After Showing Up, I Discovered That My Online Date Was My Love Rival.

It's particularly good-looking. The ambiguous pull between the two in the early stage is very exciting. The only bad thing is that the male protagonist in the original plot seems to be with a man? ? Maybe there is a hidden secret? ? This makes me a little uncomfortable. Also, the system has 0 presence in the first 100 chapters. It's a bit annoying that the male and female protagonists start acting like monsters when they almost meet [facepalm], but the author's writing is so good that the bad points can be ignored. To be honest, I'm very disappointed. The first chapter was really good, but after more than 100 chapters, it was a complete mess. The male and female protagonists all collapsed. The author probably couldn't finish it at the end, so he ended it in a hurry... Lu Yao and Yizhu shouldn't have ended like this. At the end, I really didn't feel the deep feelings between the male and female protagonists, and there wasn't even a perfect ending. The four stars are because the previous plot was really disappointing because the author gave such a hasty ending.

I really liked this book. The author wrote it very well. The male protagonist and the female protagonist are sweet. But I really can't accept the key points every time (the male and female protagonists must stagger their meetings, and the system must come out to do this at critical times). Why is it four stars? It's because I like it very much in the beginning and always look forward to the update, but it always comes unexpectedly later.

This is the first novel I have read and read, and it is also the first time I have written such a long book review. How can I put it, the front content is okay, but at the end, I feel that the author has not filled in many loopholes. Since this is a romance time-travel novel, why do the G and S in the book not even have a basic intersection, and they all revolve around the cannon fodder female supporting role. If it is because of the butterfly effect of the female supporting role, it should not be wrong. Furthermore, the reasons for the system are not explained. What is the function of the system? Block the emotional line between the male and female protagonists? Later, if the male protagonist and female supporting character are together according to the general setting, won't the world of the novel collapse? Later, the male and female protagonists came into contact and misunderstood each other. How did the misunderstanding come about? From the perspective of the male protagonist G, the cannon fodder girl has been licking the man for four years, even earlier than their online dating. With the heroine's words, "I only like you", she forgives all these? Also later in this article, the heroine and the hero applauded for their love on the day they resolved their misunderstanding. What about the heroine's reserve? Except for the sweetness of online dating, there is basically no ink written about sweet love relationships after Benben. After reading it to the end, I still felt that the story should not have ended here. I have been following this article. The author was slower later on, so I kept saving it. Until this time, I finally managed to save more than 20 chapters. Are you going to tell me that it is finished? Although it is quite disappointing, I still like reading this article. The content written by the author is also very good. Although I don't know why it ended so hastily, I still understand! I hope the author will write better articles in the future~ (This is just a personal opinion, for reference only)

In fact, I didn't even read it for a few days, from one chapter to the end. The question type is quite good and the introduction is quite attractive. If the writing was better, I think this book would be a hit. From the beginning, the heroine's feelings for the hero were a bit inexplicably fast. It was obvious that the system was trying to pave the way for the next step with the mandatory tasks. It doesn't seem to have much effect later (laughing jpg.) I was slandered and framed three times in the middle, so I don't really need to write much. It wasn't until later that the male protagonist recognized the female protagonist. To be honest, I came here for the famous scene in the introduction. I fell in love online and found out that she was the school sweetheart, and there was also my forced love. Later on, the characters were a bit blurry, which made me feel a bit melancholy. In fact, there is still a lot of content that can be written. I don't read much about online dating topics on Tomato. If the plot can be set up in person without stretching the crotch, then it's great. Woman, you successfully caught my attention. I was in a hurry to finish until the end, and I was confused when I saw the three words "complete" in the full text. (The above is my opinion, don't argue, it's your fault) Things go counterproductive, the flowers are not so beautiful as soon as they bloom. Then I wish you all a Happy New Year! I also hope that the author can write better works.

Damn, I'm here to increase your rating, don't dislike it~ After all, a little adds up to a big thing. I really like novels and TV series with this kind of theme, but there are very few that suit my taste because most of them are anchors, e-sports players and the like. Moreover, I like the writing very much, and I also like the plot and character settings, so keep up the good work. I love it written in big letters~ I also play games myself, but I'm not very good at it. E-sports is my original sin. It's okay. I've recently started playing casual games again. Shinuan hehe. I hope they show up soon hahaha, I'm still looking forward to the reaction of the male and female protagonists.

First of all, the subject matter of this book is very attractive to me, because I am very keen on online dating, and I also like online dating in games. In the game, through the communication between voice, operation, skills, and communication between some activities, as well as the anxiety of reality, the writing is very real. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very sweet and innocent. . . . . . . My inability was my downfall, and I really enjoyed the storyline in the game world. After getting to know each other offline, the female protagonist seems to be such a cool and sober person, but when she meets the male protagonist, she seems to turn into a bitch. . . . . The male protagonist seems to be always angry and then brainwashing himself. . . . . The female protagonist is simply not too miserable. She is coerced by the plot to be the original male protagonist's dog licker, and at the same time she is unilaterally blocked by the male protagonist and becomes angry and becomes the male protagonist's dog licker. The female protagonist is too miserable. . . . .

