The Little Crybaby Educated Youth Gets Entangled with the Retired Rough Guy

It's not a no-brainer, but I can see some improvement, but some sentences could be more concise, and the heroine has quite a background. There is a long description of the heroine's appearance. Actually, you don't need to write so much. You can describe it later through other people's eyes.

The author wrote this book very well. I haven't seen enough yet, please update quickly [smile]

The story I am writing is so exciting and touching.

Not bad. But what is very sad is that the author can not be so cruel. The original owner's grandfather is still alone in the modern age, still guarding the body of his good daughter. When I read the latest chapter, I really wanted to cry. I hope there will be a good ending for the grandfather in the modern age [crying] [crying] [crying]

Nice! ! ! ! Not enough, the author is great! ! ! Can you give me a little more? Woohoo, not enough.

Hehe, praise yourself

Not bad, but the serialization caught me off guard. I don't know what kind of luck I had recently, but I read three novels in succession, all of which were serialized. I was devastated...

Five-star recommendation! The male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist at first sight, so sweet!

The content is quite good, but there are too few updates to read. The heroine is very powerful, sassy and soft.

Very pretty, very sweet, and very funny

Author, please write it quickly, it's not enough to read [Like][Like][Like]

Great, come on, come on

This article is nice. Can't get enough. Especially when the hero who fought bravely for the motherland is lying on the bed... It makes people sympathize with each other and shed tears. I just hope that the author will be merciful and let the hero get better as soon as possible... Must give a five-star rating!

You really can't look at ratings to find novels to read, but this novel is very good! I read a book with a score of 9.7, And all the people I read had breast hyperplasia.

The content is very interesting and interesting

I really want to give you a bad review, because you are so good at cutting, I really cried for a long time When you go out, you only have parents, and the master is gone. Although the modern grandpa has replaced the master, it is still a good knife.

After reading it, the whole article is compact and enjoyable to read!

Highly recommended! ! ! I personally still prefer this writing style, especially when the male and female protagonists meet again in the heroine's world later in the extra episode, it feels like traveling through time and space just for you ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

It looks good, it looks good, I hope you don't get distracted later

It's good. I hope the heroine will focus on her career and write more about medical treatment. She wants the hero to be semi-invisible. But this is a personal opinion and can be ignored. We still have to follow the opinions of the public.

Looks good, keep it up...

It's such a fantasy novel. The heroine's space sells so many things, even when she gets on the train. No one checked or doubted her when she got to the army. It's good to read as a very fantasy novel. The pace is also quite fast. Although the heroine is soft and waxy and a little crybaby, her core is very strong. The heroine is gentle and tough. The male protagonist is also good. Yes, the heroine is a thousand pampers and pampers all the heroines. It's not bad as a pampering novel. Anyway, it looks pretty good.

It's beautifully written and enjoyable to read.

It's quite good to watch. The more I watch it, the more I want to watch it. A time traveler with a kind heart.

It's so well written, but it's a little teary. I was so absorbed in it that my tears kept flowing.

I have read a lot of novels, but I generally won't comment on them unless they are very interesting and interesting. This is the only novel that doesn't skip chapters or double speed. I even cried to myself in the middle. It's so good and I love reading it. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good

It's good to like the heroine.

The better it gets, I haven't seen enough yet, I want to see the follow-up.

Super beautiful, very very beautiful