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This is a truly normal master-disciple relationship, which is countless times better than those who open a harem under the guise of accepting apprentices. Although the protagonist has a playful personality, he has a sense of responsibility that everyone should have.

It's a good book, but it's not as good as the feeling I had when I saw the cultivation chat group in 2017, but after reading many books one after another, my threshold has improved. This book can also be called a good book. The book does not have the strong output of three views and political stances like many novels nowadays, which makes those who read it feel that the authors should experience more life, learn more knowledge and have more contact with people. Instead, they use some pens to subtly share some of the author's insights. It is a good book and worth reading. It is humorous but does not lose its connotation. Like Song Shuhang's firm truth, kindness and repayment, it is full of comedy and sageness in front of others. This book has a promising future, and so does the author's future. The connotation of the book can actually be true, good, beautiful, or chaotic and neutral egoist. Human nature is inherently chaotic. What is rare is balance, neither manic nor violent. This book is well done, neither vulgar nor rough. Oh, if you add some people in front of the holy statue to practice chatting or senior fellow apprentice Jian Jian, it will make people feel more comfortable. I'm optimistic about the author's future, go for it. I hope that the following chapters will not suddenly contain strong political stances and foul language that are most likely to attract low-informed readers.

It is rare for a male author to write an article that both men and women can read. Sisters can feel free to read. The daily life of the sect is funny and tender. The group portraits are also well drawn. I also like the rhythm of the book. I haven't followed up on the article for a long time. The author must finish it [shy]

This is a really light-hearted novel. Anyway, after reading more than 90 chapters, I felt that the characterization was very good. Every slightly important character was flesh and blood, not just like a robot. To be honest, the author has always emphasized that it is easy without a knife, but I am really scared of knives. I still remember Taoist Tao in another book about recruiting disciples. He said it was easy, healing, and warm without using a knife. However, Tao Tao took in nine apprentices, and in the end they were all gone. Tao Tao was alone when he came, but he was still alone in the end. If it were him, I would have gone crazy.

Really good book. First of all, this is not a brainless harem story about master-disciple love. There is a system, but I can feel that the biggest role of the system in this book is to fill in the flaws of human nature and achieve some very warm but illogical plots within the worldview. Just like the world view of Pokémon. The warm atmosphere more than compensates for the discomfort caused by the system. The writing style is delicate. The characters are not simply labeled and done. They will be deeply excavated, expanded in breadth, and reverse-designed to create some cute features. It is considered very full. It can be said that the characters have their own characteristics and can be said to be vivid. Invincibility is not considered, but it has nothing to do with the plot of being defeated and ridiculed. In the incident, the protagonist group usually plays the top role. The main attraction is actually the warm daily life of the master and apprentice, and the atmosphere is well constructed. But there is no shortage of intense plots. All in all, it is a true master-disciple novel with great emotions and is worth reading. There's something a little bit off at the back... The author is writing a lot about things he is not good at.

So far it looks pretty good. The protagonist is not a greasy guy. As for the female protagonist, I just hope that she won't have a harem and a CP. So far, this Yaoqin is okay. Her background talent is also good, and it doesn't hinder the protagonist. The story between the two of them before There is probably a lot to write about. Anyway, I hate harem stories. 1V1 is good, and no CP is even better. My opinion is that the writing is quite something that people want to read. It is not procrastinating or cliche. It is good that I don't accept it casually. I don't accept it just because I see people.

This is the first novel about male cultivating immortality that I have read. It is not bad. I hope that the author will not write too greasy and disgusting writing about the male protagonist later on. If nothing else happens, I should be able to catch up to the end. Please don't stop me from ending it. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Brother, let's do another chapter😭 Brother, there is definitely something adulterated in your novel😢I enjoyed reading it so much! Please, brother, give me another chapter, give me another chapter😭 I will definitely give you a gift after your chapter. Please read another chapter to me😩 I can do anything 😰 Brother, your novel is too pure😥I have never tasted something so pure It's only been a minute now, and I feel itchy all over my body. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel hot and cold at the same time. I feel so uncomfortable😰😫😭 Please, brother, give me another chapter🙄