It looks good at the beginning, and the game is also to my liking. But after the middle, there was a section where the heroine suddenly became particularly in love, which was completely different from what was said in the introduction, and almost made me angry to death. The author was also very naughty and satiated his appetite, but in the end it came to nothing, which made me deeply resentful. If you are looking at forced love, I can only say that there is no such aspect. Misunderstanding that paragraph is like changing the author's heart and misunderstanding the story. At the end, the ending was also rather rushed, and suddenly the pace was very fast, and then boom, it was the finale! The extra episode suddenly disappeared! Normally, shouldn't we have to continue writing... At the end, the heroine suddenly counterattacked, and after they were together, the hero suddenly had a wife, and it felt like the original characters had been reversed. But if you don't care about these and just think it's sweet, you can still watch this. I also like the heroine's character in the back, but it's a bit OOC compared to the previous one. I'd give it four stars. I think three stars is too low and I would like four stars to be higher. Four stars is still encouraging.

Because I really like it at the moment, it's not too much of an idol drama. I expressed my emotions, nervousness and wanting to meet but being afraid very well when I was about to meet. I was really nervous when they were about to meet and then separated. I wanted to see them meet but didn't want to. In the end, it was also close to reality. They didn't meet at once, hehe, but it made Lu Yao recognize Yi Zhu, which was great. It feels very real [shy][shy][shy] because it will always be like this in reality [send heart] I request the author to please give me more updates. If you like to read, please like [Top post][Top post][Top post]

I personally think it's very good👍🏻, but I think this book will be very long, so let me analyze it [Note] First, the heroine's family is currently unknown, the character of the male protagonist's parents is unknown, and the main character is unknown. Currently, it can be seen that the heroine is a negative second generation, and the male protagonist is a rich second generation. If you want to get married in the future, you must meet your parents [Learned] Second, this system is currently very hindering the relationship between the heroine and the hero. I personally think that the system will make big moves in the later stage, and the heroine is a book wearer. This is a very big suspense. There will probably be a lot of writing in the later stage. The third one is the emotional line between the male and female partners. So far, one is just on the right track, and the other seems to be in trouble. It seems that there is a female partner who has not appeared yet or has appeared. There is no role that will be useful later. Fourth, it is about the relationship between the male and female protagonists. In addition to the system, there are many hidden dangers in their emotional journey. The male protagonist seems to have a lot of love rivals. The female protagonist has love rivals but they are passed by the male protagonist. The main character only loves the female protagonist. In short, this book is very beautiful. The male and female protagonists are very popular in my heart. The author will update it soon.

The article I saw in the post today is so sweet. I really like reading this kind of article. When I opened the table of contents at chapter 50, I saw that the sky was falling. The author will update it quickly. Teacher, don't be tired and don't take a break [crying]

The game + a bit of reality in the first and middle part is really good to watch, and I couldn't stop watching it. But in the later stage, when the system suddenly appeared and asked the heroine to find someone else to confess her love, the plot suddenly took a turn for the worse. I felt that my IQ also took a turn for the worse, and the system thing It didn't come back, the existence of the system was redundant, and the title said about being forced to love, I guess it didn't exist. I feel like the author wrote it in a big way until the end and just wanted to finish it quickly [laughing and crying], but since the first and middle parts are really fun to watch, I still give it five stars.

Song Yizhu × Lu Yao Looks good, wow wow, I'm really looking forward to the ambiguous moment when the two of them are secretly poking at each other, wow wow, looks good, looks great, online games really give me a long-lasting love, a long-lasting love, but the male and female protagonists must have a deeper bond. In terms of reality, the description is superb. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are developed very naturally. The heroine's friends also have very distinct personalities. It's the first time I've seen an online game-themed movie. Nice. Come on, author

It's super pretty! Big cheers for the author! I just watched it today and it's very beautiful! It's so fragrant! ! ! The author greatly cheers for the update and is super looking forward to it [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] The ending was a bit unsatisfactory and felt like a coping style. The front looks good

It ended so suddenly! I feel like it's because the plot was a little too bad at the beginning and I don't know what to write. Then the comments are all negative. But I still like it and keep following the updates. I want to say to the author that in fact many people don't like the comments and have been silently supporting you quq. I hope you won't be affected by bad reviews next time you write a book. TvT

It's so good, it reminds me of the ancient game online dating dramas, hahaha, of course now there is also online dating in reality. So far, the book is still being updated, so it's not abusive at the moment. It's simply sweet to me❤

It's a sweet love story. The current enthusiasm of the male and female protagonist who just fell in love online is really real. I seriously doubt that the author has ever had an online relationship. The ambiguity before the online dating relationship is confirmed is just right [Like][Like]

It's good-looking, very sweet, very sweet like online dating. The two of them tried it out carefully, and the roommates helped with suggestions. I originally wanted to read the introduction to see how the male protagonist can coerce the female protagonist, but finally found that the male protagonist is a tsundere who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, so they secretly tried it out. Most of the time, the female protagonist takes the initiative, and the progress is very fast after the discovery. Unfortunately, the system forces the female protagonist to take the initiative to confess her feelings, and also allows the male protagonist to meet her every time.

