崩原：我靠穿越邀角色入壶！

The protagonist is a boy who uses Sora as a reference. The author's writing style is more feminine (if you mind, you can ignore it) For me currently: The plot is smooth (but the protagonist and the system are not well adjusted at the beginning, which affects the perception; but it will not harm the host) There is no obvious sense of inconsistency in the character settings of the original game (I didn't feel it anyway) The best reading experience is [Place Gold Chapter] and [Kakawasha Chapter], maybe because the participation is relatively complete and the characters are distinct. Finally, is it possible to stably update two articles a day😆😆😆

It's very beautiful. I was fascinated by the whole thing. The two men are really good. At first, I thought it was sand gold. I didn't expect that there are all lines and single lines. But why is there no Jing Yuan? I remember that the protagonist went to Luofu after Pinoconi. At that time, Jing Yuan was not right with the protagonist, and he could also enter the pot. No It's okay to cross other lines. There may be some problems in the timeline, because some people passed through in the future, but got the pot in the past. However, if these are forced to be explained, it is still passable. In fact, I am more looking forward to no cp, so that other characters can be pulled into the pot, and Bai Heng can be pulled in at the beginning.

The logic is clear and there are no flaws. It carefully shapes the growth of the protagonist and the image of the supporting characters, and there are no repetitive mistakes similar to "the inner demons have been solved in the previous chapter, and the inner demons reappeared in the next chapter." The plot is also good, and it was a pleasure to watch. It is one of the only five five-star reviews I have read among the more than 40 original iron fics I have read.

Nice. There are a lot of foreshadowings, but there are also complete recyclings. The main characters involved are Sha Jin, Ying Xing, Navilet, Zhongli, and many others. The main highlight is the characteristics of all. Placer gold and small fish are considered the best pair of CPs. Anyway, it's good to read, but the emotional transition could have been better written, a bit abrupt, and the intersection between the future and the past in the text is also worth reading. Yes, it looks good, so I went on to watch it.

In fact, if you give me some suggestions, it's all original. The one with a higher selling point can also be based on the author's wishes, but it's still very beautiful! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][OK]

I like it, love to read it, read more, the author will update more, the little fish is so cute, hee hee😁.

It's pretty good, come on

Great author, come on, it looks good

If you like it, please update more. If someone chases you, don't give up [send your heart][send your heart]

It looks good. Is the author just a sweet writer?

I finally found a particularly good book, but it turned out to be very short. Come on ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

Absolutely, reading this book is the blessing of my life

It's quite interesting, but it's a bit short and there are no female characters. (I want to see the friendship between the female character and the protagonist and the sense of CP between the male characters.) Personally, don't worry about it. What about the traveler! Where have you gone?

Super - super pretty! Love it! Isn't there anyone who doesn't understand the pleasure of reading these strange books? [Laughing evilly] Anyway, I feel pleasure.

I love watching it. Come on, come on [flying kisses]

Very interesting, with a male protagonist + multiple male protagonists. Recommended

Madam, I am thirteen years old! This is my trumpet

It's so fun, I praise the joy, but don't be forced to travel through time by Aha [laughing]

Like! But it's a little too long for me.

Xiaoyu is very good. He has grown from a simple and easy-to-cheat college student to a self-sufficient person with many bonds.

Nice! (This simple language expresses all my feelings)

Although it looks a bit weird in the early stage, I think it looks good in the later stage (๑•.•๑) After thinking about it, I'll give it five stars. ໒꒰ྀིっ˕ -｡꒱ྀི১

Come on! Very nice

Very well written, very beautiful

It's so to my liking, please give it a thumbs up from the author! !

It looks great, come on. I think it should be popular.