Is This Rebellious Disciple Really Together with the Demon Lord?

The author is kind-hearted and writes a good book. I love it. Woohoo, I like the author the most. Everyone, please join me in giving praise!

Let's give it a good review first. Apart from some language errors and inappropriate jokes, it's generally quite comfortable to watch. If there are any problems, we'll fix them later. To give a quick review, I have finished reading the first 20 chapters, and skipped through the next few chapters. Because these chapters span a long time, I feel that something is missing, and the transition is not very smooth [laughing and crying]. I always feel that something is stuck. Chapter-wise, the maid appears too late, and the plot is deliberately skipped, especially the decades and decades in the middle. It is obvious that the master has only been with him for a few years, and the maid has been with him for almost a hundred years, but her status is not the same. Although the addition of this character seemed very strange to me, it was just like a supporting role to add to the plot. This book is more suitable for a single female protagonist. In the follow-up, the Demon Lord took the male lead under the nose of the maid in less than twenty chapters [rolls eyes]. But because I skipped the follow-up, I can't comment. I can only say that the childhood sweetheart of the maid is real... It's superfluous to say that the father doesn't love the mother and the mother doesn't love her. Finally, I want to say, long live my big sister. Emmm, I've finished reading it. As of episode 53, there may be some spoilers. The current situation is that the master is disconnected for a long time and occasionally reconnects. The demon king is really well written and has a modern romance feel [facepalm]. A very emotional character, similar to what I said above. The maid is still in an on-hook state. The author has said that there will be more plots for her in the future. I actually don't care about the harem. My first criterion for reading a book is the plot, and the second criterion is not in line with my personal preferences. The author has a good grasp of the plot. My personal preference is the big sister (you are already older than the big sister. Jpg), so the follow-up of this book is not very important to me, because except for the master, the other two protagonists are not my favorite type [laughing and crying], but it does not affect me to continue reading. To give a relatively objective evaluation, any single heroine in this book is a top-notch novel as a single heroine. If there are multiple heroines, how should I put it, the demon king ends too early, and she is well-shaped. This situation is a plus for a novel with a single heroine, but multiple heroines are actually a minus. One of them ending too early will cause many problems. The highlight of a single heroine is everyone's love and interaction with this character. The core of multiple heroines is competition. Each heroine has a different progress. There is a priority, and you chase each other, which is an unknown game. Pure harem is another extreme. It is necessary to weaken the personal characteristics of the characters, because one person will not accept sharing the other half with other people, so they are made into a perfect personification, with only shining points but no thoughts. Once they have their own ideas, unless there are some forced external factors, it is subjectively impossible for them to allow the existence of other women. The current three female protagonists of this book all have their own ideas. The author is very careful when shaping them, but their starting lines are completely different. Some are at the end from the beginning, some have successfully crossed the line, and some have not yet stood on the track (although taking a step back is also the end, only separated by a layer of window screen) In a plot with multiple female protagonists competing, jumping the gun or taking the lead is not a problem, but someone crossing the line is a big taboo. This means that subsequent interactions between the male protagonist and other people are no longer reasonable. Any behavior he accepts other women is a betrayal of the superior. The harmony of the harem story lies in the erasure of the independent existence of the female protagonist and the secular concept of the male protagonist. Once someone crosses the line, other characters must speed up to follow up, which will speed up the plot. I hope the author can control this speed. It is highly recommended for those who like to watch multiple heroines and sugar-coated characters. If the follow-up doesn't explode, I probably won't comment on it.

The emotional drama in this book is really good. There is no saying that you will pick one up inexplicably when you see one. Instead, there is a very clear and delicate emotional process. Demon Lord, Master, Xiao Yurou, fell in love over time, fell in love at first sight, they were childhood sweethearts. It all makes sense together.

Fortunately, she is a female author, she knows what we want (it turns out that female authors can also write about male harems) [Please update] It's good to watch a lot of sadistic stories, but it's sweet. I've been writing and saving the manuscript for 50 chapters, but I don't think it's that amazing. I've been revising it and haven't published it yet. After reading it all night, I reached chapter 60. Is there any update today?

The emotional description is very delicate, the progress of love is very reasonable, and the plot development is very rigorous. Although the protagonist has a low level of cultivation, he has the Demon Master as his companion and is protected by his good friend Long Aotian. It was very cool to pretend to be competing all the way without having to take action personally. At least it looks good now, please keep it up in the future. The subsequent battle between avenues is very interesting

Five stars for this emotional drama It will be even better if you add a little more abuse. (For example, Master Bai Yue still wants to kill the protagonist in the end, but the protagonist does not resist and actively accepts it. Coupled with some sensational memory scenes, it is very moving to think about the atmosphere of the crematorium of chasing her husband [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh])

I rarely write book reviews for Tomato, but after reading this book for a few hours, it gave me the same immersive feeling as when I first read the online novel ten years ago. The emotional line is very delicate, which is different from the brainlessness of other Tomato online articles. I can only say that this is a very good novel. Good luck to the author.

The writing is okay, the three heroines are all very good, come on, do more daily emotional dramas, make it sweet

The emotional line is well written, the male protagonist has a good personality, and the female protagonists have their own characteristics, but I strongly recommend strengthening the male protagonist! ! !

It was okay. The emotional scene with the Demon King was a bit uncomfortable to read, but the one with the Master was okay [thoughts] I haven't read it for half a year and this book is still being updated. The author insists and doesn't stop updating [crying][crying][crying]

It looks good. I love reading it. Overall it's really good. Although the author is a girl, I still recommend updating without taking a break every day [smile]

Now look at it, let's give it five stars first.

It's okay. I haven't read a harem story in a long time. It was written by a female author.

Good looking author, keep up the good work on you!

It's pretty good, but at first I thought Ye was the protagonist. It was a bit too useless. And what happened to Su in the last chapter? Don't be evil, okay? I quite like her.

The characterization is quite good, the personality traits are obvious, and the plot is rich. Recommended

It's pretty, it can be pretty good