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It's good-looking, good-looking, but the heroine may have a bit of low self-esteem, and her emotions are like a dull knife cutting into me. In short, this novel satisfies my fantasy very well. I strongly recommend this book. I'm tired of reading HP. Finally I came across such a good book. Please update it soon. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

The description of the Sri Lankan religion is so detailed, let me immerse myself in the heroine! ! It feels like a love story between two war gods with low self-esteem. It made me feel very sad. Both of them made me feel distressed...

Looks good! ! ! I really like this kind of article that is dedicated to the professor. The author will update it soon [crazy]

I love the cute little Lille who cares about Sri Lanka unconditionally! The plot is not sluggish. Although it is based on the movie version of the plot, the details are still very good, and he allowed me to see the young Dumbledore (blond and blue-eyed version~ [smile]) Alas! So how could I not pursue it? This book is a must-read!

I stayed up all night to finish it. This was the first time I saw a heroine with a character like Lear, who is extremely paranoid, has low self-esteem and has a tendency to self-destruct. I really feel sorry for Lear and Sif. It's not the kind of heartbreaking pain, it's like a dull knife being slowly sharpened. Although Sif didn't know Lear's plan, he had been trying to make her survive in his own way, and he gradually gained the will to survive, ah, two little bitter gourds. It's not a traditional sweet article, but the sweetness in every part impressed me even more. The dancing part was well written, and the part where Leal said his feelings made my heart beat loudly. It's just not enough to watch [crying] Can you do some extras from time to time? I want sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet extras.

The character of the heroine is very novel among the Harry Potter fanfics I have read, and although the number of words is not particularly large, the pace is tight and the character of the heroine is very fleshed out. A heroine who is a bit crazy, but a little morbidly loves the religion, and is even willing to die for the religion, appears in front of the readers. I would like to say that the author has done a great job in shaping this character. It's very successful. I also like Si Jiao's description. Protect me, Fang Si Jiao. The heroine always practices this. I like it very much. The author will update it soon. I'm really looking forward to the next plot. This feeling of stopping suddenly when I'm fascinated by it is really uncomfortable😖. Thank you to the author for giving me such a great reading experience [Adoration][Adoration]

Five stars, a rare high-quality HP fanfic. The biggest highlight is the emotional portrayal. To be honest, among many similar novels, the emotional development in this article is rare and delicate and reasonable. In my spare time, I have also thought about what kind of girl can truly appease Professor Snape's soul? I think that will not be a "beautiful" girl, it will only make Professor Snape escape further. The heroine in this article unexpectedly meets my expectations: neither of them can be said to be a beautiful soul, but they just patch things up for each other and hold each other together to comfort each other. I read this article with a smile and blessing, and thanked the author for giving Professor Snape such a girl who suited him.

It's really beautiful [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] It's very well written without OOC, I really like the heroine. The whole book is very thorough, but sugar is not the only thing that makes a good book. This is the professor in my mind. The heroine and I really resonate with each other, and he is a really good professor. If you are dissuaded by the introduction or name, you can take a look. It's really addictive. I didn't think it was good when I saw the introduction before, but then I cried to death when I looked back. What a great book. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Good-looking, Lille does not have a peerless appearance or extraordinary talent, but the author's meticulous character creation allows readers to touch the real Lille, who is thousands of miniatures. Si Jiao's emotional changes are also more delicate. Lille and Si Jiao, two stubborn people, have to tell each other their love for each other. How can it not be considered an interesting setting? The last sentence: Why Kavin? [Exploration] Carvin again? Palm mouth

Very nice! ! The plot is compact and smooth, with a mix of sweetness and abuse, which is like a dull knife from time to time. It is quite sour. The author's writing is delicate and the character descriptions are vivid and vivid... At first, I was quite indifferent to the heroine's inferiority, but as the plot deepened, I gradually understood her behavioral patterns and psychological problems. I'm very happy to see her and Si Jiao finally being able to connect with each other and redeem each other, especially when both parties are willing to pay "anything" for each other's safety...😍This sentence kills me! The most sadistic plot is the moment when the heroine cannot accept what she sees and hears (for example, discovering that the Boggart actually showed the scene where she committed suicide) because she is afraid that it is all just a dream. Just like in the extra story, she decisively chose to commit suicide just to meet Snape again in her dream. Even knowing that he is just a "paper man", this kind of unconditional protection and dedication is still touching...