As of today, there are more than 200 chapters, and I have basically read all the updated ones. I will give a brief review (slight spoilers). Among the many system time travel articles, this article is a bit novel and boring. This article is almost a daily-interesting pension article (i. E., No swords, no competition, no cool articles). The author's writing is more literary, and the style of writing is basically devoid of passion. Most of them are sudden warmth, literary style, and the look and feel is comfortable (no cool articles refer to the kind of useless counterattacks that pretend to be pigs and eat tigers, etc. The protagonist is not a waste and has a very fast cultivation) Key point: Unlike most novels written by men, this book tends to focus on general principles. Although the world view is still based on the law of the jungle (the strong one occupies the spiritual veins, etc.), The characteristics of the male protagonist are gentleness + fishing, etc. In addition, the author is obviously abbreviating the system. To put it bluntly, the author has the highest right to interpret the combat power system, which is different from most sources. Let's briefly talk about the theme of the novel. The normal main plot + branch plots go hand in hand. The main line is mainly about system tasks. To put it simply, it is quite casual and has no big goals or foreshadowing (to a certain extent, it feels that the main line is less than the branch lines, and there are not many descriptions of the protagonist). It is narrated from multiple perspectives. The branch lines are mixed with the memoirs of the supporting characters (apprentices), etc. It can be said that a certain amount of effort has been put into shaping the supporting characters. (As for the rigor of the plot of the supporting characters, to be honest, it is a more sensational type, but this kind of novel can be enjoyed just by looking at the picture, no need to go into details) The other is the most important emotional line. At present, the male protagonist is more Buddhist, but he is more ambiguous with several women, and the one who is more clearly written is Xie Lingyu (after all, it is recognized that he is an old friend), but the emotional line needs plot support. With the protagonist's current smooth sailing + improvement in cultivation and the lack of ups and downs in the plot, it feels that the intersection between the male and female protagonists is difficult to write as the main line, so the emotional line is more difficult to advance (well, it depends on what the author says) Oh, by the way, one of the main attractions of this book is that it is funny, but at the end it feels less interesting. I hope the author can be more innovative, and I can learn from the brain jumping similar to that of a cultivation chat group (it may also be my personal feeling problem, please forgive me) Finally, I highly recommend this book. The author updates it daily. If you have read too many mindless and refreshing articles, reading this book is a good choice for leisure. After a while, I continued to look at the new update, and the overall evaluation is still the same as above. But how can I put it? In terms of narrative, the author is still the same as before, but the parallel events make the main plot of the competition seem intermittent. In addition, there is not much plot text, which makes this competition neither exciting nor interesting, and it is boring. As for the development of branch lines, it can be said that the stage by stage is relatively complete and coherent, but the style is as warm and character-building as ever, which also seems boring as mentioned before (but this is mainly because I prefer passionate articles) For characters like Luo Yue and Li Junzi, it is obvious that the author has carefully portrayed them, but to be honest, I don't feel much newness about Luo Yue. Looking at most first-class fantasy novels (because the score of this work is still very high, so I compare it relatively high. I don't compare it with system novels because this article basically has little to do with the system, only the two most basic settings of apprenticeship and mission). There are many supporting characters who are more three-dimensional and more deeply rooted in the hearts of the people than the miserable image of this character. Regarding Li Junzi, the author may want to broaden his worldview and introduce a Confucian background (but this does not mean much), so the main purpose is probably to enrich the plot with supporting characters. Therefore, compared with similar swordsmanship with delicate writing and talk about luck, this book The writing was a bit verbose and failed to capture the grandeur of the sword, so the sentence still seemed boring. It was not only the kind of interesting boring without humor, but also the kind of touching boring without plot ups and downs, just like when you watch Chicken Soup for the Soul. 11111111 I saw it was mid-term and the points were changed. After a while, I ran out of books and ran back to read part of it. The thoughts I wrote earlier were more detailed. , Now let me say it very bluntly, the backend is really boring. The author has to draw out the characters and create them over and over again. I put it bluntly, everyone basically understands the characters. What is the point of the author having to tell a very boring story about the supporting characters to create the image, and the content of the story is also very It's boring. The only thing I found interesting was the monologue of the second junior brother at the beginning. After all, it has a beginning and an end. It's really a sublimation. It's basically hard to evaluate the rest. He saved others and made a friend. Author, think about how the readers will feel after reading this. I can't even comment on the laughs. To put it bluntly, the author just doesn't know how to make things work. A stupid dragon repeatedly mentions being greedy and stupid. What's the point of having the same plot? I don't even know how many times it was about the sect's party, Monopoly. If it's ugly, it's a mess. At first glance, the worldview seems grand, but in fact the process is more routine and routine. To put it bluntly, there are no ups and downs at all and it is not all empty talk. To be honest, I really don't understand what emotional value reading this novel can give me. If I don't have any feelings, I will forget the feeling after reading it.

