Tomb Raider Notes: My House Was Demolished Again

Give yourself a [sending heart] and hope you can finish writing it smoothly

Nice! The author's description of Abu is really good! I really like this sentence in the book, "The people you love will turn into wind and rain. The red sun rising and the shining stars you see are all those you love." The description of the world that Abu originally lived in made me yearn for it. I also like Abu's character very much. Sometimes when I read some of the author's words, I feel that the author really resembles the Abu he wrote. Moreover, most of the tomb robbing notes nowadays are either sadistic or sadistic, but this book is different. When I read it, I smiled on my face. All in all, I really enjoyed this book! ! [Sending Hearts]

The setting of this book is very good, each tomb is regarded as a home and the story line is unfolded in sequence. And the character setting of the protagonist is also quite good. He is arrogant, cute and smart, but has a little secret. The relationship between him and each protagonist is also quite good. And I feel like he gets along well with everyone. I am currently most optimistic about Xiao Hua Ye. Then, the author's writing style is quite good. The world setting of his book. Also, the original world of the protagonist is designed, quite complete, and no mistakes can be seen. Then, the logic of this book is okay, but it is not particularly complete, and it feels a bit uncomfortable to read. And the author is very satisfied with the update speed and the number of words in each chapter. I hope the author can persevere. Strive to complete it and reach more than 200 chapters. According to the author's general meaning, he is an all-text writer. This shows that he has the possibility to be with everyone, and the emotional line is also okay, and the writing is very delicate. But. For. How do those emotions arise? This point is not written very clearly, which makes people feel confused. The most obvious point is that the protagonist lived in the house of Heixiazizi and mute Zhang for a few days, and then the mute Zhang felt reluctant to leave. First of all, how old are the mute Zhang and Heixiazi? Even if you like this person, but have only known him for a few days, there will be no obvious emotional changes. Even if the black blind man loves money very much, there is no need to be like this. As for Wu Xie, I feel like that. Once the protagonist almost killed Wu Xie. And Wu Xie is not really innocent and cute. Even if he likes this person, it still feels like he has to go through a normal process. There is no need to act like this to stand out. All the emotional lines are deliberately created. I feel that Master Hua'er's emotional line is quite normal. The first is mystery. After conducting an investigation and later living in his house, the relationship gradually increased. Because of the protagonist's cute actions and behaviors, I got to know the protagonist more deeply. This emotional line is quite a normal process. Then, the protagonist's house, if he is in a tomb. I feel like the author didn't write very carefully. This article is a storyline that revolves around the protagonist's house change as the main line and then proceeds. But the author did not describe the protagonist's house in any particular detail, and why did he choose that kind of house? It is recommended that the authors make some amends in this regard. And I hope that the author will add some things about the protagonist in the original world in the future to make up for the background of the protagonist and let people understand the protagonist better. In general. This article is very good, but it also has shortcomings. I hope the author will make up for it as soon as possible.

1. This book is relatively good objectively and quite acceptable subjectively. 2. Because I prefer the character of the protagonist. He is kind, but he also has his own bad taste. Unlike some books where all the protagonists are, how can he be particularly kind to Nenniu Wufang, be particularly kind, and give them everything they need to block their injuries? 3. I started reading it from the author's update to chapter 130. The whole thing is relatively smooth, and the writing is okay. From my point of view, I feel that the writing is very comfortable, and the reading is smooth. The content is also very solid, and the author also interacts with readers. 4. I hope the author will update soon [sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's very interesting. I love Abu's original world view. The author is probably a growing author. The more he writes, the better it gets. ^ω^ I really like it. Jiaojiao really likes the interaction between Xie Yuchen and Abu in the first sentence [flying kiss] [flying kiss] The author, please give it a try (ง•̀_•́)ง

I'll help you score points, otherwise it's easy to be rejected. This book is very interesting, the idea of ​​sitting and the subject matter are very novel, and the interaction between the protagonists is very smooth. If you can give it a five-star rating, I recommend that everyone can read it.

Come on! Super super pretty! Both Abu and Abu's background are well created! And the Star Mother is really doting on her! I feel safe, and Abu is about to become a happy person. If you have time, why don't you add some descriptions of Abu's appearance. I still don't know what color Abu's eyes are (′へ`, ). The author's writing is really super nice! It's really funny, and his daily life is also very sweet. Not only is Abu himself strong, but he also has the support of the Star Mother behind him. He is not aggrieved at all and can do whatever he wants. Finally, I wish you a great flow of literary thoughts and no writing bottleneck! (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ* (Thinking casually: I will bless you with my strength of 10 gold medals in a row❛˓◞˂̵✧)

The author appreciates me! Like! You! It's really, really beautifully written! Super fun! The writing is super good! I have many clips bookmarked! (Already followed [Blowing Kiss]) Finally, I want to say that author, you are the best! ! ! The worst! ! ! [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] Come on~

Dear author, come on, it's a very fresh plot, I like it so much (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) Dear author, good evening

I dug out this novel that I joined two years ago on the bookshelf. I was a little interested in it when I first read it, and then I completely fell in love with it after reading half of it. It turned out that the author had stopped updating for more than a year. I was very sad: ( The interaction between Abu and the five little ones is particularly warm. Abu, who comes from the stars, feels full of magical security. Although there is a high probability that we will not see the ending of this novel, I hope the characters are happy and the author is happy now.

It looks good, I like it very much, I hope the author will do more. It has the taste of all, heart-throb, I am a native dog. Love to watch

It's very beautiful, and the characters in it express a lot of emotions. The portrayal of our protagonist is also perfect. The images of black blind brother Jie Yuchen, Wu Xie and Wang Yuebanwo are also very good. The plot inside is also very interesting, rich and logical. . The protagonist is not that kind of trash, he is relatively strong and does not need others to protect him. It looks very cool. The emotional scenes are also very rich.

It's very interesting. Although it only has more than a dozen chapters, the quality and word count are very good. It's very interesting (*^ω^*)

Oops, I was just about to rate, and then I saw the author rating his own novel. It's so cute.

It's good to watch, but it's not finished yet. I'll give it a four-star rating and watch it for now, but now I want the cover picture more. It's funny.

It's good-looking, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, I've only been reading other people's books these days and I've forgotten what the content is… uh, anyway, it's quite sweet, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Come on, it looks great [Like] (I'm not very good at chatting, don't blame me) [Please update]🌸🍀

This book is good to read and the readers are also nice to talk to. I love it so much~ I had to laugh for a long time while reading the author's big words, and I had to laugh for a long time after clicking on the comments. This book made me so happy. There is also the setting of Abu's world written in big letters by the author! I love it so much! (I gave it four stars according to the author's request. I'm also afraid of being taken off the shelves.)

The writing is good [Love] The plot is very novel. I really like it (ღ˘⌣˘ღ). The setting of the magician is very novel, and the plot also has its highlights. I like it very much, Abu. Please work hard to write it. The writing is great.

Very good-looking, Abu is also so cute [sending heartfelt messages] and he seems to be 11011

Great, super interesting!

Beautiful! Like it! Hehe [laughing] [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [admiration]

Not bad, worth recommending

Dad, we will always be with you.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

Except for a little bit, everything else is pretty good. Come on, author, more updates [Blow kiss]

It's pretty good. The only drawback is that there are too few chapters. Why do you want me to see it when it's only about fifty chapters?

Great writing! I love you so much [blowing kiss]

I like it very much. There is no rating yet. I will give you five stars first~ Come on, little author~

It's really beautiful, I suggest you all take a look😊😍🥰