Star Dome Railway: the Vidyajyādhisattva's Family Has a Fox

We repair, we manage, we record, we are CY Authority! The world record of this side is the second sub-world of Bengtie Main World and the second smallest world. Protagonist: Huo Huo, Bai Qing [Protagonist profile (visible to personnel of level four and above)] Bai Qing, male, a member of the Vidyadhara family, identity: (visible to people of level five and above) Comments: A unique Vidyadhara family, to be seen Huo Huo, female, fox tribe, identity: (visible to level 5 and above personnel) Comments: A coward with a big tail Overall evaluation Combat: E (one star) Philosophy: A (four stars) Sweetness: SS (five stars) Punishment: SSS (five stars) Comment: It is a good place for cross-dimensional CP companies to develop, and it is also a wonderland. Although there are some battles, the combat index is low, which is conducive to tourism. Suggestion: If you encounter a Vidyadhara named Bai Qian accompanied by a green-haired fox girl, please send him to the Shence Mansion immediately. If you are defeated, please contact the Dimensional Defense Team immediately.

I just discovered that this is the author of the book "Rain Addiction" [face covering]. Readers who have high requirements for emotional lines and restoration will like it very much. The plot is smooth and clear, making it very comfortable to watch. Huo Hao's timid but tenacious character is accurately grasped, and there is a lot of sugar. The knife is not obtrusive and is well integrated into every detail. It is clearly describing the current daily life, but it also writes about a person's ups and downs in the past.

Let's talk about the advantages first. 1. The writing is good, inheriting the consistent writing style of the previous book, and the language is coherent. 2. The character creation is reasonable and harmonious. Even if you have a conversation with the game character, it will not appear OOC or do something that is not in line with the character. 3. There are also many thought-provoking topics in this work, which is something that most other fanfics do not have. Now let's talk about the disadvantages: 1. There may be some delays or too much water in some places. 2. The overall pace is relatively slow, which may cause some readers to give up because of the whole process, the slow and long description and the plot development that cannot be seen for a long time. This continues the old problem of the previous works, that is, the overall pace is very slow, and there is no particularly eye-catching highlight. 3. The subsequent plot development is so bland that people can guess the general direction of the subsequent development plot and other things at a glance, and they can definitely guess it. 4. A question that is not a problem. I am not sure if this is a problem. I just want to say it. I feel that the development of the emotional drama between Huo Huo and Bai Zhan is a bit awkward. There are too many scenes and plots of Huo Huo blushing, which makes people feel a bit weird. I personally think that the development and changes of love lines require a process to change slowly. However, thinking about Huo Huo's mind and his overly precocious character, I am not sure whether this is my personal problem or a problem with the description method? ———————————————— To sum up, this is a work worth savoring. Although it is a little slow and a little too boring, the development of your emotional drama still has some processes that are worth pondering. It is indeed a rare spiritual food for people to enjoy a little entertainment after dinner. To be honest, in fact, I want to give this work a score of three and a half or four points, but every score is very precious and important to every author, so I still give the author full marks. I can tell that the author is writing a story very seriously. This is a rare and valuable spirit. I think both his work and his spirit deserve full marks.

