HP Is Broken, I Really Become a White Moonlight

[Shy] I really like this book! The character setting is consistent with the original work, the charming character makes people's hearts beat, and the description of the heart is super delicate. I love the scenery and the baby. The author must not give up on the article! Support you [love] [love]

Overall, it was quite enjoyable to watch. I just read it all for him one by one. One of my regrets is that it was a bit uncomfortable to have no memory, and I was convinced that I was stuck between the pro era and the ancestor era. I felt that the heroine would be sent off in that timeline in two chapters. Why would Tom be crazy then? I hope to give Abu some extra stories, I can't stand it, and I also like the author who wrote Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them (forgive me for forgetting his name for a moment). I can't even imagine how sweet the interaction between them will be, and there are many regrettable characters, such as those in the ancestor era, and Abforth, etc. By the way, he is not dead in the pro era, right? All in all, it is a very nice novel ꒰ঌ(⌯' '⌯)໒꒱. The author also researched the information very carefully and has good control over the characters. So far, I don't see too many flaws, and I still like it.

Woo woo woo, strong recommendation. This is the first time I have written a review after reading it for so long. Really like it! I have a sense of fate, who knows, I really like this kind of "we met by fate, and we will meet again by fate" [crying]. It's just the details that are amazing [Admiration]. There is not only love in it, but also family affection which is really touching [crying], and of course, there is also friendship. Who knows, when I saw Mr. And Mrs. Arthur watching our little butterfly on the observatory from a distance, I couldn't live up to expectations and shed tears [crying][crying][crying]

I really like it. I must keep updating. Come on! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Please update]

It's so good, I love to read it, I read it every day, but the author strongly recommends that you mark the ones with GGAD, because not everyone likes to read it, I don't like to read it [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

The writing is very good and the content is also very good. I strongly support the little wizards who click here to read this book. Come on*^_^*

It's really good-looking, the writing is very good, and the plot is very coherent. Generally, the timeline of this kind of article is very confusing, but the author has sorted it out very well this time, giving people a clear and clear feeling. It's really, really good, super good-looking.

Nice! ! Although the plot is a bit rushed (after all, the fourth life, the order is 1423!) If the timeline does not match up, you can see that there is an explanation later~ Although the heroine has lived for four lives, she slowly gained all her memories in the fourth life, and she died early in each life, so her mental age is not very old. In fact, I personally think that the 34th generation is not suitable for the heroine [face covering] The most suitable one in my heart is probably Tom, the brother who has been accompanying and relying on me since childhood. And Abramovich and Sidri also feel like a good fit. The child era was too immature, and the pro era felt that the relationship between Tom and Abu was more obvious in comparison with those young men.

It's really beautiful. The content behind it is really amazing. Can the author write more extras? I really want to see his old friend ^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^

The setting is very poignant to me. My old friend is old but I am still reincarnated. The sense of fate is very poignant [crying] [crying]. The heartthrob setting is also very touching. It makes up for a lot of regrets. I quite like it, but the writing style is relatively immature. Some places are a bit awkward and awkward to read. Apart from this, everything else is pretty good.

The writing is a bit naive but the plot setting is excellent. I like the author's big imagination. It's also interesting to intersperse the second and third lives in the fourth. Dumbledore cried when he brought his previous parents to see the heroine. You can choose the extras you like because most of the plots are similar. Personally, I prefer the West Delhi extras.

I particularly like the content. This is my first and favorite Harry Potter book on my bookshelf. It is very rich in content, including the heroine's stories about characters from various eras. The author also updates very quickly.

Please give me more updates. I really like Jinghe. He is hard-working, talented, optimistic and cheerful. He is like a little sun that can warm everyone around him. Although sometimes I feel discouraged, I still stick to my ideas and try to take care of everyone around me. I haven't seen such a beautiful HP in a long time.

At present, the timeline is developing relatively quickly. But what? The emotional line is not about love at first sight. Although there is no detailed description, the psychological process of falling in love with the heroine is described in detail, which is pretty good. I don't know what the GGAD is from the introduction, but I saw it in the paragraph review. It turns out to be a pair of deputy CPs (or GAs). It's a bit weird, but I personally don't mind it, so it's 4 stars. I haven't read any Zu era fanfics. So I don't know much about these names. Oops, it's so difficult to remember them. I didn't write about it in detail in the Zu era, so I guess I won't write it in detail until the Zi era. To be honest, the person is really outrageous, and the romance is full of corruption. . But luckily only a little. Personally, I feel that I prefer the protagonist group as I have memory. It feels better to watch without memory. Also, dying in the first life was too hasty. There is also a problem with the author's sentence segmentation and paragraphing. There will be a long paragraph, which makes me dizzy. There is a secondary cp (original cp), and the description space is not much, so it is quite acceptable. Oops, what a pity, the sentence that runs through the whole text is that before you were born, I will be old after you were born. You hate that I was born late, and I hate that you were born early. The most regrettable thing is the time theory and the age theory. . . Ouch, I can't do it anymore, I don't want to use the family knife. Oops, I really feel sorry for my parents in the first life, and I wet my eyes. How to say it? Every time is considered a cycle, alas. Okay, okay, the main storyline is over. Oops, why is the ending in the extra story? I don't really like watching it, so I won't watch it for now.

