Transmigrated as an Abandoned Son

First of all, the setting of Ye Fan as a peerless genius in this book is very refreshing. Moreover, he is pure, sincere, and dedicated. There is nothing wrong with his low emotional intelligence. I like him the most. Yunxi is also very good, elegant, noble and handsome, I like it very much

Super invincible, like it💕... Swiped it N times. There will never be a situation where the third party is ambiguous when attacking a mouth.

Ah, the book is finally on Tomato! Every time I have a book shortage, I rely on this book to get by [face covering] [blowing kiss] [admiration] [blowing kiss] Thieves like Ye Fan and Yun Xi. Ye Fan is such a funny guy who makes me laugh every time. He has a great character and loves his wife first. The plot is non-toxic, and revenge must be taken! It's so cool, I won't make myself angry even after reading this book! I feel so comfortable! [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration][Flowing kiss][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

This is the first time I have finished reading a novel with more than 600 chapters [face covering]. I have been reading this novel for three minutes. However, I stayed up late for a few nights to read this novel. I have to say that it is really super enjoyable. I finally understand the mood of boys when they read a male channel. The dual male protagonists of this male channel are really cool. The advantages and disadvantages of this novel are quite obvious. First of all, boys, please pay attention. This article is about two male protagonists, which is the love between two boys. Then, this is a main article. Attacking Ye Fan and accepting Bai Yunxi, there is a deputy CP Advantages: I don't know what your requirements are for writing. My requirements are relatively low. As long as the sentences are smooth and there are not too many typos, it is fine. The plot of this book is very smooth and the realm development is step-by-step. It is not too outrageous. This book has everything that a male video should have, but it is not too watery. What makes me feel good and comfortable is that the waistcoat will not be hidden for too long. It was revealed after just a few chapters, and there was also the relationship between Ye Fan and Bai Yunxi. What made me feel good was that Ye Fan was really, really attached to Bai Yunxi, and in the early and mid-term, Ye Fan always clung to Bai Yunxi before taking anything. I think the most exciting plot point was in the academy, after Ye Fan's talent was exposed, several people competed to be his master [cool] I talked about the advantages in my last comment, now let me talk about the disadvantages. Disadvantages: It is recommended not to read it if you are under control. I feel that the author is quite biased in terms of attack. Basically, the good things in the later stages are given to Ye Fan, and! ! ! I really want to deduct two stars on the relationship line. Although the main CP Ye Fan is attached to Bai Yunxi, the two have basically never been separated, but Bai Yunxi's presence always feels like there is no sense of existence. And although they are both strong, Bai Yunxi is sometimes stronger than Ye Fan in the early stage, but later, after Ye Fan has the Chaos Spirit Root, the gap between the two It's getting bigger and bigger. Ye Fan can do everything, but Bai Yunxi has no arrangements for other authors except swordsmanship. And what makes me most uncomfortable is that in the later stage, Ye Fan didn't always say that I love my wife the most like he did in the early stage. Finally, such sweet points are gone, and good things are no longer close to Bai Yunxi. I feel The love line that makes me heartbroken the most is the deputy CP. The relationship between Brother Ye Fan and Xu is really inexplicable. Moreover, Xu is really the background panel. Most of the descriptions are about Ye Da, while Xu mentions very little. Moreover, I feel that Ye Da loves swords more than Xu Du. In short, I can say that he is basically the deputy CP. It all feels like a background board, but there are some bright spots. I don't understand that the secondary CP character is so easy to beat, but the emotional line is really poorly written. Another complaint is that the author's portrayal of women is too bad. Basically, the villains in the early stage are women. They are stupid and lack strength. The above are the shortcomings for me. Because I like this genre, I gave it five stars. I also specifically bought Liancheng. The common problem of this author is that the emotional lines are very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very poor. Shou always has a weak sense of presence. I really like the others. Alas😮‍💨, I hope the author can practice his writing skills in writing love lines. Also, the Feng Yi Fan appears too few times. It appeared a few times in the beginning and I won't mention it later. It would be better to give Xu and Ao Xiaobao's father at that time, and they didn't appear in the Shangtian Realm [face covering]. Did the author forget it?

It's a book that I would re-read when I'm short of books. It's very good. Maybe many friends will think it's a bit novice. The emotional scenes are almost non-existent, but I just like the feeling of following the plot. As for the emotional scenes, it's better for the two of them to be together.

I like it so much, I often find it and check it out [smile]

It's really good-looking, especially Ye Fan's character. He has the same attitude towards his wife and the same attitude towards others. I also like Bai Yunxi very much o(^▽^)o. After reading it for three or four days, I can tell by the reading time. It's different from the fairy tales I usually read. It's really good-looking. I highly recommend it. It's really the ceiling for two men to cultivate immortality [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] It looks good and I am suitable for reading this kind of article. Is there any meal replacement? I have read it several times and I still don't feel tired. Please give me a meal replacement😭

The protagonist has very upright views, which is very good. Behavior. Shaped perfectly. Those who are kind to him, are kind to him, and are kind to him will always be better to others. I read this novel several years ago, and it turned out to be this author. Like very much

It's super invincible and beautiful. I really like Ye Luoyi's writing style. It's humorous and witty, and the number of words is not enough. I've only read all the novels written by Ye Luoyi. I highly recommend it!

This is really a long-running novel with two male protagonists that I have watched from beginning to end without skipping a chapter. It is really great and very enjoyable to read from beginning to end.