A very good book, but the pace is a little slow. However, this should be considered a leisurely style unique to everyday writing. I was discussing novels with my friend before, and he said he didn't understand what the ordinary novel was about, and he didn't know what the specific main line was. I thought about it and told him it was growth, but I always felt it was a bit inappropriate. Looking back now, it turns out that I forgot to add the word process. To borrow the words of the author's previous Lonely Rock fan: "Growth is never a vector. It's not that I am confident and more confident, but that I am calm and more calm; it is not that I am more confident than anyone else, or that I am calmer than anyone else. If there is no growth, I think I just see it, see it again, and see more." What we see in daily novels is a certain period of life experienced by the protagonists of the novel, their growth, and our own growth. When we follow their perspective and look at this daily life that is not our own, what are we thinking about? Maybe it's envy; maybe it's doubt; maybe it's not something I've thought about, but I just think it's great. However, by thinking this way, we may have "grown up" a little unconsciously. Okay, having said so much, I almost forgot to write down my thoughts on this book. It's really a sin. The following are my thoughts: Empty means that there is nothing in the vessel, which is the so-called empty shell. Bai Qing was born together with the original Dragon Lord, but he only had the appearance of a dragon and no corresponding authority. He was just an empty shell. As a natural self-destructor, Bai Qing's body would gradually lose consciousness and eventually become an empty shell. With the loss of Bai Qing's memory, everything related to the name "Bai Qing" is disappearing. After about a dozen reincarnations, the meaning of this name will no longer exist. "Bai Qing" just like the literal meaning, has become an empty shell. Recently, I was listening to "Masaburo" by Eru Sika, and suddenly I had a good idea. If the flame that symbolizes Bai Qian's self-understanding is shrouded under a shell called nothingness, slowly consuming little oxygen, then Bai Heng is a sudden strong wind, leaving some cracks in the shell and transporting a little air into the small space inside the shell. The flame that was about to be extinguished survived for a while. Then, Huo Huo's company was like a gentle breeze, carrying the fragrance of grass, transporting oxygen to the flames along the cracks. Bai Qian is unfortunate, he has encountered various injustices since he was born; but he is also extremely lucky, with people like Bai Heng and Huo Huo thinking about him. I think that after a long, long time, Huo Hao will eventually leave, and he will also forget the name "Bai Qing". Although this makes people feel sad, it is not regrettable. After all, as "Bai Qing", he will still walk with this little fox for a long time. The following is a small theater I wrote (note: first person): "Master, it's time to get up." What came to my ears was a somewhat familiar voice. When I opened my eyes, I saw a familiar ceiling. In a daze, I seemed to see a touch of white, but it disappeared in the blink of an eye. "Master, it's time to get up." It was still the familiar voice just now. He sat up from the bed, rubbed the little guy's head beside the bed, and then went straight to wash up. … After breakfast, I somehow wanted to find a place to lie down or sit down. "Master, look, it's snowing heavily outside!" "This is the first snowy day this year." Looking at Huo Huo's cotton-padded jacket, I fell into deep thought. The clothes seem a bit too small. When was the last time you bought clothes for her? I don't know when, Huo Huo has been looking at me, and his eyes seem to be shining. "Okay, let's go play." After getting my permission, Huo Huo ran out, the tail of the spirit fire swaying behind him. After all, he was still a child, and his playful nature is still hard to change. Speaking of which, why doesn't the tail come out? Does Suiyang also have to hibernate? "Ding ding ding ding ding~" the jade sign rang, it was Jing Yuan calling. "Hey, Lao Bai, long time no see." "Didn't you come to my place some time ago?" "That was three months ago." For some reason, I suddenly lost the desire to speak. "Anyway, I will go to your place in about half an hour. In addition, Huo Huo's clothes must be too small. I bought her new winter clothes and will take them with me later." "Thank you." Looking at Huo Huo wearing clothes that didn't fit so well and making a snowman in the yard, I also felt a little guilty. "That's it, I'm done." "Yeah." So, look for Lin Yuanchun at home. Speaking of which, it seems that a few days ago, Taiwei spilled the last bag of Linyuan Chun at home on the ground. Well, no wonder it didn't come out today. With this in mind, I called Jing Yuan using Yuzhao. "What's the matter?" "Remember to bring some tea." Somehow, I suddenly want to see snow. I walked out of the house and ignored Yuzhaoli Jingyuan's accusations against me for eating and taking things. "Master, look!" Huo Huo saw me coming out and pointed at the snowman she built, looking like she wanted to praise me. "Very good." Two snowmen, one big and one small, stand side by side, like a pair of masters and disciples.

I have read it for so long that I forgot to rate it. The writing is good, but the plot is flat, but I like it. The interaction between the protagonist and the characters is just right, and the character's personality is not broken. At the same time, the slow plot conclusion shows that the number of chapters is indispensable, and there are many places that can be written. There is a lot of potential. At the same time, the current relationship is biased towards father and daughter, so there is no intimacy complex, but the author controls the changes in the plot very well, and can It is easy to understand at a glance, and there are also foreshadowings of the protagonist's background. In addition, it is said in the book that Huo Huo's lifespan is not enough to support the protagonist until the end of his life, so there should be a knife in the future. In addition, the author has checked the information, which shows that he is in a rigorous state with the book. In addition, the author's own writing style should be able to score 9 points. In short, the book is good and the writing is good, so the author should not be a eunuch.

The single female protagonist Huo Huo, should I say that Laoyu really likes this kind of social fear × aloofness, right? [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua] The daily sweetness is beyond the limit, and it is a redemptive style that I like. Bai Qing redeems the abandoned Huo Huo, and Huo Huo also saves her in turn. He is about to be swallowed up by nothingness. In terms of writing, he is still very good. It is a little bit of a memory knife, but the plot is absolutely amazing. I can only say that among the single female protagonists in Star Iron, this book will definitely be ranked in the top three in my opinion [Top post][Top post][Top post]

This book is indeed slow to pick up in the early stages, but the emotional foreshadowing is obvious. I love reading it, so keep up the good work!

