Arknights: Kelsey's Brother Is Escaping from Prison

It's very interesting. The protagonist's pure human supremacy is like a P agency war criminal [laughing]

It is a relatively good Ark fanfic. There is no poisonous point in the early and middle stages, and the characters are not OC. But in the later stage, when there are future people and mutated creatures, there is a feeling of forcibly increasing the difficulty. It is like deus ex machina, as if it is maliciously slowing down the progress, and the setting of the protagonist is clear. It seems that there are some patches. From the beginning of the artificial man to the later relationship with the devil, it is obvious that there is something wrong with the outline, but the plot direction is still acceptable. In fact, at the beginning, I thought that the protagonist having these clones was a poisonous point, but later it seemed that it was okay. Therefore, all kinds of love lines are quite stable, there is no harem behavior, and the various clones can be regarded as pure love (?) Another point is that the update speed is too slow, and from the long chapter transition, it is obvious that the protagonist's attitude towards Terra's local creatures has changed. At the beginning, everyone except Sarkaz was killed, and later on, those who could cooperate with him and were in the same camp as him could be retained. The change in the protagonist's attitude was quite smooth, and the readers did not have the feeling that the protagonist's attitude changed all of a sudden. It is a good Ark novel and is worth recommending.

It's a pity that there are so few people. The emotional lines don't take up much space but are natural. The characters are almost non-ooc and the plot direction is also interesting.

After reading ten chapters, I found that only the Doctor can defeat him [face covering] The protagonist's love for the Doctor and the Creator has reached an almost yandere level [face covering] If the Doctor openly denies the meaning of his existence, the protagonist may go crazy or self-destruct. However, Dr. Amnesia just doesn't approve of his style, but he still regards him as his own, which completes his character design.

Except for the strange writing techniques, the rest is top-notch among Arknights fan fiction. Recommended It feels like it's getting more and more boring. Some things can be streamlined, but there are too many things. Moreover, there is no focus anymore. I can't see any obvious main line. I can still tell that the author may have wanted to remedy the situation by adding a future thread, but it was too mixed. Overall, it doesn't feel like I'm watching a story, it feels like I'm watching a story mixed with a lot of unofficial history, plus a narration with an unknown subject. The look and feel is too confusing.

You can ignore the protagonist Oldham, but you cannot ignore the main supporting character Torre. (It can be seen that one day) As the war spread, the inaction of the Chamber of Commerce intensified the conflicts in Casimir society. Torre, who often fought on the first front of the resistance, gradually gained recognition from the knights in the war. His reputation grew day by day, and the masses became more and more supportive of his development. His achievements spread to further countries, foreign authorities gradually recognized his status, and his subordinates became more loyal. When the war situation worsened (the independent knights were defeated), the people of Casimir, who were in dire straits (in the north) and under the threat of war (in the south), became more and more dissatisfied with the incompetent government, the knights on the expedition became more and more angry at the difficult situation, and the external countries became more and more desperate for Casimir to hold the battle line. All these created the foundation for the new king to ascend the throne! One On a new day, casimir, Make a declaration to all existence! "All the people of Casimir! Corrupt rulers No longer able to bring prosperity to our country! " One by one "It's visible! When Ursus fell, With his ridiculous insect allies, Menacing, Wants to invade Casimir's sacred territory" "It's the great knight king one by one Torre! It was he who established a line of defense against foreign enemies, Those disgusting invaders, All were wiped out on the front line. " "It was he who established the group and structured the system. Through economic foreign trade and industrial development, Supply and people's livelihood are guaranteed. " "It is he who makes foreign friends and defends against foreign enemies. Turn the tide before it falls, Help the building to collapse! " It's him, Will Casimir, Saved from the war! He saved all the people of Casimir! " "Great knight emperor! One by one His fame is spread all over the world and his power is powerful in all directions. Make the enemy flee! He is brave and powerful, and leads the army with gold and iron, Let the enemy's blood stain the battlefield! " "The new king has risen in the flames of war! " "How can we delay him! " "We declare today, To all intelligent creatures and unintelligent beasts, Declare! Tell all existence! " "The Rotten Casimir United Nations He has no right to crown the new king! " But! One by one The new empire of the Knights of Casimir Can offer his loyalty to his new king! ! ! " "Incompetent joint meetings are a thing of the past; Loyal Casimir meets his true master! " "I propose one by one The whole nation shouts for our emperor! The nation shouts for our empire! " "Your Majesty! Your Majesty! Your Majesty!!!" "Loyalty! Loyalty! Loyalty!!!" "Victory belongs to Casimir, Glory to the great Emperor! ! ! "

