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This is a fan version of A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality. Some of the regrettable plot contents in the original version of A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality have been modified, such as the regrettable plots of Senior Sister Chen and Xin Ruyin. Overall, this fan version is not bad. In terms of content, the plot between fighting with others and interacting with the characters is quite exciting. The author continues to work hard. Now I feel like there are ants crawling on me while waiting for the update [smile][smile][smile]

A very nice mortal fanfic, the author has worked hard to update it [Like]

The writing is good, it reproduces the taste of mortals cultivating immortals, come on!

Personally I think it's pretty good Not bad, not bad.

Looks good, hope it doesn't end badly

There are no quotation marks. It looks so uncomfortable.

Keep it up, it's not bad, I feel a little bit better, keep it up It feels good. It would be better if the update is faster. One chapter in one day is too little. You need to change your strategy.

It's quite beautiful, it feels like a mortal cultivating immortality.