A nice, slow-paced book. Single heroine, pure love. Let's talk about the advantages first, 1. The characters are full, at least they haven't collapsed. A small amount of private equipment 2. Low entry threshold 3. The male protagonist is strong and not a turtle Disadvantages 1. In the early stage, there was still a shadow of the previous book. Although some people reported that it has been changed a lot since then, it is still a bit [face covering] 2. There is less sugar. We all know that it is difficult to write characters with little humanity, so they are average. 3. If there are many authors, I feel bad when reading them consecutively. Because there is a bit of emotional disconnect between the upper and lower chapters. Fortunately, it doesn't count towards the total word count of the chapter, so it doesn't hurt.

Second brush. During the first playthrough, I mostly paid attention to the daily lives of Lao Bai and Huo Huo. Now, during the second playthrough, it is the past of Yunshang Wuxiao that I will never forget. The sorrow of the past is mixed with the joy of the present. There is joy in the sorrow, and sadness in the joy. It is unclear what kind of emotion it is. Even if I put down my phone and close my eyes, I can still see six people standing side by side and then falling apart. Wuxiao on the Cloud is no longer just a plot in the game, but a living person. I am like a rememberer, witnessing this story, remembering this story, and experiencing this story, immersed in it. I don't know what I want to express, maybe I just feel it. All in all, this is an unforgettable book [got it]

This is the third book. It is as delicate as ever. It is not just a simple novel. Although the male protagonist is invincible, he is just a baboon without the female protagonist. The description of daily emotions is very delicate and profound. Finally, I wish the author a speedy recovery.

It's okay, it's considered one of the top Beng Tie fandoms in 🍅. The character setting is relatively consistent with the original work, the original character's personality is always on the same line, and the plot development is consistent with the character's personality without being too abrupt. Anyway, it took me three days to read all the current chapters, which was quite smooth, probably because the author has already written three books. From the perspective of fan fiction, the most important thing is to adhere to the original work. The content of this book based on the original work is quite similar, and I was stunned for a while. In short, Tiantian fan romance novels really made me so high [Top post][Top post][Top post] Also, no eunuchs! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Real evaluation, it is really a better romance novel (if there is a better one, maybe I haven't found it), the pace is fast (for me), the characters have distinct personalities, Huo He Tui can read it (not that other people can't read it), and there is no very abrupt plot, which is good. I don't know why I stopped updating later, it feels a bit strange [Chigua]

It's very interesting, the plot connection and character creation are very good, but there is still a fatal flaw... I hope the author can actively listen to suggestions and correct them. The shortcoming is that the update is not enough. I hope the author can update it tomorrow with no less than 100,000 words. Don't force me to ask you.

It's not bad, it's really slow and not boring, and I have to say that the author's imagination is quite big. According to other authors' words, it's probably about Omphalos. But in this novel, the plot of the fairy boat seems to account for 4/5, and Pinoconi is 1/5. In short, it's a good-looking, pure love novel. Unfortunately, I didn't see the protagonist and Huo Huo get married in the end. The ending seems to be a relationship between boyfriend and girlfriend. They kiss and hug each other [Like]

Good writing can often infiltrate the soul. Whether it is poetry, drama, prose, or novels, they all contain an emotional core. As for this book, it can be seen that the author was very careful in the conception. Although I think I am a person who is not very good at making reviews, this book still touched me deeply. The emotions expressed in this book are a little different from other types of books. The emotions he writes are more delicate than any other type of book, and the author is also very good at using the environment to set off the psychology of the characters. Although sometimes the description of the environment seems a bit abrupt, the effect of setting off the psychology is very good. It can be seen from the delicate emotions expressed in this book that the author is a very delicate person. It can also be seen from the preface of each chapter that the author is also very cute. The author integrates his inner delicacy and loveliness into the words, making the cold words contain a trace of warmth. The Huo Huo written in this book is exactly the same as the Huo Huo in my mind. Hello, some of the backgrounds written in this book are also the same or similar to the backgrounds of the original game. The author spent a lot of effort to figure out the characters' minds and think about the background. This is a rare thing in fan fiction. The author of fan fiction only needs to include the background of the story, but the person who actually writes the background of the story has much more to consider. Okay, having said so much, I can sum it up in one sentence. Very beautiful, very beautiful, super beautiful! Very beautiful, very beautiful, super beautiful! Very beautiful, very beautiful, super beautiful! Very beautiful, very beautiful, super beautiful! Also, this book is somewhat slow-paced, which not only meets the needs of daily entertainment, but also allows you to feel some delicate emotions from it. Therefore, those who read Shuang novels should try not to choose this book, and those who read harem novels should not even think about it. For those who like to read about unrequited love or secret love, and go in both directions, I highly recommend it! Highly recommended! Highly recommended! Highly recommended!