Damn it, I have read more than 20 HP fanfics. This one is really unforgettable for me. The character of the heroine really touched me. In the end, the branches of the male protagonists did not end in a hasty way, but started from a good node. The author of each male protagonist's characteristics was very accurate and concise, and almost every chapter can have a paragraph. The text touches the hearts of Ham fans, and the author's great love for HP is revealed between the lines. It is not like some serious OOC articles that have not even watched the movie, did not check any information, and just written directly. I have already NNNNNNNN read it. Pale language is not enough to support my point of view. To the book friends who are watching, I have one sentence: Just watch it, you will be addicted after reading it! ! The last sentence: Author, I love you to death! ! ! ! ! I will always follow you! ! ! !

It's so good. I watched it all night long. This is what I like!!! Every male protagonist has a side story. The first crying point is when he committed suicide after years of suicide and finally saw the roses disappear. The second one is the love of his parents [crying]

The character of the heroine Jing He is really wonderful, and you will fall deeply into it after reading a few chapters. The author's plot layout is also very flavorful and ingenious. The opening chapter tells Jinghe's past life, which is real and touching, and easy to empathize with. I was immediately fascinated by this gorgeous rose that grew out of hardships. I really like the first part of Ancestors. The ambition shown by Jing He even makes me obsessed with it. The setting of emotional wood is really wonderful and interesting. Then jumping directly to the next generation is really full of suspense, and people can't help but wonder what kind of story Jinghe has in the first two lives. In fact, many plots are no longer suspense after familiarity with the original works and various fan works, but following the author's Jing He through those stories again is a different kind of fun. This is the charm of Jing He! Love Jinghe so much!!!!

It's so beautiful. I don't know why the score is so low. Is someone trying to suppress the score? It's really, really good-looking. I'm a person with very poor language skills and can only say "good-looking" [crying] [crying]. But I'm really picky. The author follows a lot every day, and the content is also very rich. It's not boring or repetitive. Everyone has their own perfect ending.

I like it so much! I hope you will work hard ٩(๑ᵒ̴̶̷Ո᷄ᗨᵒ̴̶̷͈᷅)و! Be sure to continue updating until it is finished! [Love][Love][Love][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Super pretty! ! ! ! I feel sorry for the author, obviously he is very good, updates never leave us hungry, but the second book was maliciously reported, ugh, I feel sorry for the author, I hope the author will not be affected... ᖰ･◡･ᖳ

Wow, I am so touched. The author is really responsible and serious to the readers. Jing He has a good outlook on life and is also capable. I like every branch line. I haven't finished a HP book for a long time, but I believe the author can do it. I also look forward to the finale of your new book. Author, I love you!

It's really great. It's the best among all the HP fan fiction I've read. [Sending my heart] I really like reading otome fan fiction, but few people can write the male protagonist I want, but this one is different. All the male protagonists I like are written, and everyone has a side story. I really love the author. [Blowing kiss] The author also wrote very clearly about the changes in the timeline. I rarely read a novel in its entirety, but the author's novel is one of the few that I have finished.

It's very beautiful. I feel like the author has to write a good score for the final ending. Hahahahaha, but why is there no Narcissa in the extra chapter? I really like Narcissa... She's super, super, super pretty!

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It's so good to read. I finished reading it within two days. I especially like to read HP's books recently. The book written by the author DaDa is really super good and is my NO.

It's really good-looking, and everyone's emotional lines are not obtrusive. The character of the female goose is very interesting and great. Keep up the updates, my dear, I'll give you a flower [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [please update] [please update]

This book is really the best one I have read so far. The middle and last part made me cry so hard that I couldn't breathe at all. Fortunately, there is a sequel. The author's writing is really great! And I think the brain circuit of the heroine in this book is very normal [laughs] To be honest, my favorite male protagonist is probably Sidri Rey Theodore. The author is really great!

Personally, I like the first generation very much. The author writes it very well. I have only read two Harry Potter books and I didn't really like this one at first, but the author's writing made me have a strong desire to read it. (Originally I wanted to give it five stars, but I saw some comments saying that if the score was too high, it would be removed from the store, so I reluctantly changed it to four stars)

The author is really good-looking, I must continue reading more, please, please

This article really brings tears to my eyes. She has been reincarnated four times, and everyone is missing her, but she has no memory of her reincarnation. She even watched the death of her relatives and friends, but she doesn't understand why she is sad [crying]. And the love between mom and dad in this article is really great.