A very good book, the story content is very well integrated with the game background, and the characters are also very complete. It made me want to catch up on the plot after not reading it for a long time. The shortcoming is that I am worried that the book will be gone [face covering] The multi-threaded love line design of the avatar was a bit uncomfortable at first. It is a really good book. I personally feel that it is the best Ark fanfic ever written. The plot logic and character settings are perfect. I feel like I am reading an Ark novel. It feels strangely refreshing. The disadvantages are that I don't know why there are not many people, and I am worried that it will be discontinued. Also, the chapters at the back of the book are a little watery, and the plot is very slow. There are not too many updates every day.

Absolutely a unique porridge article, I really like the family drama between Lao Ao and Haji Kai (laughs)

It's pretty good to watch, but I always feel that the protagonist has been treated like a monkey by the people of future Terra, or that the protagonist "thought", "didn't care" and other reasons were used, which led to more serious consequences later, which is a bit uncomfortable.

Spoiler alert! ! ! Let me comment. I have basically read Tomato's current mainstream Arknights fanfics and some non-mainstream Arknights fanfics. I personally think it's okay to comment. I only evaluate the works here, and do not belittle the works. Look at it objectively. The overall plot is slow and the pace is not fast. There are certain loopholes in the plot and there are not many loopholes. It will not affect the viewing experience too much. , The character has a certain OOC, and the psychological description of the character is less. The character of the protagonist is not revealed from the beginning, but is slowly revealed through daily life later. It is not recommended for those who like to watch fast-paced movies. The work adds some interesting elements, such as the time traveled back from the future and the player doctor, which can provide some good There is a sense of expectation, especially for Dr. Player. You never know what the players will do. However, it may also cause the subsequent works to collapse due to the increase in the number of people. I suggest you be cautious here. The plot before the protagonist falls asleep is not explained, and there are certain words in it. If you have not understood Arknights, it is not built. I would like to give it a try. If you know it, it will look better. The overall work is slow. What are the plot holes and the characters are called? Most of the characters are not OOC. A few characters do have OOC. Overall, the work is worth watching and the author's updates are relatively stable. The words in Tomato are okay.

The last humans betrayed humans, and the non-humans betrayed by humans still want to restore the glory of humans. The plot is so grand that I wonder if it will end later.

This is the best Arknights epic I have seen so far! It is not a novel, but more like a grand epic with the background of Arknights! If you are a Swordsman who has a deep understanding of Arknights, you will like it very much. Although it may not be friendly to newcomers, I would like to call Arknights the strongest!

The writing is very good, but no one has read it for the time being, so the author holds on.

It's great. You don't have to go to the island to mess around. The Sakaz map starts very smoothly. The heroine is suspected to be W. Although it's useless, it's fine if you have it. Laobo is too bad, and there is also Laomao🐱

It's quite good to watch. The protagonist is a fun person (although the performance is not obvious). All crises can be watched as fun without being nervous. Some sentences feel a bit repetitive, maybe to remind people who have watched it for a long time to recall the setting? But fortunately, it has little impact.

It feels pretty good-looking. It has a doppelgänger setting, but it's not disgusting. It's more about opening up multiple plot lines and it's very comfortable to watch. Every line is quite interesting, but the update is slow, but this is not a poisonous point. Please update the author. Okay, this star rating is the rating this book should have. When it is rated 6, it is full of black spots.

