Uchiha Madara's Adventure in Another World

To change it, Madara's combat power is much stronger than that of the pirates. One is on the island, and the other is a blast star, which is much stronger than the Yonko. The meteorite pulled by the general's gravity is countless times smaller than the Tianzhu Zhenxing. This can show the difference. Just look at the expressiveness of Madara, who is also at the mainland level. He is only a little stronger than the Yonko. He can even shake the sacred tree.

It really exceeded my expectations. In terms of the characterization of Madara, it can be said to be the best I have ever seen. There are no flaws in the character design. It is Madara himself, and there is no eye-catching thing like a system. I hope the author can persevere and finish the book [laughter]

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As long as there is no heroine, I will keep chasing her [Adoration]

The control of the characters is really good (｀Δ´)! ! ! This is so important. The author can use Banye's evaluation of malleable talents and others to highlight the character's character and spiritual core from the side, and write a Banye who continues to meet, grow, and gradually understand new concepts during the journey. After shopping around in Tomato and comparing it, I found that the writing is really good. ⊙▽⊙Anyway, I feel quite comfortable. …The author's compositions are so complex, but unexpectedly they are all very well written. It's very logical, considers the issues comprehensively, and explains everything that may cause ambiguity... So attentive. The language style... Is tongue-in-cheek, quite humorous, and the writing has an amazingly detailed and appropriate style. Well, in short it's pretty good. [Laughing]

There seems to be Naruto in the spell

The subject matter is well chosen, but the layout of the text is too clumsy. It doesn't look like a novel. Instead, it is written in long paragraphs, like a composition. It makes my head hurt to read it. The typesetting is not good. Even if you write in a garish way, it will be difficult to read [face covering]

Well, it's a good fanfic. That's why the author always uses "well". Now I feel that "well" is the language feature of this book [face covering] [OK]

Perfectly interprets Uchiha Madara's domineering and arrogant character

As epileptic as cautious spot [cover face]

I think it looks pretty good, and I haven't seen anything unacceptable so far. The characters of the plot characters who appear on the stage all maintain their original personalities, and there is no random writing.

Author, can you tell me about the setting of the eight gates? This technique should be practiced hard and can be used directly if you are not physically strong. Don't tell me that it is Su Nuo who has established restraint again.

The plot at the end is very unexpected and quite novel. If you don't have any ideas, you can try watching it for a change.

Surprisingly not bad

The author must be praised for the number of words in each chapter.

I'm such a cool guy, I'm really pretty good.

What a purity I have [face covering] [OK]

Great, give me more.

It's so pretty, I'm such a pretty girl.

I think it's really good, what do you think?

It feels good, I will continue to watch it

Good fan, good story, good author, good for you, me, and him.

So far, it's a good book, at least compared to several fan fictions I've read, it's pretty good🤔

Except for the pirate chapter, everything else feels good. Why does Ben have to follow the ship when he is so powerful? Why does he have to follow Luffy?

Not bad, you can take a look

Looks good, keep up the good work!

Come on, it feels good Has Sasuke ever considered resurrecting Obito to see the power of the twin Kamui [thoughts]

The pace is a bit fast, but Hao Chi

Madara's character is well created

It's super nice [Blowing Kiss], but one chapter a day is not enough!