Yuan Xinghe stood at the entrance to the simulator room for the Nuclear Star Devourer mecha, the impatient urging of his teammates echoing in his ears. “Get in there, Yuan Xinghe!” The captain's voice brooked no argument. “Yeah, yeah, I'm going. What's the rush?” Yuan Xinghe replied carelessly, though his gaze wandered over the sweat-drenched team members who had already finished training. “You're the only one who hasn't trained yet. Why are you dragging your feet?” the vice-captain scolded, irritation creeping into his voice. “Look at him, coming in last again. Take Chi Linran, for example. He's always first.” The words pierced Yuan Xinghe's pride like a sharp blade.
Yuan Xinghe looked toward another simulation pod. Chi Linran was stepping out, looking dashing and triumphant. Yuan Xinghe forced a smile and waved. “You're amazing, Brother Linran. First place again.” He tried to put an arm around Chi Linran's shoulder to show some friendliness, but Chi Linran subtly shifted aside and gently pushed his hand away. “Yuan Xinghe, you can't just sling an arm around anyone you like!” There was a faint chill in Chi Linran's voice. He then walked away without looking back, leaving Yuan Xinghe standing there, stunned. His feelings were a jumble, as if a stampede of alpacas were charging through his mind, but confusion and bitterness overwhelmed everything else.
“If my dad hadn't taken you in back then, you'd still be a little beggar wandering the streets,” Yuan Xinghe muttered to himself, but kept the words unspoken. Just then, a clear, gentle voice broke the awkward silence. “Brother Xinghe, why are you just standing there? Where's Brother Linran?” Yuan Xingyue
The subject matter and setting are quite good, but the dialogue arrangement of the characters is too deliberate and not very natural. The feeling of each chapter: It is very large, but it feels like there are a lot of things that have not been written. It's a good book, but it feels weird