak, please give me another 20 chapters [smile], it's just too weak [pointing and pointing. Jpg]

How can I put it, there are a lot of knives, and they are all dull knives, not the kind of sharp knives, just like us ordinary people have missed something, the kind of daily regret, my heart twitched when I watched it, I really can't stand it anymore, just see the prank here, I can only watch the cookie, woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo [crying][crying][crying]

It looks great. I like this. Come on (´-ω-`)!

I always feel a touch of sadness. I couldn't imagine the content of the book just by looking at the title. Come on, the author, give me five stars to support it (by the way, when does the author want to finish it)

Nice! The author's writing is very good [crying]

It's beautiful, the author's writing is very good Let me take care of it first Author, please don't stop updating

It is a very delicate description. According to the standards of the Chinese language test, yes, the characters in the novel are very immersive. The psychological profile of the protagonist is very successful. Many aspects of the character are presented. The occasional little jokes interspersed slow down the development of the plot (ok 👌, all the above are just my words); I admit that I am vulgar [face covering] but people really love big cars [shocked] learn to enjoy [OK] study carefully [understand] key points [note] haha

Woohoo, really great. The characters are well created. Jiang Yu really wants to be hugged, and it feels a bit like a stream of consciousness. This kind of writing style is really rare in Tomato. I will continue to support it. Come on, madam! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

If you are feeling dizzy, you must be dizzy [cover your face][OK][OK][OK] Writing so beautifully is going to make me [cover my face][cover my face][cover my face][OK][OK][OK]

Whether it is Jiang Yu or Jiang Yu, they are like one person or two unique individuals...

It looks great, come on! Don't give up on the article, I will keep pursuing it! It's really beautiful! The emotions of the characters are particularly delicate and can lead to many implications! Ahhhhh, the charm of a mature old man, I love it so much

It's really beautiful, has a wonderful charm, and is very attractive [love]

The writing is very good. The appearances of other characters are not abrupt at all. They all have their own characteristics. The writing is superb. Keep up the good work.

Rarely good writing! This segment is very camera-like! When I take it out alone, I feel like I can shoot a TV series directly! I actually wanted to cry when I saw it!

Great, great, heartthrob, I love it so much

Oh my God, this article is beyond my expectation [Like]

Very immersive, very unique style, I like it

It's really beautiful, and the emotional changes are very delicate. More updates from the author.

Super, super, super good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! !

It's very interesting, but why do you rarely bubble up? Write! ! !

The writing is good, but it feels very depressing. The protagonist is stuck in a quagmire, unable to break free or escape.

It's really beautiful. Don't give it up.

There's a feeling that's not tomato-y