Well... To be honest, I just wanted to read a random fanfic at first. I didn't expect to read it from morning to night. After reading it, I felt disappointed. But this ending may be the most reasonable. The ending of the main text is happy, but the extra chapter is a bit sad. As the saying goes, nothing in the world is perfect. This arrangement is very subtle, because the author has told us the ending from the beginning of the story. The night when the heroine expressed her love surprised me, and I was surprised by Lear's frankness. After all, Lear's performance in the previous chapters was a bit timid, especially when facing the Shangsi Cult. The story with a bit of regret makes people feel more real. I hope the characters in the story can continue to live a happy and ordinary life [crying][crying][crying] (A melancholy beautiful woman sheds a few tears

This is the best fanfic I've ever seen! Not one of them! There is no large-scale repetition of the original plot, and I really enjoy watching the plot of the fanfiction that quickly advances. The princess is written so that I feel immersed in it. I don't know how many times I cried while watching it😿Lil just kept cutting into my heart. She came for him, and she lived for him. Very disappointed, really. This is the first time I have been so disappointed with a book. This is the only book I have ever recommended.

Personally, I like this heroine and the ending very much, and I also like all the people who survived in the end. It is not a victory of death and defeat, but Severus can be ordinary in the end. There are no extra people or strange changes. He may meet people he really likes and like-minded, be it friends or lovers. They are all encountered by him, rather than the changes imposed on him by outsiders like us. I actually prefer his final big change. He did not die in the war, but stayed away, maybe traveled far away, or maybe found another place to live and study what he liked. Just like the ending now, he can pursue what he loves. This is probably my biggest wish for the professor. This is also the ending of my favorite professor. It is also probably the closest to the "rescue" I want to give the professor. After changing their mortal fate and leaving, it doesn't matter death or erasing all traces. The author is great ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧

Read them all in one week. I just feel that the author's IQ is very high, and the storyline is compact and well-written link by link. It's just a bit of a knife. When I saw Snape completely forgetting about Lear, I couldn't hold back [I almost cried] Overall, this is one of the best HP Snape articles I have seen. Sometimes it is difficult to find a book that suits your taste. I estimate that after reading this book, I will not want to read other books of the same type in a short time. My wife's writing style is very good, really good. I highly recommend reading it. My wife's mental state is also very advanced [I understand]

I've read half of it, so I'll comment first. I feel like this book is so well written! The character settings are very consistent with the original work! Then it's not the dream girl angle. It's the feeling that I feel sorry for you and want to protect you silently. The heroine's love and fear of Sri Lanka is very good and vivid. . . Si Jiao was indeed a person who showed his emotions and anger, making people afraid to approach him. I just feel like it's a bit short, and I don't know if I can tell the story completely. . . Keep reading! And there's more! The writing style of this book is very similar to the sense of English translation, not directly written in Chinese sense. Very powerful! Finally finished reading it twice. The character design is very suitable, and there is no other sequel with the same OOC. It can be seen that the author knows Sri Lankan religion very well, and that's right! Professor Si is not a person who is cold on the outside but hot on the inside. He is even a professor with a dead heart. He is cold on the outside but equally cold and dusty on the inside. Just to fight against Voldemort and for Lily. . It was the arrival of the heroine that changed Sri Lanka's religion. The life of Jean Sijiao gradually became more exciting. Before reading this book, the impressions I had on me were all those given by Rowling. I had never thought about what kind of life Sect was like in Spider-End Alley when he was not working, and what his life and work would be like if he were alive after Voldemort died. The author has supplemented all aspects. The character change behind Si Jiao is also very consistent, very natural and not deliberate at all! In fact, Si Jiao had fallen in love with the heroine unknowingly, but he didn't know it. . The mutual redemption of two souls! There is also a final extra that envisions another path. Maybe even though it's not a perfect ending, the heroine still tends to self-destruct. Her attitude towards the people she likes has always been to watch from a distance and never play with them. As long as you look good, it doesn't matter to me. In another parallel universe, Sri Lanka is alive, but the heroine has become the familiar Chinese biting cabbage. Very BE aesthetic!

