[Pokémon] + [Pokemon] + [Pokémon] + [Quick Team Formation] + [Golden Finger] [No System] + [Medium-Fast Tempo] + [Single Female Protagonist]
Are all Pokémon really innocent, kind and mellow?
Maybe, but humans are definitely not! !
"Forbidden Tool", "Prologue Tool" and "Spell Tool"
"The Gate of Chaos of the Ages", "The Gate of Stormy Sky", "The Gate of the Ancient Sea of Origin"...
What are these props and doors? Why is it completely different from the Pokémon novels I know?
I was transported to Blue Star, a parallel world with Pokémon.
I am the young master of the Jiang family!
Just the young master of a small family... What? The Jiang family is the ruler of Shuidu! !
"Will my first starter Pokémon be a water jumper or a fire chick?"... "What does Lao Den want from me?"
Old man: "Xiaoyu is here, come with me to the Infinite Clan and choose your first siblings!"
Grandpa, why is your symbolic bird belt in the form of the Deoxys meteorite!
A small fire dragon with fire + water + water storage! ! Am I crazy, or has the world finally become something I don't recognize!
Reshiram: "Whoever steps into the truth, I will lend you my power."
Fifteen ⌊doors⌉ appeared?
My charming ancestor left the Rayquaza to guard the Dragon Kingdom?
You said that if a Pokémon is powerful enough to have its own understanding of its attributes, it can open a realm?
A Pokémon with permanent Mega evolution?
Paradoxical Pokémon appeared one after another, causing Jiang Shaoyu to think about its origins, until he took over his mother's experimental report.
Reader comments
If you want to see those who are invincible in the early stage, you can basically go. There are three mythical beasts at the beginning, two are too weak to make waves in the growth stage, and one Deoxys has not yet awakened. With ordinary Pokémon, you can probably defeat everyone of the same age or a few years older. Then use the mythical beasts in the early and mid-term, and it is estimated that they will be defeated by the dark forces and then be defeated. I have seen this kind of thing more, as long as there is no such thing Just so many poison points are enough, but in the later stage, don't make the mythical beasts of the supporting characters everywhere. There is a lot of potential for the champion of the king. Don't say what circles the protagonist has strong contact with. If a person in the upper class circle has a few kings of champions, it is almost enough. This is a cool article. Don't just have the same strength every time the protagonist picks up the supporting character, otherwise it will be too poisonous.
It's really good to watch and the plot is quite novel.
Not bad, come on
Bala, bala, bala, bala, I can't think of anything to say, support, support
Seeing that there is no big problem now, I hope the author can stick to it.
Let me add a few words. The easiest way to go in Tomato is to write a good book. This book is not good enough, and many of the areas that are not up to standard were corrected only after feedback from readers. Because the title of the book is a cool template but the content is not cool enough, many people may abandon the book. Wherever you should use the mythical beast, just use it without thinking about training. The opponent is too strong and the strength is not at the same level. What's the point of training? Normally, the protagonist would have died long ago, which is the biggest problem. I know the author is burying the thread, but in this fast-paced era, no one is willing to read it carefully. Everyone is tired from reality and just wants to read online articles to relax. When writing fan fiction, you either have to push it all the way from the beginning, or don't cheat and develop it slowly so that readers can feel like it is slowly getting stronger.
The above are the casual thoughts of an ordinary reader. The author's setting is good. However, this book is not a cool book nor a slow-burning book. It is caught in the middle and makes both groups uncomfortable. I hope the author can think more about the direction in the future.
Good-looking but not popular, it's a pity
Needless to say, it's very beautiful.
Good looking, keep up the good work
Can write well
Very good, very beautiful
Very hot-blooded and good-looking
The world view is distinctive
Will the author arrest Kyurem in the future?
Personally, I think it's very, very, very beautiful.
It's good to read, especially the plot. If there are shortcomings, maybe the author's brain circuitry is a bit out of tune. The author also said that if this book becomes popular, he will write a sequel. The outline is very exciting.
It looks good, but I don't know why it's not popular?
If you want to see those who are invincible in the early stage, you can basically go. There are three mythical beasts at the beginning, two are too weak to make waves in the growth stage, and one Deoxys has not yet awakened. With ordinary Pokémon, you can probably defeat everyone of the same age or a few years older. Then use the mythical beasts in the early and mid-term, and it is estimated that they will be defeated by the dark forces and then be defeated. I have seen this kind of thing more, as long as there is no such thing Just so many poison points are enough, but in the later stage, don't make the mythical beasts of the supporting characters everywhere. There is a lot of potential for the champion of the king. Don't say what circles the protagonist has strong contact with. If a person in the upper class circle has a few kings of champions, it is almost enough. This is a cool article. Don't just have the same strength every time the protagonist picks up the supporting character, otherwise it will be too poisonous.
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It's really good to watch and the plot is quite novel.
Not bad, come on
Bala, bala, bala, bala, I can't think of anything to say, support, support
Seeing that there is no big problem now, I hope the author can stick to it. Let me add a few words. The easiest way to go in Tomato is to write a good book. This book is not good enough, and many of the areas that are not up to standard were corrected only after feedback from readers. Because the title of the book is a cool template but the content is not cool enough, many people may abandon the book. Wherever you should use the mythical beast, just use it without thinking about training. The opponent is too strong and the strength is not at the same level. What's the point of training? Normally, the protagonist would have died long ago, which is the biggest problem. I know the author is burying the thread, but in this fast-paced era, no one is willing to read it carefully. Everyone is tired from reality and just wants to read online articles to relax. When writing fan fiction, you either have to push it all the way from the beginning, or don't cheat and develop it slowly so that readers can feel like it is slowly getting stronger. The above are the casual thoughts of an ordinary reader. The author's setting is good. However, this book is not a cool book nor a slow-burning book. It is caught in the middle and makes both groups uncomfortable. I hope the author can think more about the direction in the future.
Good-looking but not popular, it's a pity
Needless to say, it's very beautiful.
Good looking, keep up the good work
Can write well
Very good, very beautiful
Very hot-blooded and good-looking
The world view is distinctive
Will the author arrest Kyurem in the future?
Personally, I think it's very, very, very beautiful.
It's good to read, especially the plot. If there are shortcomings, maybe the author's brain circuitry is a bit out of tune. The author also said that if this book becomes popular, he will write a sequel. The outline is very exciting.
It looks good, but I don't know why it's not popular?
So pretty, so pretty
Good, good, good, good, good, good, good