Thank You for the Invitation: the Man Is Collapsing the Iron, and the Imperial Knight Starts the Game

It's pretty good, but I think it would be better to let the protagonist take more action. Otherwise, it would feel a bit too pure for the plot. Add some other events and transition to other worlds. Otherwise, by the time the plot of Pinoconi is finished, I won't be able to continue writing [eating melon], unless the author has other ideas.

I can only comment on Miao Miao Miao Miao! The protagonist's personality is really great. And he also looks a lot like Brother Xiao Ming. What's more important is that this book really has a lot of jokes.

It feels like it's the same with or without the protagonist, and the number of times the protagonist takes action is too few, so why can't we show off various knights?

It is recommended that the characters have more dialogues, have more epilepsy, and play some Honkai memes appropriately [laughs]

The new book is great! I'm just thinking, it's only chapter 50 and the protagonist is already at the Fairy Boat! If it were any other author, it would have taken more than 100 chapters to get to Xianzhou! ｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

Happy! It was so much fun! But it's not enough! Hahahahaha I want to see people from Beng San (other than Lao Yang) come to Beng Tie, and it's best to have real Kevin and Otto [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Good-looking and loving authors turn into catgirls in the group

It's wonderful and deserves my praise!

I can already predict the scene where Wang Xiaoming transforms in front of Liu Ying... Under Liu [Blowing Kiss] Ying's confused eyes

I originally wanted to give it one star. But the author put the knife on my neck and had to give

I mean, there's a love line, right? How should I put it? It has been confirmed for now, there is no emotional line. Then I feel that in this whole nanny novel, every time I can't figure it out, at least the protagonist has to tell the story. There is no big problem in revisiting the plot at the beginning, but there are all kinds of stitches in the back. Let's just forget about the stitches, but the protagonist's presence is really low and there is no sense of involvement. Then, I will give a general review of the original plot, which is still the same as the original version. It is not very novel even if it is novel. To be honest, it is very bland and boring. Finally, this book is suitable for people who like to read without a heroine. If you want to read more heroines, you can leave it. To be honest, most novels add a love line to ignore the boring plot. The above is my personal objective evaluation. If you say this book is not well written, it is not bad, but this book is really boring. I can only say that it's quite average and not too bad.

Urgent, emergency, this is Naruhodou from Naruhodou Law Firm.

I don't know where to order that. Catching up on updates and the like. Is it okay to give a gift?

Good looking, interesting fanfic

Come on, come on, come on

Five-star praise.

Come on, come on, come on

Five stars for encouragement. Come on.

I know this old man

Not much to say, five stars must be praised

Ok, come on, author

Nice one, makes my good intentions spin

That's great, but I'm the younger brother in the Star Dome Train.

If nothing else, the cover of this book is quite nice.

Not much to say, just watch it. It's really good.

It's very nice and awesome, the ones at the back are terrible, but the ones in the front and the middle are all very nice.

Everything is good and suits my taste, but it's a bit too short. I'm enjoying myself watching it [crying]

It's not bad. Maybe it's because I like decade. I gave it a very high rating. I feel pretty good.

It was a lot of fun and I loved it. I, a Iron Breaker player, and the Knight Chef were immediately ecstatic!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! !