Abandoned Children Run Rampant in Time Travel

First of all, the setting of Ye Fan as a peerless genius in this book is very refreshing. Moreover, he is pure, sincere, and dedicated. There is nothing wrong with his low emotional intelligence. I like him the most. Yunxi is also very good, elegant, noble and handsome, I like it very much

Super invincible, like it💕... Swiped it N times. There will never be a situation where the third party is ambiguous when attacking a mouth.

Ah, the book is finally on Tomato! Every time I have a book shortage, I rely on this book to get by [face covering] [blowing kiss] [admiration] [blowing kiss] Thieves like Ye Fan and Yun Xi. Ye Fan is such a funny guy who makes me laugh every time. He has a great character and loves his wife first. The plot is non-toxic, and revenge must be taken! It's so cool, I won't make myself angry even after reading this book! I feel so comfortable! [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration][Flowing kiss][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

This is the first time I have finished reading a novel with more than 600 chapters [face covering]. I have been reading this novel for three minutes. However, I stayed up late for a few nights to read this novel. I have to say that it is really super enjoyable. I finally understand the mood of boys when they read a male channel. The dual male protagonists of this male channel are really cool. The advantages and disadvantages of this novel are quite obvious. First of all, boys, please pay attention. This article is about two male protagonists, which is the love between two boys. Then, this is a main article. Attacking Ye Fan and accepting Bai Yunxi, there is a deputy CP Advantages: I don't know what your requirements are for writing. My requirements are relatively low. As long as the sentences are smooth and there are not too many typos, it is fine. The plot of this book is very smooth and the realm development is step-by-step. It is not too outrageous. This book has everything that a male video should have, but it is not too watery. What makes me feel good and comfortable is that the waistcoat will not be hidden for too long. It was revealed after just a few chapters, and there was also the relationship between Ye Fan and Bai Yunxi. What made me feel good was that Ye Fan was really, really attached to Bai Yunxi, and in the early and mid-term, Ye Fan always clung to Bai Yunxi before taking anything. I think the most exciting plot point was in the academy, after Ye Fan's talent was exposed, several people competed to be his master [cool] I talked about the advantages in my last comment, now let me talk about the disadvantages. Disadvantages: It is recommended not to read it if you are under control. I feel that the author is quite biased in terms of attack. Basically, the good things in the later stages are given to Ye Fan, and! ! ! I really want to deduct two stars on the relationship line. Although the main CP Ye Fan is attached to Bai Yunxi, the two have basically never been separated, but Bai Yunxi's presence always feels like there is no sense of existence. And although they are both strong, Bai Yunxi is sometimes stronger than Ye Fan in the early stage, but later, after Ye Fan has the Chaos Spirit Root, the gap between the two It's getting bigger and bigger. Ye Fan can do everything, but Bai Yunxi has no arrangements for other authors except swordsmanship. And what makes me most uncomfortable is that in the later stage, Ye Fan didn't always say that I love my wife the most like he did in the early stage. Finally, such sweet points are gone, and good things are no longer close to Bai Yunxi. I feel The love line that makes me heartbroken the most is the deputy CP. The relationship between Brother Ye Fan and Xu is really inexplicable. Moreover, Xu is really the background panel. Most of the descriptions are about Ye Da, while Xu mentions very little. Moreover, I feel that Ye Da loves swords more than Xu Du. In short, I can say that he is basically the deputy CP. It all feels like a background board, but there are some bright spots. I don't understand that the secondary CP character is so easy to beat, but the emotional line is really poorly written. Another complaint is that the author's portrayal of women is too bad. Basically, the villains in the early stage are women. They are stupid and lack strength. The above are the shortcomings for me. Because I like this genre, I gave it five stars. I also specifically bought Liancheng. The common problem of this author is that the emotional lines are very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very poor. Shou always has a weak sense of presence. I really like the others. Alas😮‍💨, I hope the author can practice his writing skills in writing love lines. Also, the Feng Yi Fan appears too few times. It appeared a few times in the beginning and I won't mention it later. It would be better to give Xu and Ao Xiaobao's father at that time, and they didn't appear in the Shangtian Realm [face covering]. Did the author forget it?

It's a book that I would re-read when I'm short of books. It's very good. Maybe many friends will think it's a bit novice. The emotional scenes are almost non-existent, but I just like the feeling of following the plot. As for the emotional scenes, it's better for the two of them to be together.

