Douluo Nine-Tailed Douluo

You can see, it's very delicious for omnivores like us! Although there are two male protagonists, I am still quite confused. In the early stage, I was made to think that the protagonist and Xiao Wu were talking, which scared me half to death.

Super pretty! Double man, CP Tang San, if you are tired, take shelter from the lightning! If you are tired, take shelter from lightning! If you are tired, take shelter from lightning! Say important things three times!

Big brother, you have to write, you have to keep at it. It's very beautiful. I went there. This is one of the most beautiful ones I've ever seen. It's very impressive. I think I'm not good at knives. I like to write more sweet things in the future. And there's more. I have an idea. I don't want to hit Miao Miao. You can listen. Well, I would like to suggest that there is a plot behind it, it's the little dancing fairy. Well, when the time comes, the protagonist can see through him. Well, I don't know if the Qixi Festival will be leaked. I saw that he wrote it and then the protagonist knocked Xiao Wu unconscious and then sacrificed himself. Although it may feel a little bit weak, it is quite [smirking] [smirking] [smirking] [smirking] [smirking] [smirking] [smirking] It's so embarrassing

Dear author, I would like to give you a little advice. What you write is more like a composition than a novel. You can reduce the description of scenes appropriately, otherwise there will be a sense of fragmentation. Writing from the first perspective and the third perspective can allow readers to better understand. The plot can be more twists and turns, and it can bring some emotional tension. If you do this, your writing level will be great. As a novice, it will be great if you write like this. Come on.

Very nice! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! !

Great, I actually like it! ! !

It's very interesting. I've read so many books and it's the first time I've seen two male protagonists. It's very novel. Why don't you continue writing?

Two men? Tang San is not right.

It is recommended to use ice spikes, ice spears, and hail as soul skills. The field is absolutely zero.

Not bad, pretty good, but the title could be changed. Xiao Wu is actually older than Brother Yang, so the title could be changed. It sounds a little uncomfortable.

The writing is really very good! It's the best written book I've ever read! It's just that the emotional control of some characters in the early stage needs a little polishing, but it still looks great! (I cried so much)

It's really good. I recommend reading it again. It's super good. I'm very picky about reading novels like this. He really, really likes it.

Very beautiful, highly recommended! !

It's very beautiful, the kind of slowly falling in love with each other [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]

I really like the large writing style and the clear description! ! ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

It's so beautiful that it made my blood boil. Especially this one was so beautiful that it made my blood boil. Especially this one about the hotel fight. I was so excited when I saw it at the end.

I hope there's no knife in the back

Good, very good, very good.

Very nice and interesting

Special Wari Good

It looks good, but I wonder why it's not updated anymore!

It's well written, but the number of words is a bit short.

Very well written in big letters [blowing kiss]

Super good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very, very good-looking

The author's writing style is very good and beautiful₍ᐢ⸝⸝› ̫‹⸝⸝ᐢ₎

The author's writing is so good. Who would understand if I stayed up late to read it?

It's a good read, a good read, a good read, a good novel, I'd say it three times. Great support from the author, keep updating! Don't stop if you love looking good. Please🥺

It looks great, you must keep it up! ! [Love]

It's good, but there are very few people following it.

Good, good, very good