Honghuang: With Heaven-Defying Comprehension, I Subdue Hongjun with One Hand

The preface does not match the following words, the logic is confusing, the words do not convey the meaning, the idioms are used indiscriminately, and the time is confusing.

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Serious nonsense, the protagonist said slyly: Such and such, the supporting character said slyly: Yes, yes, fellow Taoist friends are very awesome, and the saint expressed their approval. The word cunning is everywhere! Have I misunderstood this word? Does being able to use this word when discussing Taoism mean that everyone is a treacherous person? Do you also use this word when you are on the road? I really can't stand it

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Writing realms indiscriminately is depressing.

Damn it, if you don't wake up, you will surrender to the way of heaven.

I can't understand it. This book is too profound.

It looks so awkward, a prehistoric novel. Why are there so many descriptions of women? There are also many words describing a dialect flavor, which is embarrassing

Other novels focus on highlighting the vastness of the ancient world, but here the author feels that the ancient world seems so narrow and insignificant.

Many words do not convey the meaning and are used inappropriately. To cultivate an immortal is like being a second-rate person.