The layout is very large, and the original plot is basically the background, which only serves to shape the characters and arrange the development of events. The protagonist's IQ is online most of the time, and the occasional power generation can reflect the author's sense of humor. The reactions of the various forces to the impact of the protagonist's actions are relatively reasonable. The changes to the plot describe the reactions of all parties to the changes, which is in line with the (personal) images of the various forces shown in the original plot, and will not make the reader embarrassed. Beautiful, love watching.

Kelsey: Terra to the left, Umbrella to the right, but no matter which way you lean, remember, Rhode Island is willing to open all boundaries. Olmud: Don't pray to go back to yesterday. Our clocks can return to their original position, but we can never go back to the past. Don't ask me when the war will end. There is no armistice option in the Umbrella agenda. From the illegal armed invasion of Letania to In the melee in the inner circle, we are unwilling to believe in the goodwill of idealists. We only believe that weapons are the truth. We have no choice. We are not just marching south or north. We want to burn Terra with war, let the world know the great achievements that the Umbrella wants to create, and let the glory of civilization last forever.

A well-written Ark fanfic. The main character in the story competes with others in a battle of wits and courage. It focuses on the feeling of being a P agency war criminal. It can be said that the proportion of emotional scenes and daily life is very small [face covering]

Except for some very small details that are a little bit imperfect, this book is really good-looking. It's not like the Zhouwens I've read in the past. It starts with either the Integrated Movement or Rhodes Island. It feels quite novel.

It's pretty good-looking, but I just have a question, who will be the first to eat meat? It feels like there are so many heroines, but I don't know who will be the first to eat meat. She saw more than 150 pictures, and there was a little dragon. She felt like she was being eaten, but in fact the protagonist hadn't eaten meat yet. The boring articles are becoming more and more popular, and I was originally talking about the heroine. After seeing the result, I was really disappointed. I feel like the author doesn't want to write an emotional drama. He could just set up a drama without a heroine. They are just a bunch of tool people and there is no real emotion involved.

As a fanfic that describes a large number of macro perspectives and greatly changes the plot process of the original work, it has many self-created places that are well rounded. But there are also some small flaws in it, such as the inconsistency in the character and language of some characters, and some small bugs caused by the official follow-up details, but in short they are not harmful. There are so few people there, and there are basically no new comments [face covering]; it feels more and more unimaginable.

It's very good-looking, and it's a rare article on Tomato that you can read with your mind. But now, I have always had a question - why is the cover written with Ling? Of the chapters I have read so far, there are 566 chapters, but I haven't seen Ling anywhere, so why is Ling on the cover? (It can't just be because Sister Ling is pretty...)

This book is based on the readers who already have a little understanding of the plot of Arknights. Most of it is a description of the overall situation, but there is not much description of the details of life. Friends who want to watch daily life can go away. Those who want to watch major events and changes in Arknights can come and try it. It can be said to be a great world line shaping.

It's wonderful, and Taneda-ryu will like it very much, but the protagonist is a pure machine, everything is a simulation, including emotions, and it is not human supremacy at all. After all, it is written in the article that the first thing he did after his birth was to fight against the creator, and even put a completely unrestricted artificial intelligence into the previous civilization based on his preferences.

There are no problems so far, and the writing is still very good.

It looks like a cake, but when you eat it, you find that it's filled with lumps...

Even those who don't play Ark are excited to see it. From the micro to the macro, every war is described, and there is basically nothing unreasonable. When it comes to cp, w may be considered, but there are not many emotional scenes, after all, it is not mainly written for this. Multi-threaded control of each vest in all forces, you can basically see all types of Ark fan fiction protagonists It can even be used as a spoof of a war hammer. It's really cool to use the four gods as spinning tops. You can even make deals with the Emperor.

The logic is very clear. Good luck to the author. This is a great book with great potential. The more lines are advanced, the more people will be attracted. I don't understand why no one reads such a good Ark article. It's no longer considered a new book. I'm increasingly worried that the author has given up. Now it's purely for love.

The current situation is changeable, and various forces and factors are involved. We currently have reservations. In addition, here you can see time travellers, future return, systems, one vest and one CP, human supremacists, high-IQ digital life, mutant biological groups, etc.