It can be said to be quite awesome among similar Tomato works. Everyone seems to be real, not flat NPCs. This alone surpasses 90% of the male videos in Tomato. The plot seems a bit loose now, but it can be seen that the author is carefully preparing some things, and I hope that the big scenes in the future will bring some surprises. I look forward to something different when entering the main plot. [Stare]

The early stage is amazing, both the characters and the plot are of good quality. It's just that as we get to the end, especially after taking in Lao Si and Lao Wu, we seem to lose control of the character descriptions. Lao Si and Lao Wu had some friendship before the trial, but there was no communication after they accepted the disciples; Lao Si has a black entry (childhood shadow), and the protagonist, as a master who is set up to love his disciples, does not show care and enlightenment and has been in the recuperation stage; regarding qualifications Lao Wu, who is not good but has a business entry, originally thought that he would adopt the strategy of learning business as a main practice as a supplement, but in the end, he completely neglected his talent for business; with the addition of Lao Si and Lao Wu, I don't know why the whole sect seemed to be divided. The most disappointing thing is that the plot gradually started to drag. To be more specific, the writing was very loose. I don't know if the author didn't perform well because he was at work. It wasn't as funny as it was at the beginning, which made me laugh unintentionally. I have only read 200 chapters so far and I can't help but comment. I hope the writing will get better and better in the future. After the plot in Chizhou City, the rhythm is back again. It's getting better, my family!

Five-star recommendation. There are not many articles with this kind of reasonable plot on Tomato. The foreshadowing before and after the article is pretty good, and the storyline is also very emotional. The only small flaw is that the reborn junior brother is a bit ignorant (he should be given more opinions after all, he has more experience in two lives)

The eloquent sect literature (the feeling of a warm sect comic), although it is a bit less now, is a book that I will keep up with (how rare this is in Tomato). It is a bit of a group portrait but does not deviate from the protagonist. The author has a good foundation. The protagonist is not serious but serious, and he is the kind of character who makes you like it at first sight! It looks good. If you love watching it, don't stop updating it. (Kneel down)

In fact, there are some minor flaws, but the flaws are outweighed. I really like the relationship between the master and his apprentice, the master who knows everything, the playful senior sister, the taciturn but reliable second senior brother, and the lovely third junior sister who protects the family. I like their daily life very much.

The beginning of the book I've read so far feels very interesting, and a 9.8 Rating is not an overstatement. It's also interesting without the setting of the Three Views issue. After discarding more than a dozen crappy fairy tales that revealed unfair Three Views, I fell into the trap first with this one.

Personally, I think it's good. I hope the male protagonist doesn't have a CP. The comment area is a bit polarized, but I think some of the bad reviews are inexplicable →_→ This one is one of the better ones I've read. I'm about to catch up to the end, although the pace is a bit slow. . .

After looking at it, I thought it was written about an apprentice, but I didn't expect it to be about a master. The characters are well-drawn, the plot is novel, and the writing is good. This book currently ranks higher than 95% of Tomato books. (In my opinion) urge to update [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Those who say they didn't teach the disciples before are not paying attention. The protagonist taught the disciples the correct outlook on life, love and family affection. Everything on the road to immortality is for the sake of the disciples. Even when I am away from home, I often work hard because I think of the smiles of my disciples. There may be some apprentices who did not teach the exercises, but the protagonist taught the apprentices the most important qualities and how to behave. The protagonist is really positive, sunny and helpful, which is in line with the personality and outlook of a 21st century traveler. I like this book very much. I hope the author can update it twice every day. My ability is limited. I would like to give a five-star review to encourage the author [Love]

The relaxed and comfortable sect, the best master in the world, the best senior sister in the world with the master, the best second junior brother in the world with the master, the third junior sister who is the caring little cotton-padded jacket of the master, the fourth junior sister who is honest and admits that the senior brother is wrong, the shameless little junior brother who was picked up, and of course the cutest Qinghe! Dear author, 500,000 words is already half of the goal. One million words can't be finished. Let's say less than 2 million words! The author is big [crying]

Good news, it's an interesting novel Bad news, there is a heroine [Smile] Do you understand Xiuxianxiu? Has your small goal of immortality been achieved? How can it be possible for children to have an ambiguous relationship? So Yao Qin has become an immortal and is still jealous like the head wife of a big house. Is this role meant to highlight the male lead's good looks, humor, and even the cool goddess? ? ? Even if you are not a serious cultivator, can you level up and fight monsters first? Why do you need a female protagonist? With the theme of sect recruiting disciples, can you recruit disciples, fight monsters and upgrade your sect? Can you bury the heroine? What does a cultivator want from a heroine? ! !

