Pirates: a Certain Vice-Captain's Journey of Suffering

Come on, author, you've got a great start. As long as it doesn't end badly and doesn't break down, I think it will look good if you write it like this. You can add some self-created skills by the way. After all, this is One Piece, not Pokémon, Devil Fruit, but Pokémon. But how to use and develop abilities is a human matter.

When did it evolve into the Blue Flame Blade Demon?

The heroine should preferably be Robin or the Empress

It's well written, and I feel like I'm feeling refreshed when I read it. It doesn't contain any personal information. I just don't know why few people read good books, but many people read bad books that are full of personal information.

The only drawback is that the front part overlaps too much with the original work. Maybe many people rate it without seeing the back part, resulting in a low rating, but it is actually a really good book. The original plot is very interesting, but there are so many things written in the front that overlap with the original work, and the original story in the back is so long, I don't blame others who can't stand it [face covering]

Yes, I happened to be short of books, so I thought of taking a look, and found that it was quite well written and very creative. It's good for the author to write at the current pace. Don't speed up the progress for me. Let me grow up slowly.

Very good, it's rare to see a Tomato Pirates novel without a broken character!

I feel that Tyr is more suitable for evolving into the Red Lotus Armor Qi Cang Flame Blade Demon now that he has no sword foundation. And the protagonist is currently more of a mage.

It's good to read, but it lit up Sanji's cigarette, so I sent this book

Personally, I am looking forward to the plot two years from now. I hope you can stick with it.

This is my favorite boat flow, it's very good Oops, after hoarding books for two months, the author stopped writing.

I've only watched the beginning so far, but I think it's okay. It's a rare piece of food.

It's good so far. The protagonist has naturally integrated into the Straw Hats, and the original characters are not OOC. This is rare. I hope it can be maintained in the future.

Does this book have a female protagonist?

OK, I read it all at once. I found that every time I really like to read a book, there are very few updates. I cried.

Come on more! Otherwise you are just a low-level pirate [angry][angry][angry]

Come on, it looks pretty good.

Come on! It looks good. This is the first book I reviewed.

Come on, author, you must keep writing. I am looking forward to the plot in two years.

The overall plot is pretty good, there are no random changes, it's just that it was discontinued. Also, the protagonist's animal-type fantasy beast is too common. Fantasy beasts have all kinds of fantasy abilities. Controlling fire is still too boring. The rest of the writing is okay, as if there is a real person in the Straw Hats.

It's rare to find a Pirates fanfic that's so appealing to my taste.

Super good-looking, maybe a bit poisonous in the early stage, but invincible in the later stage

It's rare to see this kind of novel. The protagonist is integrated very well and the overall atmosphere is great. Update soon! All the flowers I was waiting for have faded! Author, please work harder. I'm still waiting for you to continue updating, so I'll send you fanart!

It's really cool. It's the first time I know that Pokémon can also become devil fruits. This theme is really novel.

Beautiful, incomparably beautiful

The most appetizing one is "Flow with the Boat", but it's a pity that the author doesn't write it anymore

Not bad, it would have been nice if the protagonist had more fighting scenes.

Very good. Come on, at least finish it.

So far, this is a rare masterpiece of fan fiction, keep up the good work