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It's a good setting to only provide initial Pokémon. It's a bit like Pokémon animation and allows trainers to encounter the Pokémon on their own. Don't let players draw Pokemon for the second time, just provide the initial Pokemon @ Pretty Boy

I saw it in the recommendation. Compared with some books that sell Pokémon directly through stores, this book sells Pokémon games and then integrates them with reality. It feels more comfortable to me. However, I occasionally see two typos that affect the perception, but it is not a big problem for me. However, I still hope that the author will check it before publishing, otherwise it will lose a lot of readers who care about this aspect. I used to think that the author had given up on writing about Pokémon, and I even turned it off [Grief] When I saw this book on the recommendation, I clicked, and soon, I paid attention again [laughing] I hope the author of this book can get good results, and keep writing for a long time [laughing] I will be very sad if I run away [heartfelt] No more...

There's no typo, there really isn't, come in and take a look [laughing evilly]

The subject matter is really good. I hope to write it down seriously.

Leaving aside those who are continuing to read, how many new readers will continue reading after seeing a sharp-toothed land shark defeating a Gyarados? Although not all Pokémon fans have played the game, most of those who have played the game cannot accept this. Fan fiction with a fan base has a natural audience, but it also has natural pitfalls. Nowadays, most Pokémon writers who are good at writing have never played the game and write about it. Those who have played the game are bad at writing or are too gamified. The game data and real-life logic have to match. They basically write down what they have read and cannot do.

A good story indeed. So far, the overall rhythm is pretty good. As a bookworm who has been around Tomato for a long time, this is a good book. In terms of plot, there is no deliberate procrastination. For example, contacts with high-level officials of the country, or some minor conflicts with players and the arrival of elves. Basically, it's something that can be explained using settings, so I won't waste my time. It is also quite unique in terms of training and fighting of elves. The path each one takes and their similar templates. What is similar is not the same. At least some personalization can be done. Except for a little bit of fluff at the beginning, the rest of the article is basically a pretty good one. I hope that I can do some bigger tricks later on. Or some more interesting activities. As a novel to read in your spare time, it can be said to be very good.

Author, listen to me😯 Let me talk about you today 😉 This novel was written by you✍ Please update the novel🙏 Take a look during the day 🙂 Take another look at night🙃 Read this novel all day long😳 When will it be updated suddenly😡 Call me the author 😣 Today I will compose a song😲 This novel was written by you✍ Please update the novel quickly🙏 Open tomatoes in the middle of the night 👽 Just take a look to see if there is any update😥 I hold a mobile phone all day long🤲 Check if the novel is updated😭

The book is good, not many mistakes [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Not bad, but I found a possible bug. If the player's elves can be upgraded at will, it is possible that thousands of king-level or champion-level elves will appear in the later period. This is a world that needs to be integrated, so it is better to limit it.

To be honest, I don't really want to see the relationship between the image of the country in the novel, because once these come out, the subsequent plot will be inseparable from Japan, South Korea, the United States and Canada, and some Western countries will jump out as fixed villains. It is really better to wait for the game to become popular all over the world, and then suddenly come, and the world is in relative peace. This way it feels like Pokémon. But the author's writing is pretty good so far

My bestie! Malignant tumors, acute myocardial infarction, sequelae of stroke, end-stage renal disease, chronic renal failure, uremia, loss of multiple limbs, malignant brain tumors, decompensation of chronic liver failure, sequelae of encephalitis, sequelae of meningitis, deep coma, Deafness in both ears, blindness in both eyes, paralysis, severe Alzheimer's disease, severe brain damage, severe Parkinson's disease, severe third-degree burns, severe primary pulmonary hypertension, severe motor neuron disease, loss of speech ability, severe aplastic anemia! Read a few more chapters before letting her go!

Personally, I feel that this subject matter is quite novel, and it can be regarded as an elf novel that you can read.

It's very interesting, please support the author. There is one thing I don't quite understand. After all, they are two worlds. After putting on the bracelet, what do you see? The people on the opposite side live normally in their own world, and the people on this side also live normally in their own world. In the same location, things in the two worlds are different. Is there no bug? For example, after I put on the bracelet, what will happen if the location happens to be a wall or there is someone there? Or is there another explanation?

It's quite nice, the subject matter is good, but the content is a bit lacking.

The content is very novel, the writing is not obviously poisonous, and the setting is also very good. It only provides one Pokémon, and you have to conquer the rest by yourself, giving most people a chance. The interesting thing is that the number of words is too few.

Not a buddy, why? , Why can't Gyarados defeat the Sharptooth Land Shark?

I haven't seen this kind of Elf game article for a long time. The last time I saw it, it seemed to be called Elf Era or something like that.

It looks good. It's really good.

The subject matter is good, keep up the good work

Not bad, very pretty

How good it is, how good it is, how good it is, how good it is, how good it is, how good it is, how good it is The fang land shark defeated the Gyarados Will the next step be to bite the land shark gauze and super evolve Gyarados 😂

It's pretty good, but it's too short and has many typos. How could Gyarados not be able to defeat the Sharp-toothed Land Shark? Don't do it like this, okay? You have to let that woman win. Why don't you beat Wang De instead of Mu Wei?

It's quite interesting, but if the author doesn't want the pace to be too fast, could he not write the second trainer as the anchor? You thought it would be spread through the Internet, and then you destroyed all the videos and it was very uncomfortable.

It looks great, but some settings still need to be improved. It feels like the league competition can be brought to an end, but it's a pity that this is not the case in reality.

It's okay. It combines the two characteristics of elf sales and elf adventures, and it also has a certain transition, so that it doesn't feel a bit sudden, but the chapters and word count are too few. [Smile]

It's pretty good, and the plot is quite new. It's a great way to entertain yourself when you're short on books.

The characters are unique, the image design is clear, the ideas are unique, the private game is not a game, the following is very exciting, the plot is well grasped, please continue to work hard and look forward to the follow-up

Not bad, the content is pretty good, and it's quite comfortable to watch.

Judging from the order, Gyarados should have defeated the Sharptooth Land Shark, and then Pikachu eliminated Gyarados, but looking at the current situation, the author should have forced victory in order to take care of the woman, and finally became the champion, so the battle here is violent. Damn it, the woman actually lost (つд⊂), it was a mistake

It's really good to watch, I stayed up late to read it! [Shy]