I Brought My Own Little Maid at the Beginning of the First Battle, and I Was Already Invincible.

The overall look and feel is good, but why are so few people reading it? I feel that the author has written relatively well in the same type of article. The early plot focuses on the daily interactions between the male protagonist and his subordinates, bosses, and female protagonists. There is no description of war until the later battle, which is relatively slow. But I like to read this kind of thing, and I hope the author will work harder.

The writing is very good. The author has a certain historical background, but he always forgets the pronouns used by the country. Haha, it is almost 300,000 words. There are still very few people who read it. Well, no one asks for a good work, and there are always many writers who enjoy it. Looking forward to more updates and the author's reply [laughter]

After all, this is my first novel, so I must give it 5 stars. Although it is not perfect in terms of results and ending, it still made me realize my own shortcomings. It is necessary to sum up experience and learn lessons for the future.

There are so few people who write about this kind of subject matter. The author must be a very dreamy person. Those who write about this unpopular subject matter all have dreams. When Pavlovich said that if you fight hard or you will perish together, is the author also trying hard!

The writing is delicate and it is a relatively realistic novel. I don't know whether the protagonist will engage in international sports or continue to work in the secret service in the future.

It turns out that Pavlovich is a double talent! Thank you to the author for writing a free future for minibuses and maids in a turbulent world.

When war comes, everyone has an unshirkable responsibility. This is the first time I saw this kind of article. After reading it for a while and commenting, I feel that Pavlovich should have great ambitions and have the feeling of calming the world.

To tell a complete story, is it a parallel time and space line? The scene is grand and the characters are highlighted.

Good looking, good luck to the author

Where is the invincible? Can't see it~

Good, good, good

Greatness needs no words

I like the way Pavlovich behaved when he was young, he was not sloppy at all, but I never expected to be injured by an explosion, hahaha

When the male protagonist was hospitalized, it seemed that she was the only one who truly cared about our male protagonist. Her feelings for him were very real and beautiful.

It doesn't look like Su, I'm not sure, let's take another look (it's pretty well written)

Great, hahaha

I also want to have pistachios like her around me. If there is, then I will be very happy every day!

Ancient history, in the final analysis, means that we travel through time and space and immerse ourselves in those unfavorable and magnificent historical events, and experience the wisdom and courage of the ancients.

Time is a very precious thing. Does our young male protagonist Paplovich have enough time to grow up and protect the people he wants to protect?

The male protagonist is really trying his best to protect her, and is also thinking carefully about the future with him. After watching part of it, I hope there will be a good ending (war is cruel)

Novels written during the First World War often depict the brutality of war, but the story of this novel is interesting and original.

The history of World War I is brought back to that turbulent era by modern ancient novels. Pavlovich's story is touching and impressive.

It's very good and true. We are all ordinary people. In other words, we are all Pavlovich, and we all want to fight for her!

Not bad, looks okay The writing style is still relatively delicate and realistic. I hope I can write better and better every day.

Pavlovich met her in the hospital. Although she said harsh words, she still hoped that the male protagonist would be safe.

I never imagined that Pavlovich's bedroom was arranged in the shape of a "king"! What does this look like? ! The sense of substitution is coming

I really want to ask, does the male protagonist like her? He went to do bad work for her, and he still had this heart to protect her.

I love that pistachio in it. She is kind and cute, and she is happy every day. I really want such a pistachio!

It feels like the male protagonist is analyzing the situation every day, hoping that the person next to him can live a better life. When will the two of them make an official announcement?

The beginning of the story is very attractive. It consists of three stories that unfold the story of the young Pavlovich. There are no settings for cultivating immortality, but only the battle (war) between you and me.