Very good, purely funny, I only read a few dozen chapters and I laughed like a fool

It's very interesting to watch, and each character has a unique and distinct personality. Ying Ling is quirky, Xing Tian is cool and sensible, Bai Qing is smart and cute, and Master Xing Chen is very reliable at critical moments without being subtle. It is said that the sect is actually more like a warm little family. Xingtian is silently encouraged when he wants to go out to experience, rather than being tied to his side and serving the sect.

What I wrote earlier is okay, the writing is good, and the little sect is quite warm. It won't work anymore later on. It makes me feel uncomfortable to see it.

The plot is light-hearted and has two exciting points: One is to be an invincible master and lead a disciple. The second is to go to Zhongzhou and become an invincible fellow monk. The logic is smooth and the male protagonist has a brain, unlike some cool novels that have no brains at all. There is no exaggerated combat power, which leads to the plot of this world being written quickly and then constantly going to the new world, but it is not frustrating to watch, and the plots of some branch plots or supporting characters are also well written and relatively warm. The psychological activities of the supporting characters are also very good. The writing style is acceptable, but some paragraphs and sentences at the back are not fluent, probably due to typos and omissions. Come on!

It's quite good, but it's too short and I finished it in a short time. The characters that have appeared so far are all very well drawn, and the heroine (probably?) Is not annoying or a hindrance. If she didn't pull her hips in the back, she could have scored 9 points.

The pace is slow, but very relaxed, not tiring to watch, the writing is good, the characters are well drawn, especially the eldest apprentice is very lovable, the second apprentice is relatively weak, and the third apprentice is also good, soft and waxy

Let's read it as a longevity article. It's a cool article, a short story about a woman, and it's written very carefully. I would give it 4 to 3 points out of 5. What a verbose essay for primary school students to write

It's good-looking. It has a single heroine and it's not a fake harem (she's having an affair with a bunch of people for no apparent reason). The heroine is also well-written and she's not a dodder. There's nothing straightforward about it. The daily interactions with her apprentice are quite warm and there aren't any bad jokes.

This article is quite good, the writing style is good, and it gives me some sense of swordsmanship + the system gives me the feeling of early immortality. It met my needs: a cool novel, no heroine (I didn't like it because I wasted too many chapters on falling in love, which means there is a female character who has a crush on the protagonist, but there is no mindless infatuation, and the male protagonist has no intention of falling in love, and he feels more like a prodigal son emotionally). Slow pace, all the staff have online IQs, the characters are all unique, and full of the author's own understanding of the truth. There are spoilers below, so don't read if you don't mind. Some plots are very abrupt, for example, the eldest apprentice's life experience is supplemented: the eldest apprentice is a talented woman who has been a genius since she was a child. In order to escape from marriage, she became an apprentice with the protagonist. Later, it was added that he was unpopular at home and was even called a bitch by his housekeeper. His mother was buried in a mass grave and no bones could be found. But this setting should be that without reading, life would not be easy, let alone becoming a well-known talented woman. Only when I wrote the book review did I realize that if my mother died before she became an immortal, the disciple should know where she was buried. If she died after she became an immortal, she shouldn't ask where her mother was buried first when she got home. The logic is difficult to reconcile, and it's possible that I didn't read carefully and didn't notice some details. But I have to say that this is a very good book. Just like the first sentence of the first chapter says, store your brain. This article is worth reading. I read 227 chapters in three days (the latest chapter so far) and read a total of 11 hours. This book review is for reference only.

It's so beautiful, it's like a three-dimensional group portrait. Although there are no big swords, maybe it's because the author wrote it so well. Some characters who are not the main character will feel sad and reluctant to let go if they die. The main character has emotional lines and is pure love! I just started holding hands after reading about 400 chapters. It's very funny. Every character is very three-dimensional whether it's the front or the back. The daily routine is well connected with the main line. It's delicious😋

It's very interesting. The quirky senior sister who escaped from marriage, the second senior brother who was a doormat almost became popular just after he was reborn, and the lazy master who doesn't shy away from business, are very nonchalant. A must-have for leisure!!!!!!!