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@ Yangzhiganlu ah, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, great

There are still some flaws. For example, I inexplicably arranged a cuckold for more than 20 years and then got slapped a few times. I felt that it didn't fit with the character of the protagonist. I really can't figure out the resurrection of Mingmei. If she dies, she will die. Maybe there will be arrangements for the sisters to meet again later. But until the latest chapter, I still don't understand why the resurrection is important (no one mentioned it). Apart from these few flaws, I feel that it is still pretty good at the moment (up to the latest chapter). It must depend on everyone's taste. I hope the author will think twice before writing.

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Emm I gave my own book a five-star rating [laughing evilly]

A very, very wonderful book, both in terms of character creation and plot interpretation. The world view is very large, and there are also original adaptations of the cases and the appearance of original characters. The main plot also runs through the entire story, and it is really both sweet and sharp. Author, let me ask you, did MiHoYo turn you into this [laughing] The shortcomings are typos and grammatical errors [Thinking]

Through the audience's guesses, the communication between systems and the exchange of information between other characters, the identity of the protagonist emerges faintly, and he is ingenious and creates a unique path in the second creation of Conan The multi-system setting enables the protagonist to have extraordinary abilities and prevents the protagonist from being dominated by his family. Although there are shadows of Shuangwen, it can be read as a semi-Shuangwen. At the same time, the plot promotion of Shirley's emotional line has similar settings in other works, but the dual-system symbiosis gives novel features. But it is undeniable that the explanation of the protagonist's background and the digging of many pitfalls are undeniable. It has not been explained clearly. There are some doubts and incomprehensibility about some plots. In addition, the background is too huge and it is not easy for the author to fill it in the later stage. I hope the author can make corrections according to his own ability. The huge background can naturally make the development of the plot diverse, but Conan is inherently realistic. , Adding excessive unrealistic elements, or adding a single target, will fundamentally shift the world of Conan. Whether Conan and others will be strengthened in the future, or the protagonist will have to go back to the world of Conan, although it will make the abilities of the plot characters more balanced, it will affect the fundamentals of the world. Although there is an unrealistic existence like Koizumi Hongzi, Yang Tian is only mentioned in the protagonist's response to the demise of the Suffering Cult. So is Koizumi Hongzi not as good as Yang Tian? The combat power value is too collapsed. Although the protagonist's behavior has not tipped the balance of the world's combat power value from the current point of view, we still have to make sure that the balance has been tilted. This work is the only one among Conan's works, but this uniqueness cannot cover up his shortcomings. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. The success or failure of this book is not mine alone. It is undeniable that this book has given some inspiration to other Conan authors to a certain extent, but I still emphasize: the huge background is certainly attractive to explore, but the huge background cannot be separated from the origin of the world. Conan should be Conan, not Conan.

It looks good. It seems to be a little sweet at the moment, but I read in the comments that the author writes about knives. I hope it's not too invasive, just a small knife is enough, and it's best not to have a knife. Finally, the quick version is not enough to read at all.

No matter how I give it five stars, there is one more thing. Is there really a knife?

Nice! Nice! Because it's so beautiful, I feel like it's still not enough. Although the author updates 6,000 words every day, it's still not enough!

Advantages, good-looking Disadvantages, short Also, I want a protagonist of S Five stars, full!

It's good-looking and awesome. I just want to know when two people will confess and how secretive they are. I still want to see the confession scene. Emmmm, how should I put it? I can still understand it in the front, but it feels more and more inexplicable in the back. Suddenly a person appears, all of them are Riddlers, first watch, second watch, inexplicable. Someone asked before whether these incomprehensible movies will affect the viewing, I remember your reply, it will not affect the viewing,? Why don't you look at these chapters now? Someone will appear today, and someone will appear tomorrow. There is no foreshadowing at all. 6 Are you still a knife writer? ? ? ? Slip away, this book has no connection with me [vomit]

Author, why did you become reincarnated? I ******** update so slowly. If you don't look at other authors, it looks good, but the update is too slow. I, the author, ********

Nice! Give it five stars [you taste it carefully]

The best episode

......... It's okay, I hope I don't have a knife🔪

Incredibly good-looking

Why is the update so slow? The author should update it three times a day, otherwise it won't be enough to read.

I like this kind of author the most. Chapter 6000+ [laughs]

The author's writing is really good. The more than 20 chapters written by others are almost too few compared to the 50 chapters written by others. Please update more.

Personally I think it looks good, but it's a little short

I finished reading the current chapter in one go. There are only two words: Haokan [Adoration]

Good writing, clear thinking, good reading, love reading

It's really beautiful haha ​​😆[Please update][Admiration][Blow kiss]

From the perspective of an old Ke scholar, it is a good book. I hope the author will like it more quickly. After seeing this, I regretted giving it five stars. Originally, for this type, there should have been more barrage, audience reaction and the protagonist's interaction. These are what everyone should like to see more. However, the author added a lot of private settings. Originally, it was okay to add private settings, as long as it looked good, but the author deliberately made the content large, the background widened, and the space occupied was larger, which would make it seem a bit cumbersome. Anyway, I personally don't like it. All in all, I hope the novice author can write better [Blow kiss]

I rub it. No wonder why the style and plot always feel a bit familiar to me. It turns out that you, the old thief, have opened another book.

It's very beautiful, but it's a pity that the author doesn't dress like a woman [cry][cry][cry] @ Yangzhi Ganlu, nectar, let's dress up in women's clothing, I really want to see it! ! ! [Shy] (As long as you @ah's women's clothing)

Can you take that Mr. Toad in?

It's very interesting, but the previous one was updated very slowly. I have kept it for a long time. The other Conan has updated more than 80 chapters, but you have only updated a dozen chapters. Alas, I hope the author can work harder and take a few stimulants to make it faster. Please You are the laziest author I have ever seen. You have been holding back for so long just to write out a chapter. Wow, wow, I have been waiting so hard!

So the ending of White Bird and Three Toads? , Leaving one star for conclusion. Okay, thank the author for clarifying the confusion. I'll just take my time and look forward to this process, and hope it doesn't end badly or become a eunuch.

It's very interesting. Good luck to the author. I hope you can stick with it!