It's so good, I look forward to the two of them breaking the window paper

Teacher, I came to you to confess my love (? Very nice! ! I really like the psychological descriptions of the protagonists, very vivid and interesting. Everyone has their own story arc, and although the ending is a bit rushed, it has been well described before! I really like that everyone can act like normal people instead of going crazy anytime and anywhere ( I like the image of the heroine very much - plump and voluptuous, so cute! Compared with the current homogeneous love-oriented novels, every time I read this book, the image of the heroine in my mind can be different, and it is really great to have her own cuteness! I also like the part about online games! I'm tired of Qing Yishui's League of Legends or chicken-fighting games, especially for someone like me who has never been exposed to these two games. The reading threshold is too high. The online games in the book are easy to get started and it is not difficult to read. I am really grateful. Anyway, everything looks good and I love it! I really like Wuwuwu - read everyone's discussion in the book review. Everyone speculates that the ending was rushed because of the negative comments in the comment section? If it is really because of this, teacher, your writing is really good, don't feel inferior! So what if it's different from the initial introduction, this version looks great too! I obviously have a lot of advantages, but not many people praise me. I'm really sad. I really hope to see a novel with a complete and confident ending from a teacher. Of course, if I can't do that, I won't force it! The teacher wrote so well! If you can, write a side story! I want to see the foreshadowing recycled and the male protagonist's past (´;ω;｀) [blowing kiss]

Damn, this book is so beautiful [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] I have rarely seen well-written and palatable online dating novels, and the online dating novels I have read before are all about two male protagonists. This is the first time I read this kind of book, [crying] [crying] [crying] Such a beautiful novel, I was just excited about it and it ended up [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] I punish you to publish the next book as soon as possible.

I really like this book. It's well written. It's very real and self-conscious like the online dating ones. I also like the characters and the plot is also very good. I've never followed a real serialized novel for so long. I've been waiting for the update every day. I didn't sleep until 11 o'clock in the evening at school, so I read one or two chapters and fell asleep. Hehe, it's not enough, but there's nothing I can do about it. It's so good. Hehe, come on! ! [Shy][shy]

So pretty! ! I don't understand why it's so beautiful and has such a low rating. I like both the male and female protagonists very much! Everyone, hurry up and come see it! ⭐⭐⭐The views of male and female protagonists are very normal! (The most important thing) They all have their own unique character characteristics! The male and female protagonists are ambiguous online, but they don't know each other offline. Even if they meet offline, they are very measured and make people feel comfortable watching them. ⭐⭐The emotional line is very delicately written, and the relationship is gradual. There is no scene where you fall in love suddenly, it is very life-like and daily! It doesn't make me feel out of place. (It's like looking in the mirror. I feel like I would act the same way when encountering the same thing!) ⭐The title contains online dating, it is really about e-sports! ! (Introducing the glory of the full-time master, and the dream of the world) ⭐⭐The current content is a bit sadistic, but I really enjoyed watching this sadistic one! Not that kind of mindless abuse! ! Around the main line! ⚠️I like to read light-hearted/shady/sweet stories, but I don't like to read sadistic ones. It's best for the male and female protagonists to live happily for the rest of their lives! But this cruelty is just right, I really love watching it! ! 🌸🌸This article is one that has always stuck in my heart. I have never had to wait for an update. Thank you to the author! Update soon! So pretty!

It's very interesting... But I didn't see enough. It felt like it ended too hastily. Did the strategy mission end just like that? Is there any extra story? But I wish you all a Happy New Year! [Adoration][Adoration]

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that can make me so excited. The ambiguity and random thoughts between Ayao and Zhuzi are very real. They are just like the online dating I imagined. The little collisions and pulls between two hearts made me jump up and down. I hope it won't be too cruel later on! ! ! ! A child's little heart cannot bear the abuse. It's highly recommended. Come and see it! So can the author make more updates? Every time I open a chapter, it makes my heart feel cold [cry][cry][cry]

Super pretty, a bit like the charming one with a slight smile [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

I just finished reading it, it's quite interesting, but sometimes when describing the heroine, I feel like she's just dumb [face covering] [face covering]

The online dating between the heroine and the hero was so addicting to me that I felt like I was back in online dating. The plot is super cool

The author's writing style is super delicate. The grassroots heroine slowly grows up along the way. The gentle and overbearing boss abides by male virtues and even takes care of the baby himself. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is really interesting and heartwarming. It is worth watching.

This book is so charming and makes me smile. I miss you so much.

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