Not much to say, you will know the reading time after reading it. After reading it three times, I especially like the last 150 or so chapters. I think it is the best among all the Bengtie fanfics. I hope the author can update more. I want to read Bai Qing's Zai [smile] (emphasis on the last sentence) I read it again, I don't know how many times, it seems to be the 4th time. This time I played Bengtie and got a better understanding of the characters in it. I also know how much the author paid attention to details when writing this book (it can be called a humanoid think tank). Good reviews, must be good reviews. (That's all I want to say. This book can be said to be one of the top basics in Bengtie. I hope the author can produce food as soon as possible. Of course, health is the first priority [love] [love] [laugh]) @gui (Come on, Laoyu!)

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Chapter 9 has been read. I feel that the author is very serious and has a good attitude. For this reason, I am willing to give it five stars. Unfortunately, the writing style is a bit not to my liking. Some random thoughts have a strong connection with the original case, and you need to understand the plot of the original case in depth to understand what you are writing. Moreover, even if you understand it, you will inevitably feel that the protagonist has a strange feeling of being superior and complaining for no reason. To be honest, the image of the protagonist created by the author does coincide with the implicit attribution in the article - "ruthless", but the actual perception is not enhanced by the cleverness of the plot, and it does feel a bit boring and difficult to empathize with. Maybe the plot has too few exciting points and is a bit bland. If you want to create an image through daily life, the writing skills required are very high. But regardless of my personal opinion, this book is worth reading.

It's so beautiful. Family members, don't worry about the low rating. That's because there are few people. If you have the right people, the rating will definitely go up. I guarantee it with my more than 3,000 hours of reading time. It's really beautiful [crying][crying][crying]

Hehe, it is relatively slow to heat up, but it keeps heat very well. The Huo Huo is very cute and the writing style is very vivid. It's awesome [love] [love] [love]

Of course, Yu's writing style is not great, but it's so short that I almost cried. It's not enough to read. But it seems that Lao Yu's transition scenes are becoming less and less [thinking], I hope Lao Yu can write more [blowing kiss].

Let's review it. So far, it's not bad. It's slow but very comfortable to watch. You can also see the changes in the protagonist's personality. The progress of the relationship is also very comfortable to watch. There is no stomachache. The story of the protagonist is also slowly being drawn out. The descriptions of various metaphors are also very vivid. The scenery is also well written. No wonder the three books are above nine points. They are worth reading.

The author's writing style is superb and pure love for writing. The single heroine is young Luo Huohao. The character and image are very consistent with the impression. Moreover, the plot is so exciting, and the personal setting further promotes the plot. There are very few single female protagonists, Huo Huo, which is typical~

It's very beautiful. Don't be a eunuch. Please, I want to see Huo Huo grow up. I want to see Fa Tang.

This book ended suddenly, which caught me a little off guard, but overall... The characters in this book are very well-developed, and there are no problems with the characters. When it was finished, I had a feeling that it was still unfinished. Now, I just feel a wave of emotions surging in my mouth, but in the end I can't say anything. I think... This must be a good book, right?

Good-looking means better-looking writing. It is very good. Can the author write more, for example, shake out the saved manuscripts and update 50 chapters in one day? In this case, I will be extremely grateful to the author! PS will give you gifts.

Good book Nearly half of the chapters are stories before the main plot of Luofu begins. The author is the reincarnation of a think tank and is quite rigorous. The main characters are well established. The branch plots of the supporting characters are also well written, but the number of branches is a little less. Maybe it is because there are not many supporting characters (in a physical sense). The dog food is sweet and Huo Huo is cute. Rating: 4.7/5, I don't give it 4.8 Because it's a fanfic and overall it's a dog food novel.

The long plot in the early stage is well controlled. When I first saw the title, I thought it was Huo Huo raising a pet, but I didn't expect that the protagonist adopted Huo Huo.

Wai Ruigude is very beautiful, but the writing is good, the quantity is really small, and Huo Huo is really cute [laughing]

Very good. The bright line of the plot is Bai Qing's warm daily life with Huo Huo after he became the judge of the Ten Kings Division. The secret message is Bai Qing's gradually clearer memory of his past in Xianzhou as a different species of light holder and his life with Yun Wu. There is currently too little plot in Huo Huo in Collapse of Iron. The future direction of the plot can only be expected to be the author's imagination.