It's really good-looking, especially Ye Fan's character. He has the same attitude towards his wife and the same attitude towards others. I also like Bai Yunxi very much o(^▽^)o. After reading it for three or four days, I can tell by the reading time. It's different from the fairy tales I usually read. It's really good-looking. I highly recommend it. It's really the ceiling for two men to cultivate immortality [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] It looks good and I am suitable for reading this kind of article. Is there any meal replacement? I have read it several times and I still don't feel tired. Please give me a meal replacement😭

The protagonist has very upright views, which is very good. Behavior. Shaped perfectly. Those who are kind to him, are kind to him, and are kind to him will always be better to others. I read this novel several years ago, and it turned out to be this author. Like very much

It's super invincible and beautiful. I really like Ye Luoyi's writing style. It's humorous and witty, and the number of words is not enough. I've only read all the novels written by Ye Luoyi. I highly recommend it!

This is really a long-running novel with two male protagonists that I have watched from beginning to end without skipping a chapter. It is really great and very enjoyable to read from beginning to end.

I liked Gong's writing very well, and I really like Gong's cute, honest and frank personality. There are always people in the comment section saying that Gong has low EQ and is stupid. He himself is a very popular person in the world of immortality. When he comes to the mortal world and faces mortals, he doesn't need to talk about EQ at all. His character design is very realistic and consistent with that of a cultivator. I don't like the character's character that he writes very awkwardly. At the beginning, he was very rude and unqualified, which is not like a son of aristocratic family. When he was given such a precious medicine, he always looked very cold. Son, it's inexplicable that a person who has not lived for a long time can still be so arrogant. His character is not very likable. Some people in the article always belittle Gong and don't believe in him. They all know that he is a capable person. Shan Fan, a mortal, is like this when facing people who understand metaphysics. Very respectfully, when a cultivator looks at a mortal, it is like looking at an ant, and he feels like a licking dog. Others always give him a cold look of distrust but still lick him. How can a monk become a licking dog? [Understood]

Very good, I have watched this countless times I continued to come here again [laughing]

It's wonderful. Although the relationship between the protagonists is relatively plain and doesn't have that sticky feeling, I think it's very good, plain but sincere. The male protagonist is both witty and inspirational, and he is also very money-obsessed [laughing]. He is also a double clean. He is worth recommending [top post]

Good-looking, good-looking, Ye Fan has low emotional intelligence, but he can like Yun Xi at a glance

Very enjoyable book. The laughter comes unexpectedly. Ye Fan traveled from the world of cultivation to China and met Bai Yunxi. The two of them traveled from China to the world of cultivation and then to the world of immortality. Especially the plot where Ye Fan went from being yelled at by everyone to being admired by everyone and became a savior. He and Bai Yunxi upgraded and defeated monsters all the way, and even their relatives and friends around them also rose up along with them. It's very interesting. In the spirit of a gentleman, it is never too late for ten years to seek revenge. Take action when it's time to take action, and run away when it's time to escape.

Unable to tell. It's so beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration] Ye Fan's love at first sight and his everlasting passionate love for Yun Xi are Ye Fan's most eternal symbol. Yunxi's love for Ye Fan is reflected in the details. His love is as gentle and delicate as a stream. Although the author doesn't describe much of Yunxi's scenes on the surface, when they appear, it's full of love, all in the details. Book lovers need to read it carefully. Ye Fan's love for Yun Xi is as bright and brilliant as the sun. It was a passionate emotion that was immediately apparent. For Ye Fan, Yunxi is always the first choice, and he loves Yunxi more than himself. The two of them accompany each other and rely on each other, which has become an instinct engraved in their bones and blood. They are lucky to meet each other. It is our good fortune that their stories have been written. We get to see emotions that are so pure, so passionate, and so deep and detailed. And both of them are very kind-hearted. Although the world of cultivation is cruel, they will kill people to seize treasures, but they always kill those who offended them first. The two people lived in the world of cultivation and were not distorted by the cruel environment. They are as kind as ever, but not purely kind. Revenge will be avenged, but some revenge that does not lead to death is unnecessary. After all, who would look at the garbage on the roadside? There is a desire to seek revenge, but one must retaliate without scorn, and one who pays homage to kindness is the best image of a protagonist. The various passers-by and friends described by the author will also be explained slowly and carefully in the follow-up, and the protagonist will also chat with passers-by and save people when he meets them. It's a very, very, very affectionate protagonist. In fact, the author wrote the protagonist and other characters very carefully. It grasps the shaping of each character itself and the various subtle reactions of the character in various situations. The author is great, but these details and the subtle differences in the various reactions of these characters need to be understood carefully. I only found the small details after three brushes. Maybe I'm overthinking, maybe I'm over-interpreting? Anyway, I personally think that the small details of each character are really great [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]. And the author is super super super super super fun and funny. The author's brain circuit is really awesome. This book is a funny and self-cultivation-upgrading novel with two male protagonists. It's very funny. There are some golden lines and some funny plots that are simply caught off guard. The author's brain circuit is really strong [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] Every time I watch it I laugh until my stomach hurts. Super super super super nice. Welcome new fans to the pit [shy][shy][shy][shy]

