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It can be seen that the author has a good literary foundation, but this writing style is not suitable for Tomato. The author wants to express too much, and his writing skills are still a bit immature. He cannot express it in short words, which may easily lead to redundancy. Also, the characters' emotions are not open-minded enough, resulting in a sense of stagnation between the crazy man and the resentful woman. The foreshadowing is still not enough, and it is a bit abrupt. Most parts of Tomato are adapted to short dialogue-style segmentation, so most of the fonts are larger, and it would be difficult to read without adjusting the size to be smaller. Finally, the author does not need to care too much about the reader's malice, and the explanations in parentheses can be less [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Update more 😄

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