It's so beautiful. I finished it in one go. I don't know what to say. When I read this article, I felt a kind of spiritual trembling. I would have a withdrawal reaction [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]. It's so beautiful, but the withdrawal reaction is really uncomfortable. One day has passed and I haven't recovered yet. Now I want to read it again immediately. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart Heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's really beautiful! I feel that the relationship between Si Jiao and the heroine is gradual and will not make people feel too abrupt or OOC. The character design of Si Jiao is also restored very well. It is a very good HP fan work that I have seen on Tomato!

It's so beautiful, it's so beautiful, it's so beautiful [crying][crying][crying][crying] The description is very delicate and I really feel like it [crying][crying][crying][crying] Protecting the best Sri Lankan religion in the world [crying][crying][crying][crying] I will do it twice.

The heroine emm's mental state is indeed unstable, but I can understand some of her behaviors. She is essentially a calm and restrained adult, much better than the age-assimilated heroines in most children's books, and it is also much closer to what I imagined. As for the relationship between the professor and the heroine, overall it's pretty good. There's no cheating, so it's not considered OOC.

Nice! Love watching! In addition to this article, I also read several short articles by a certain author, and they are really great! ! I want to write too, but I don't know what to write about🤔. I really admire you guys! ! 😍

A very good article. Although I doubted that the protagonist would be too mediocre without Goldfinger at the beginning, after reading it, I found that she has done the best she can do, relying only on herself. She really treats Severus as her own god [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Come on, author, give them a good ending

Super Invincible is very good-looking. After reading so many books, this is my favorite book. Two-way redemption, the heroine really only cares about Sri Lanka. Her crazy mental state really shocked me. It is the most psychological book about Sri Lanka and is not OOC at all. I have read too many fanfics written by Ben Si, all of which are kind of Mary Sue-like ones where the heroine is very awesome, and then there is always an extraneous relationship, which feels very boring. This book really made my eyes shine 😘😘

It's really a super, super good-looking book, and it's a book that has both the main text and the extras finished! But the rebirth episode of Si Jiao is really a bit tricky. I really like that Si Jiao can survive and welcome a life of love, instead of lying in the blood of the screaming shack to welcome the laughter of others. I want him to be loved, instead of still thinking about those green eyes before he dies.

It's beautiful. The teacher's emotional description is very delicate. Although she has a little inferiority, she has been working hard to save Snape. She is strong and brave. The final ending is really good. Teacher, you wrote it so well! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

The plot is very smooth. The male and female protagonists are two lonely souls who are closely dependent on each other and make up for each other. Emotions slowly arise in daily interactions. The two souls who lack love feel comfort in each other's hearts. There are too many knives, but fortunately the final ending is perfect, and the author's interaction is also very cute. I recommend reading it.

I think this novel, although not my favorite, can still be ranked in the top three. The emotional development of Snape and Lear is not abrupt. I think this step is very beautiful (^.^)💋🌹❤

I really like this book. Although the protagonist is in that kind of state, when I encounter the same Snape novel, I really love it. The details are very, very detailed, which is much better than the novel I wrote before. I am now a sixth grade primary school student. Can the author give me some advice on writing? If it doesn't work, it doesn't matter. The author's writing is really good. I highly recommend everyone to read it.

This book is really great. I recommend it. I highly recommend it. The heroine is a fan of Si's teaching and wants to redeem her personal trainer A slow-burning novel, with Snape's sentence at the end: Will you be my lover? Make me go crazy and twist into a maggot on the bed

Very beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! This rating almost made me miss this book😭, teacher, please update it ahhhhhhhhhhhhh

This is the first book about HP that I have read. I think it is well written. The main reason is that the characters are not OOC and the plot is too complex. I really like this kind of book. The text doesn't jump too far into peacekeeping. Although the progress is very fast, it is very smooth ~ read it in one sitting Want to see the reading time