Very nice.. Recommended! .. After Ye Fan chased Yunxi... They have been together... This is awesome👍👍 There is no affectionate male and female... Great! .. I like watching Ye yell at people.. It's so funny! ... The protagonist occasionally brings a burden with him... But not for long... Which is great! I really don't like the protagonist who is always dragging me around. This article doesn't have such flaws! ! .. The only shortcoming is that... Bai Yunxi didn't have much to shine in his later period... He mainly focused on being a companion! .. It's still such a cool article. Good luck to the author! ! I'm looking forward to the next one, which is also a cool novel where the protagonists are always together... (2 Brushes..2 Brushes from the Eastern Continent.. It's still very good.. No drag.. Comfortable)

It's a very good book. It's one of the rare times I read it all without skipping a chapter. There is no very delicate emotional line, but it is very warm. Ye Fan will always shout "I love my wife the most". Bai Yunxi is often left speechless by Ye Fan, who has zero emotional intelligence (haha, Yunxi's eyes roll is basically because of Ye Fan). My favorite part is the scene where the two of them are lying on their knees under the starry sky~

The book is very interesting. I read it elsewhere before and now I read it again. In addition, those who use God's perspective to insult the protagonist without any brains are extreme male channel thinking, and those who use God's perspective to insult people other than the protagonist without any brains are extreme female channel thinking. It is recommended that you use your brain more and comment less when reading a book. The paragraph comment function is for friendly communication among book friends and is not a place for extreme groups to show their empty heads and vent their dissatisfaction with life. [Eat melon]

I really like this article. I had a lot of fun reading it. I usually don't read long articles like this. I read half of it in one go and stayed up late every day to read it. The protagonist of this article, Ye Fan, has a very funny character but he is a genius and loves his wife the most. Although Yunxi likes to complain about him, her love for him is in the details. She tolerates him and trusts him. There are also some cute babies with magical spirits.

I have read it several times before and listened to the book after reading it. I really loved it. Although I was speechless as I kept listening to the words, the writing was also very white. But I really love the character plot. I read a lot of interesting things in the article, and I almost never read such long stories. I often lose interest and give up halfway through. But the article is so long. Except for the extra chapter, I didn't like it. Everything else was super smooth to read. The plot connection is really awesome. Mainly, I like the characters of the two protagonists very much, and I also like the important supporting characters. After watching too much, I suddenly felt that the lack of punishment from the original Ye Fan's family really gave them an advantage.

Nice. It's very interesting, but the first few chapters are scary. I watched it with fear (I am a super timid person, so I feel scared). The article is very well written. I stayed up late to read it. However, the emotional line is bland and not super sweet and crooked. It's not sad and it's very interesting. I'm reading it now that I'm exhausted.

I really enjoyed reading this invincible and refreshing article! Ye Fan is a genius with many talents, while Bai Yunxi is smart and careful. The two complement each other. The two pairs of deputy CPs, the eldest brother and the third brother, are also very good friends. Although they are both Taoist couples who are outstanding, they will never forget each other. The protagonists are all grateful and filial people. The three brothers support each other and cultivate immortality together. There is no routine fighting and they live and work in peace and contentment. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] The author's writing style is delicate, the article's logic is clear, and there are many foreshadowings. [Blowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss] It is really difficult to write a long article, but the characters of the protagonists of this novel have not collapsed in the later stage. Each has its own characteristics. [Note] Ye Fan is quirky, Bai Yunxi is calm and careful... Good book worth recommending [like][like][like]

Big, big, big, when will my favorite cannon fodder male supporting actor and spiritual planter move here, as well as the princess?

