Lishan Xianjun

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This book is very comfortable to read. It gives people a feeling that the world of immortality should be like this, and also feels what it means to be a real monster [Love] [Like] [Admiration] It really won't work later

I give you a five-star review because I think you have worked very hard! Unlike those pretentious chase stories But I still give you a suggestion for your reference. First, your part of the Tower of Babel is a bit over the top! It's okay to create a small world! But you cannot resurrect people in the small world or bring them to your own world because you are originally in a circle and you have not jumped out of the circle. How can you create a circle like yourself! Unless you have the ability to jump out of this circle! At least his abilities are higher than those in his circle! The second is resurrection! It is said that Daluo Jinxian is hard to save! Chengxian at least breaks out of the current circle! For example, the circle of mortals cultivating immortals! Even Daluo Jinxian cannot be resurrected, how can you, a mortal, be resurrected! The circle of the third god might be able to resurrect some special and specific things! The last one is, I suggest that in your current situation, you can choose this world, which is the only one among the three thousand small worlds that is directly linked to the big world! The big boss setting of creating the world has been changed to some big bosses in the big world! Worldviews are directly connected! Finally, you can use the circle of God and Qi to finish!

Overall, it's very good. There are very few Tomato Geniuses. Counting this one, I've only read two serious traditional fairy tales. The author is very attentive, and the world view setting is very novel. The author's writing style and rhythm control are pretty good, and the occasional flaws are not hidden.

Who is the heroine? The protagonist should be more decisive in killing, just like Zhutian. Don't have so many conspiracies and plots against the protagonist. Upgrade faster in the early stage.

I feel like it's very well written. Why are there so few people reading it?

Can there be less plot about Chu Fan?

I came in as soon as I saw it was a group portrait. I stayed up all night and finished it. Come on!

It's a very nice book. I feel like this book is a brisk-paced novel. The plot is quite rich, the characters are well-drawn, and the emotional lines are light but not messy. I feel that the effort of this book is not proportional to the income. Haha, come on, come on, come on🔥🔥🔥 If you like traditional fantasy immortality novels, please support me [smile][make a face][smile][laugh][get it]

The book has its own style and characteristics, basically no poisonous points, and the logic is quite satisfactory. Although I don't like some of the content, the flaws are not concealed. The nature of the book is only worth 4 stars, but I still give 5 stars for encouragement on this platform.

This is a rare Dan Linggen genius novel. I'm tired of reading mortal novels. Check out the genius novel. It's very interesting.

It's really good. It's obviously tiring to watch at the beginning, but then it's fine. Then there are definitely many people who like the protagonist unilaterally, but why do you have to write about it? It also writes quite a lot about various aspects, maybe two or three of these at most. The protagonist starts to practice alone when he is curious about everything. No one teaches him how to deal with it, but it can't be written like this. For this kind of top-level talent, it is really good to join a top-level force at the beginning, start practicing from the lowest level, and work your way up without bottlenecks. The focus is on practicing outside, increasing your experience, feeling the beauty of the world, and understanding your inner style. But it is definitely not popular. Many of them are here to relieve the tense mood, rather than to read an interesting story, and they are still here. It's a pity, but I don't have enough experience at the moment. I look forward to the next book. Similar plots should not be available when the heroine comes out, but the handling of the overall chapter must be practiced, but there are few people, and the author may not be able to figure it out in time. I can't afford to wait for the next book. Let's wait until the book shortage ends and then check the situation. Later, due to the change of content trends and the unknown progress, it may be less perfect. I could see some problems, but I would fix them subconsciously when I was watching them. I wanted to look at the core of the story first, so I didn't pay attention to them. I had to think about them later. If it's a little messy, of course it must be a little bit messy. I didn't pay attention when I was watching it. I saw someone saying that if I look back, it should really be less messy. The focus is not here, so when you watch it relaxedly, you will definitely not pay attention to it. What I say here is mainly because I suddenly thought about this aspect and gave myself a summary. The two sentences here are just casual explanations. It is troublesome to say a lot of summaries. There is also the reason why I sincerely hope that my writing can become better, but rarely give detailed suggestions. To give that kind of advice, I have to confirm every detail, and even watch it a second or third time, but for some reasons, I won't watch it a second time. I said a lot of useless stuff, but I haven't finished reading it. I don't know how it is now. I'll talk more about it when I have a chance to finish it.

This novel is a compelling work that deftly blends reality and fantasy to immerse the reader in a rich plot. The author has excellent performance in character creation and emotional description, allowing readers to deeply feel the protagonist's inner world. In addition, the novel has a compact structure and smooth writing, making it easy to read in one sitting and leave you with endless aftertaste.

It's really okay to read 200 chapters in one go. I'm just not used to seeing two male protagonists for the first time, but it's okay. Also, this is the day I have been waiting for! Talent! Arts! Mouth! Tooth!

It makes me feel happy to see it

Very nice, recommend it

Personally I think it looks pretty good

This book is very exciting, and it makes people want to read more!

A very good novel, worth looking forward to!

It took me a day to read it. It was well written and laid the foundation for a lot of things, but why is the rating so low? There are so few people watching

I just like genius writing.

Good looking. Love to see more.

It's also okay that the protagonist Chu Fan's strength is a bit low and he only established the foundation after more than 100 chapters!

The IQ is online and the plot is good, but the pace is a bit slow and has the feel of a group novel.

Very nice, heartwarming, easy to look at [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][love]

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful, it's so beautiful, sometimes it's just beyond words!

Invincible background, top-notch talents, harmonious clans, friendly relatives, decisive killing of villains, a good novel

The author's imagination is very rich, the structure of the novel is clear and very compact, and the plot has climaxes and ups and downs. It is a great novel and worth recommending.

The writing is smooth and natural, the story has ups and downs, and it's very interesting [like][like][like]

The author's writing is fluent, the logic is clear, and the content is wonderful. It's worth reading!