It's a very heart-warming story. The whole story is a slap in the face to Shuangwen and her doting husband. Ye and Bai fell in love at first sight, and they never parted ways throughout the whole story. [Adoration] (Little Couple 999) Let's take a closer look at the relationship between Ye Fan and Bai Yunxi. They are sweet, and they feel like an old couple. This is not a very sweet novel, so when I read it, my friends couldn't stand it and quit in time. [Shy] Ye Fan loves Bai Yunxi very much. He is like a piece of wood, with a poisonous tongue and so on, but he listens to Bai Yunxi very much. He will give Bai Yunxi any money or things he earns, and he gives all his tenderness to Bai. Sometimes Bai will be "violent" to Ye, because Ye's mouth is too indebted to others, and Bai needs to be more careful about his emotional intelligence. Ye loves Bai very much, and Bai believes in him because Ye loves him very much. It's really beautiful. I'm already [crying][crying][crying][crying] after reading it a few times.

OK, next I will use the most upright, most straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most practical, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, most clean and neat, most frank and frank, most simple and simple, most close to daily life, least pretentious, not piling up gorgeousness. The vocabulary does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout thoughts, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be profound, does not add unnecessary and cumbersome foreshadowing, every word is open and transparent, every sentence is sincere and true, the whole process is in plain language, there is no subtlety or concealment, every sentence goes straight to the core point, and the writing style is simple No pretentiousness, the expression is clear and concise, no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, no pretentious embellishments, straightforward enough to be understood at a glance, simple enough that everyone can understand, practical enough not to contain any empty words, neat enough not to contain any nonsense, frank enough not to hide any reservations, popular It can be understood regardless of age. It is hard-core and candid without being tactful, refreshing and direct without procrastination, simple and sincere without being exaggerated, easy to understand without being profound, straight to the point without foreshadowing, telling the truth without covering up, straightforward without being pretentious, plain and simple without being flashy, clear and clear without being vague, and frank without going around in circles. I tell you: it looks good.

Main attack, main attack, main attack, attack character design is very fun. Once the three attackers in the protagonist group come together to come up with ideas, their IQs will fluctuate, and they are always on the way to causing trouble. The protagonist is the second eldest child in the family. He has superior intelligence and zero emotional intelligence, but he is very good at relationships and only loves his wife. Attack 2: The eldest son of the family, a swordsman, with super strong combat power. He was jealous of his wife and made a big move with his younger brother (it was a misunderstanding, and he did not know his identity). Attack 3, the only scheming puppy in the family, signed a Taoist couple contract with his wife by any means, but pretending to be innocent on the surface is really causing trouble.

I really like this author's writing style. The author loves her protagonists very much and will not give them any bloody plots of white moonlight, substitutes, amnesia, sadomasochistic triangles, and physical and mental abuse. The protagonists she created always go in both directions, fight side by side and grow together, go through ups and downs and hardships together, and always choose the other side with the same original intention. The plot written by the author is also very exciting, with a grand world view and rigorous narrative. Basically, all the pitfalls and foreshadowing are filled in one by one. As an upgrade flow novel, it has its own set of thinking logic, without the sense of a brainless upgrade that slaps you in the face and lowers your intelligence.

I've finished watching it. [Shy][Shy] It's the first time I've seen the setting of a genius who talks nonsense and has a bad mouth. He takes the worst spiritual root and walks out on the worst path.，，，[][] I also like the brotherhood of the Ye family, and the fancy bad ideas to chase his wife [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] The storyline is interesting and exciting Rich characters, vivid and interesting The only thing may be that this book is a bit old, so some of the descriptions are less vivid and lively [Salute] Overall it's pretty good, suitable for a while in the book world. Comments are for reference only. [Salute][Salute][Salute]

Very nice! ! ! ! ! ! Ye Fan really gives Yun Xi a sense of security all the time, and both of them are very generous to the people around them. Ye Fan is super confident [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

The longest story I have read so far, it is a story about killing monsters and upgrading. It is also a good story. Even if the protagonist in the middle hides and hides because of his low strength, you will feel that they can solve everything. The Beloved of Heaven is so unscrupulous~ Personally, I prefer Yunxi. At first, I thought Ye Fan's emotional intelligence was a bit too low, and it was a bit annoying to talk to him all the time. But later, thinking about his living environment, he really didn't need a little modification as a real young man. And he really has nothing to say to Yunxi. He loves his wife not only in words but also in actions. The two are a match made in heaven, they are so perfect for each other. Because it is a novel with Ye Fan as the main line, the description of Yun Xi in the later period is relatively less, a bit like a pendant, mainly an upgraded plot. However, this family is indispensable for Yunxi's brains. She is so versatile in coaxing people to take care of her children and doing everything right. It's a good read to read. Friendships with the protagonist are rewarded with blessings, and enemies with the protagonist are punished. It's really not aggrieved at all. It's very suitable for reading when you have nothing to do~